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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kabslocks

fabulous parts. nice to get quick updates.


Thank U
N there's a reason for giving quick updates
Actually there r two one im scared of my friend reading it..😕
N two I take disappointment more seriously than appreciation!😛
So before it gets in my head n I discontinue this one.
I want to complete it. .😆
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Thanks for liking😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one...and different

isn't Big B playing her father a dream come true for Geet Handa...but she is dreaming of Maan and with every dream she is one step closer to finding him...

at last she found him..but reality different from the dreams...did the reality creep into her dreams that Maan got stabbed?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I guess that scary dream wasn't going to leave me any time soon. . I concluded it was because of my stupid brain n it's over working!
I was brought up alone in this huge place by maids n caretakers who did there jobs perfectly. . Having no siblings to fight with n no friends to share secrets.. I never felt alone as dad made sure I get involved in some or the other activities. . Which will brighten up my knowledge!

Slowly I accepted the fact that I wasn't supposed to talk or get friendly with people who aren't rich!

The project was our new venture entering into the music industry for the very first time. . During time we worked on the project I understood why was dad so much interested this one.. n the reason is simple MONEY!

It was the feeling of having someone for u was what I was missing in my life ..n then entered maan in my life. . Filling up the missing part!

When meet with reaity I came in terms with my dreams. .

N the restlessness n distributed state of mind resulted in the previous dream!

I was in my own world when I heard the knock on the door. . Gaining my composure I asked to come in..

N there stood the problem of my life MAAN!

Mam im done for today .. may I take ur leave. .
(He asked so politely that I felt like banging my head to the nearest wall! sad I couldn't do it ... atleast not in front of him)

Aaa.. Maan ...I mean Mr. Khurana it's late n already raining i can drop u on my way..

Umm.. I think it's the best possible option for now .. ok mam..

U agreed!
(I asked getting shocked, come on he n agreeing something so easily was next to impossible)

Yes I guess..

Ok then let's move quickly as the weather is becoming worse!

Da#*@ car y did it stop that too out of nowhere! I was busy cursing when I heard him say

Mam please don't take me wrong but u can come to my home till the driver looks into the problem. .as my home is nearby!

I looked at him unsure as I haven't been to anyone's house till date.. but as the situation demanded I wasn't left with any other option!

As I entered his street I noticed the houses were very small they have constructed a complete house in the space which was almost the size of my kitchen!

Thete were few kids jumping in the rain n there parents yelling on top of there lungs to get inside or will catch cold!

Maan entered a narrow line making sure I followed him answering few neighbours. . Promising to help them with some stuff. . N refusing some when they offered food for his guest which was me!..

Opening the door we entered in side. .
I found a verg untidy n messy room.. without bothering to explain he vanished into a room n came back with anew set of towel

He again went to his room shouting he be back after freshening up n make my self comfortable!

Now I was in dilemma again as I wanted to tidy it up but was afraid of his reaction. . Then I thought to come up with a convincing reason there wasn't any place to sit forget about comfort. ..

As I cleaned up the room to some extent I decided to make coffee. . Went towards the kitchen only to get shocked! OMG it was as small as our office lift!

Thank god it was clean or god knows what I would do..

As I was preparing coffee I talked to dad n informed him I would be a bit late as the car was giving some trouble. . Listening to his set of instructions I cut the call n turned back to c Maan standing behind n watching me working in his kitchen!

I handed him his cup n walked to the sitting area when I froze

Geet!

He called me with my name with out any mam to it.. I seriously doubt i was hallucinating!before I heard him again!

Geet! Do u make my coffee everyday in office. .

Umm ..is all I could squeak

Thanks this is the best coffee I ever had. .

The smile on his face n the comfort level he was talking made me relax as I was really afraid after mending his things..

Smiling at him I wiped my hands to my pallu.. when I saw him frowning. .

Any problem??

Yes ! Don't spoil the saree use napkin
(he answered too quickly k I was surprised with his reaction)

That's when I noticed my saree I was draped in a baby pink chiffon saree with relf work smiling at him I noded my head in acceptance of the hidden compliment. .

As rain reduced I ringed my driver n moved out of his home to my house..
That's when he answered my un asked question

GEET U CAN CALL ME MAAN BUT OUT SIDE OFFICE !

Shaking my head n smiling I went back ..




DREAM-7



After discussing the deal with dad n reminding his medicine I walked back to my room only to be caged in his arms. .

Blushing n smiling asking him to release me I tried to come out of his grip!

Then he pulled on to the bed making me rest rcompletely on him he held me securely with one hand n started playing with my hair with other

MY MISTHI MY WISH! I WILL NOT LEAVE HER EVEN IF SHE ASKS

N SHE WILL NEVER ASK U TO!
I answered confidently

Acha! He sounded amused n I found the naughty glint in his eyes!
N in the next moment I was pleading n begging him to leave me

As he was tickling me n I was rolling on the bed laughing un controlled!

Jaan please stop!

IT'S TREAT TO WATCH U LAUGHING MISTHI!

N then I woke up all smiling!


To be continued. ..




Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Good one...and different

isn't Big B playing her father a dream come true for Geet Handa...but she is dreaming of Maan and with every dream she is one step closer to finding him...

at last she found him..but reality different from the dreams...did the reality creep into her dreams that Maan got stabbed?


Thanks for reading
N about your doubt. .
There's a reason for that n u will come to know in next few parts
A bit of it in next actually!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Will try n give one more part before I leave for my work!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nice parts so maan is professional doesnt mix personal things in profession i guess coz geet's dad he is nt friendly wit geet at office lovd their talk at maan's home nd geet is such gd person she cleand his room a little bt didnt judgd him by his livng style
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DREAM-8

It was calm n beautiful evening ..beautiful coz it just stopped raining.. cool n gentle breeze blowing every ware..with water dripping from the roof top's .. droplets of water on the trees shinning like crystals. . Plants looking fresh after the gentle showers. .n water collected in small puddles on the roads with kids jumping in it..

I was listening to my neighbour as she was she was complaining about her husband regarding some issue. . As I was helping her fixing her kids broken toy!

Suddenly someone caught my attention across the street. . She was in her white chudidar or salwar what ever u call which had a flowing top n tight bottom. .I wonder what's with this names of women's clothing!Every thing seemssimilar but has different names. . Thank god we don't have so many names with our clothes. .

She was hopping from one puddle to another with kids not bothering about her dress which was white as they show in those detergent adds

I couldn't see her face as she was far from me ..n her face was covered with her dupatta!

Stupid peace of cloth! I heard my self mumbling ,frowning,pouting. N what not!

That's how my neighbour caught me .. pulling my ears she asked me to concentrate on the task in hand..which was now hard thing to do..

With one quick glance down the street .. disappointed not finding her.. I cursed my neighbour in my mind!

Tada I woke up!



That was a weird dream. . Who on earth dreams of random girl.. strange .. I felt I shouldn't discuss it with any one as im sure they will laugh at me. .

Looking at the clock I was shocked to find that i was running late!

I probably wrong judging people. . N creating opinions. .recalling the first meeting of our in the office n the day after the conference. . I probably miss made a wrong opinion about her! As I thought her to be one of those rich n arogent people .. as she showed with the lacking interest in the project!.. Later I was glad to b proved wrong... she was really hard working.. in professional front. .she respected her work n gave enough space for her employees

Even in the personal front she seemed to be a warm n friendly person. ... From the past few visits to my home which were shear n abrupt decisions. . He proved how down to earth she was as she insisted me to introduce her as a colleague not as boss or something. . As she didn't like getting vip treatments. ..

She even helped my neighbours with cooking n discussed recepie with them .. she even watched chota bheem with kids...

Truth to b said I feel lucky enough to know her personally!




To be continued. .
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Wow even maan was discribng abt geet whoes face he hvnt seen maan made a opinion abt geet bt later she provd it wrong nd geet visits his place dats great superb part as dis time its maan who was telng abt geet waitng 4 nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice
as maan think that geet wont mix with other as she is rich n not serious about work so firstly he feels disappointed
but with passing day his opinion about geet change
now maan also dreaming of girl without face
good

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