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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
very nice story or say dream
u write very well
both parts r very good
waiting for next
is maan know geet
is he know that he is her dream maan
maan is the one who stop geet while drinking wrong drink

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Few days pased it was weakend n dad was out for some business trip... leaving me with his set of instructions of course. . I was in kitchen trying to cook something new as cooking was my favourite pass time.. when I'm in kitchen I generally don't allow any servents to enter the kitchen not that I don't like working with them or something but coz it would at least give them some time to rest..

My kitchen was quite big with white slab n green cabinets to add the homely feel I added few plants near the window.. While cooking something striked me that it's been a while I didn't get dreams. . Not that I didn't have any dreams I dreamt of chocolate cake the other day n tom n jerry the day before!

But I didn't dream of Him! I was not liking the thought of not having him in my dreams. .. Jaan yes that's what I would address him .. as by I know he has taken a important part of my life or say dreams at least.!

Today seamed to be a little different as I was feeling very close to my dream or say dream man!
Completing my cooking I took a large scoop of vanilla ice cream n moved to my favourite place of my room the balcony were I had flower pots around the railing n a small swing there I spend my quite evenings listening to music or reading something. ..

Wonder if it was that call in the morning that bought this peace in me...
I was lazing in the morning when I heard the phone ring

Hello
What hello ! Do u realise I was worried over here!
(Someone barked over the phone)

Excuse me who r u n y r u worried!?
(I asked completely clue less of the caller)

How dare u ask me who are u??? I'll ask ur parents to bring u back from hostel... It's just been 2 days n u r acting as if u don't know me...

(He sounded so much hurt ! I didn't like him being worried for some reason)

Look firstly u've called the wrong person! N secondly looks like u were worried over someone's safety! It's ok she'll be alright let her adjust in her new environment I'm sure u will be the first one she'll share her new experience with.

There was a long pause on the other side wonder if is still on line or cut the call

Oh sorry it's a wrong number I guess. .but anyway thanks for all that.. I really appreciate it! Have a great day!

With that he hung the call left me wondering about my own concern!



DREAM-3



I was discussing something with my dad in the afternoon when it suddenly started raining. . Dad for some reason didn't like rains!
So I quitely left his office n moved towards the new client of ours I was waiting for the client to come when I noticed HIM across the road comming towards the cafe I was in.. That's for the first time I was concerned about my looks !
I was wearing a black anarkali with simple drops in my ears n a huge finger ring

He was rushing towards the cafe with a file covering his head..in white shirt n blue jeans half getting wet in rain n half trying to protect himslef from the rain
I was wondering this kind of situations often happen opposite right with drenched girls n drooling boys!

Then the waiter came with a glass of hot chocolate. . Which I didn't order when asked he said it was from the person in white shirt on the other table. .

With a thudding heart I read the note on the table which had a message

"Don't worry u look angel in any thing u wear😉"


To be continued. ..

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: crazydream

This is ur first experience in writing??? Or u Hv written any other??

Hmm u can term it first I guess
As the other one I stopped!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice story or say dream

u write very well
both parts r very good
waiting for next
is maan know geet
is he know that he is her dream maan
maan is the one who stop geet while drinking wrong drink


Thanks aparna!
N for ur quires have a little more patience😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U so much for liking it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
I think its maan who cald geet nd dream was awesm waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

I think its maan who cald geet nd dream was awesm waitng 4 nxt part

Hmm...
Next part in a hour or so!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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As I was about to turn someone came to my table .. I guess he was the client cursing him under breath I started talking to him.. I could feel he was starting me all the while .. n chuckling at my restlessness. .
That's when I did something I never expected I called the waiter n sent HIM a cup of steaming coffee. . The concern n worry I was feeling for him shocked me!
Finishing the talk quickly as I was about to walk out of the cafe I heard HIM saying
"NEXT TIME MAKE SURE YOU MAKE MY COFFEE!!"



That's it I woke up my sleep! Oho jaan I couldn't c u even today! With shear disappointment I got down from my bed pouting ..n cursing my luck!
As dad's out I thought to have a relaxing day in office but to my utter dismay I had to attend a conference in one of our branch office as as one of staff who's supposed to handle the meeting didn't attend it coz of some personal issues!
Now if it gets into dad's notice he'll have to lose his job so in order help I have to step in!

Now sitting in this boring meeting I have to finalise the deal!
Which is no were to end !
Suddenly out of nowhere someone entered the conference room as it was dark we couldn't see his face properly!
He apologised for his delay n continued the presentation!

That's when the whole boring conference started to get interesting. . I couldn't help but notice his attitude n confidence in presenting his part! There were few questions raised which he answered politely. .

After the presentation the clients left with a happy note of getting in touch with mr handa n appreciating me for having a wonderful team..

It's after they left I saw him !

Maan Singh Khurana! Nice to meet u mam!

I was too shocked to react it was him! N why the hell is he calling me mam! Then I realised I was being rude by not responding to him.. so gaining my composure .. I gave my hand! He held my hand as if I was some delecate petal!

It's Geet ! Nice meeting you too..

I smiled at him n left from there not able to stand in front of him n pretend confident! It's better to escape than to embrace ur self is what I believed!


To be continued. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DREAM -4


Dad was scolding me for going to the local market the other day n talking about its hygiene n all
What I didn't understand is there r people living in such a place happy n contented .. how could they ! According to dad's description it's highly impossible to even step there!
Then how!
With all those questions in mind I decided to visit the temple nearby.. which dad agreed with lots of do's n don'ts ...

It was a serene place with devotees coming n going leaving all there worries to the almighty! Children running towards thete parents with lots of questions n doubts...
Ladies offering there prayers. .
After offering my prayers I searched a little space under the tree n went sat by it having my prashad

Then someone came n adjusted comfortably beside me.. n casually took some from my hand n had it! It was like he was used to have it like this always!

Then I turned towords him to shout at his audacity n words refused to come out of my mouth. . It was him sitting beside me MAAN!

Geet stop it ! Y r u looking at me like you r seeing some ghost!
(He said)

I immediately straitened myself n looked down embarrassed!

Misthi!

He called me with so much love.. that I couldn't think of why he is calling me misthi!

Misthi! Please come to me I can't wait anymore. .
It's getting tough to live without you .. all my friends got married n c u r not even thinking about it!

He cribbed n pouted!
I couldn't help but smile at his cuteness. .

"WHO ASKED U TO WAIT COME N TAKE ME!!"
I heard myself saying ..

Which broke my dream ..
N I was all panting n sweating



To be continued. ..
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finaly maaneet met nd wow maan's entry was superb nd geet's dream was awesm maan directly talkd abt marriage waitng 4 nxt part

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