Fallen Angel- Updated Part 9 on page 25 (10th Aug '14) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi all...
Thank you all for supporting me.😊😊🤗
Here is the next update.
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The function started with all teasing, masti and exchange of sweets and gifts between both the families. And now it's time for Ring ceremony. Bride and Groom are asked to exchange their engagement rings.


Maan extended his hand waited for Geet to extend her hand to wear the ring. But Geet stood still.

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Seeing no motion from Geet, Priya slightly pushed her hand forward without anyone noticing. Maan made her wear the ring. Then Geet slipped the ring in Maan's finger without even looking at him. He noticed it.
They both together took blessings from the elders. Few minutes later, Annie played the music for the couples to dance.
Maan extented his hand asking for a dance. She looked at the crowd who were looking at them only. She felt more cautious and gave her hand. He held her gracefuly and started to dance. All others also started to dance with them. While dancing, Maan felt her uneasiness at first then later she relaxed. They didn't even talk for so many years and now they are engaged so soon making it awkward for both. They danced for a while after which he asked,
Maan whispered- Geet

Geet looked up to see his face and their eyes met. 😳


Maan looked at her with so much love. He saw something in her eyes that he couldn't make out.


Maan- I need to ask you something.

Geet - ji


Maan started to wonder from where did this ji' come suddenly. She never used to give him respect before.. lol 😆


Without wasting any time, he asked

Maan- Are you happy with this marriage?


Geet was surprised that why suddenly he would ask such a question. As if he heard her mind voice ,


Maan- I know its quite too late to ask about your concern but still... I have been trying to ask you this since long but couldn't. I just wanted to make sure that no one is forcing you into this relationship.

She felt a pang in her heart. Though none forced her but still she couldn't enjoy the moment like a normal girl. She have to tell him soon. After hearing her out, whatever is his decision, she is ready to accept it. She gathered all her courage and spoke


Geet- ji nahi. No one forced me. I just feel its happening too fast. She told him honestly.


Maan- Yeah... Even I told my parents the same. But they want it to happen in a month before I go back to US.


Geet- ji I know


Maan- and pls stop saying ji.. Call me Maan.


Geet didn't said anything just nodded. He couldn't hold himself and said

Maan- So, you like me!


It was rather like a question than a statement. He is expecting like a child waiting for a chocolate. Geet, instead of answering,


Geet- Maan I need to...before she could complete her sentence Jhansi (Maan's mom) came there and took them for dinner as it is getting late.


During dinner, Maan was glancing at Geet every now and then. Seems like she is busy eating. Then later, the Khuranas took the leave. . While leaving, Maan waved his hand to say bye and Geet smiled back. Aww, she is looking so cute when she smiles.
Geet's parents sighed in relief that everything went well. Geet is lying down in her bed looking at the ceiling trying to sleep.


On the other side Maan also couldn't sleep and is in dilemma. What shall I do now?


Suddenly Geet's phone buzzed. She wondered who might call her at this time of hour. Her eyes widened on seeing Maan's name flashing.

She picked up the call thinking he might have something important to talk.

Hello

Hello Geet. You are still awake? He asked surprisingly yet happy


Ji.. trying to sleep


No ji pls


ok

there was silence for a while. He called her without even thinking and now didn't know what to talk. Suddenly he remembered that Geet was trying to tell him something in the function.


You were telling something na.. what is it?


Oh my God! What will I do now? How to start? She can't tell him anything on the phone.After few seconds of thinking


Yeah..woh woh can I meet you?


He was surprised at first. He too want to meet her and talk about so many things.


Ok. Where?


XYZ restaurant on Saturday evng


Fine. Will meet you there at sharp 5


Ok. Good night


He thought to talk to her a little more but soon she said good night. May be feeling tired...


Good night Geet...


They hung up. Maan is so excited to meet Geet. At last, he got a chance to express his feelings. He won't be able to sleep now.

Saturday! pls come soon!


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How is it friends? Finally i gave Maaneet update..

Hope you all enjoyed it..
Next part will be of Geet's past

Edited by ShineXavier - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Nice part lovd maaneet moment nd yes even i got annoyd wit geet's ji im also waitng 4 saturday update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
nice update
both r engage now
how will maan react after knowing her past
waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da terrific update! Well written! Maan sees her expression wen Priya nudges her! Maaneet engaged! While dancing, Maan asks if if she is happy n if she is being forced to marry him! Geet says no bt everything is gng fast! Maan sed he knws n wanted to wt she feels! She wanted to tell him abt her past bt his mom calls them 4 dinner! Maan cannt take his eyes of her! Maan calls her! She wants to meet him to tell him abt the past! Maan asks her nt to address him as ji! Maan cannot wait 4 Saturday! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UD
Maan loves her😳
waiting fr geet happy happy😊
Geet having past😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
awesome update loved it feel good she will tell maan her past geet call maan ji lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
maan is so excited just by her reply and meeting,
hope her past is not that bad & maan would be by her side.
nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: cuteeagle65

awesome & lovely update maaneet want 2 talk each other but no time hope geet tell him truth

thank u so much dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...but why geet is so upset?? Does she loved someone else & he betrayed her??? Will she tell maan about her past??...


you got to be little patient dear 😉
and thank u for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Geet wanted to tell Maan everything abt her past befiore they gt engaged bt circumstances did nt allow her to do so! Maan arrived a day before due 2 business! Maan loves her bt does nt want her to be forced into this marriage! He wanted to talks to her as well. Annie teasing Maan! Geet comes down! Maan mesmerised! Maan thinks she is shy! rituals begin! Maan gng to put ring bt Geet did nt give her hand! update soon! superbly written


thank u so much for ur support..😃😃😃
i will update next part soon

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