MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 84

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Hw dare that b*******d Brij put wrong eye on Geet😡 Wow MSK filled Geet's mang. Then All come in hospital. Maan decide to take Dev in his home. But Geet left from there bcz she has the responsibility of her dad. But Meera said Maan to take Geet home. Maan angry on Geet so when Meera told to do a proper marriage with Geet he said no and go from there. Let see what will happen in MAANEET's life.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fmaaneet

ap isko kab update karo gye ?

jaldi hia dear 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Maan went to his jim all this , he want to run away and that past and that past is in front of him in face of geet wh o is love ...jo uske family na hone ki wajah bhi hai , us bastered ke wajse maang to bhar di usne geet but can he is ready to accept her ...

He found his father face , pinky face , adi cry on pin bhoolnky death he know adi kya khoya hai us din , love ke sath friend bhi ...ye sab kuch bhoolna itna aasan hai

But why u fill her maang ku band diya is bandhan main jiska koi future hi nahi hai ku maan ku

He don't feel any pain with his exercised he want to punishment more and more punishment ,at last he fail down on floor ...

Other side meera took geet in other room , and geet change in other dress she also lost in past her one sentence and destroy so many life , adi maan , meera di all r suffering because of her she is reason behind this ... some tear fall from her eyes and she don't get when she sleep in sitting position near bed on floor it self

Maan retuning from jeem and saw light on room he don't know that is geet room he entered and stop on door itself she sleeping on floor in sitting position itself ,maan in delima jagau ya nahi , lakin all night aise ,upon that she don't lock door also kya hoga iska ...itne sare servent hai ghar main

At last he went near her , and saw dry tear on her face , it means she is crying before sleeping he feel tug in his heart

Her tear alwyes make him wick ,he closed his eyes and took her in arm ... and she mummer wo baba bole wo poison le lene aur ma ko bhi ...main ...main wo nahi bolna chaati thi di aur aur ...

Maan know that is not geet thinking but baba and pinky death damage their relation behind any hope he put geet on bed and cover with duvet and closed her door but he called meera and say her stay in geet room and say her in cold voice tale her that don't sleep without closing door , meera Nodded like obedient child but in mind she is doing bhangra

It means maan went to her room that make meera happy ,

But next moment she make tense face she say wo maan dev ke pass bhi to koi hona chiye na ...

Maan reply main so jaunga dev bhai ke pass u go

Meera kya duffer bhai mila hai khud geet se dur rehaega aur muje dev se dur rakhega kya arrangement hai wah

Poor girl went to geet room and maan entered in dev room ,where dev who waiting for meera for sleep get shock with maan entry ye sala kya kar raha hai yaha ...(wife brother as sala ) he thought in mind

Poor boy want to sleep with meera but ye ...

Maan ask bhai do u want any thing

Dev in mind yes your sis , and nodded in no and try to sleep

Next mrning geet when open her eyes found herself on bed cover with duvet and meera di sleeping with her ,she get confused how this happen she thought for while just than meer open her eyes and look geet confused face and say in strin voice your husband put u on bed and give me summons to sleep with u because u don't closed door of room from inside

Geet eyes winded in shock maan put her here ...she feel her cheek turn red ...

Meera say ha ha shy kar lo hum dono ko to alag sona pada tere husband ke wajse thou she say in slow voice but geet heard that , she slap her self in mind kya geet tu bhi ...wo bhi na kuch samjte hi nahi

She say main baath lake aati hu ,meera nodded in yes and both went to their early morning ruting before maan reach to BF meera make pooja from geet of kitchen ...and serve BF to all just than geet guru baba dagadu apeer in morning in with big smile and say hi to everyone dev and maan nodded in yes

Dagadu saw sleepy eyes of dev and meera and say so our di and jiju itne jaldi kise uth gaye muje to laga that muje app loga uthana hoga , wo kya hai u met after so strong

Geet caught with dagadu word so strong now maan look surprises look to dev meera , who avoiding all gaze ,he closed her dam he ruin their first night after so much day they meet and I dam , now what

Dagadu watching maan expression keenely he get something is wrong for change topic he ask geet ,bhabhi kuch galat bola kya apun ne ...geet nodded in yes wo u say strong ,but u have to say so long

Dagadu make such face and say kya bhabhi apunki English ki class lengi kya please please wo kya hai na apunko bhi ye Mr khurana jaise banana hai ek dam kadak , ekdam fast English bolna hai shutup shut up shut up aise wali

Meera playfully slap Dagadu head and say chal natuaki bas kar aur nasta khatam kar jaldi se

All laugh on Dagadu face ...maan took her lappy and stand for going to office

Meera - BF to thik se karo maan

Maan - mera ho gaya di

Meera give sad look to maan ...who reach to door before meera another word , geet feel chocked with emotions ek waqt tha jab usko muskarne ke liye reason nahi lagta tha and now aisa lagta hai smile se uska koi rista hi nahi hai

She stand from her sit and went for office , dev meera found them self miserable with their condition two imp person of their life going away from each other from, love from their happiness

Dagadu went near dev and took his hand in his hand and mummer itna sad mat ho thoda time lagega lakin sab kuch thik ho jayega bhiya

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
why man
why marry her
what a waste
i get what she did was wrong
then why marry her
and dude really screwing up meer and dev first night
oh man
what did he do
he has changed and wont be easy to make him same
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Posted: 10 years ago
Merry Xmas! Thanks 4 updating! superb emotional update! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update loved it poor maan he marry geet but not ready feel bad 4 geet she did 4 her parent meera happy he went geet room he still care 4 her lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part Mahi... Maan na to us we dour ja sakata ha na hi pass asakata hai...past incidents made him stone...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part mahi
maan is angry on himself death of his father nd pinky cms infront of him nd he askng himself y he filld geet's maang
other side geet is same condition nd cryng nd slept der only😭
maan saw geet nd her tears nd made her 2 sleep on d bed nd orderd meera 2 sleep wit geet😲
bechare meera nd dev who were waitng 2 be wit each other coz of dis duffer maan😆
nw dagdu came wit his very gd English😉
meera nd dev r sad coz maaneet r runng away 4m each other😭
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mahi...
maan in dilema one side his love other his past dad and sis death...
he is really breaking from inside...
usse khud samajh nahi arraha ki wo kya kari...
he cant leave geet alone and can't stay calm with her...😭😭
he cant see her tears..😊
he made her sleep and order meera to stay with her..
bechara dev and meera..😆😆
maan spoiled their night..🤣
dagdu's english translation is superb...
maaneet are running away from each other
and it is making dev meera sad..😭😭
but when dagdu here why fear..😃
they will surely make maaneet one...
great update mahi...👏👏
continue soon...

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