Milestone SS on Maan's Memory Loss Track Epilogue/Pg 85 Dt 18/03/'15 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful and emotional teaser. They finally found each other.

Loved it Heytal 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
painful to see both like this
maan trying to confort her with his presence
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am in love with this teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice tsr..
maan could feel her pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
teaser
awesome...
poor Geet...
and Maan hes finding solace with her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
He's slowly getting to know about them !!!
Amazing teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago



Updating in sometime
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A heartfelt Thank you to Preeti for gifting me this lovely banner

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Diamonds this is for you😳 for giving me that push to update this SS and also for posting the happywala teaser of FFY

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Love u all for waiting for this SS
And I just hope I lived up to it

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Part 3








[Dadimaa's POV]



Though Dev had urged me not to worry about Geet and go to sleep, but knowing Geet and judging her current frame of mind I was sure she won't even touch the glass of milk forget drinking. The concern for my child forced me to go back to Geet's room, somehow cajoling her I made sure she had the milk. Pulling over the covers for her and dimming the lights I headed back relieved that finally she would have a peaceful sleep!


I hated myself for doing this to my child but having no other option I had to mix a sedative in her glass of milk. Post her miscarriage her Dr had prescribed this medicine incase the need arises, it was a mild sedative which relaxes the mind and ensures a peaceful and deep slumber. We didn't need it then because Maan was all the time there for Geet but today...


"Hume maaf kar djiyega bete lekin hamaare liye aap se aur aap ki khushi se zyaada kuch nahi hain. Agar aaj Maan aap ke saath hote toh hume aisa kuch karna hi nahi padta lekin..."

"Umeed karte hain kal ek naya din aur ek nayi shuruaat ho aap ke liye!" I rued walking back to my room.
{PS: Geet left for the store room after Dadimaa left}
[Maan's POV]
My heart went out for Geet seeing her settled on the tiny cot cuddling up a doll in her embrace.



A doll with a doll! I rued.



Her eyes brimming with tears probably she was remembering all those moments which are sadly erased from my life. The scene stirred something deep in me! An unknown feeling of protectiveness surged within me. I just wanted to grab her in my arms and comfort her but refrained as I could see her eyes getting droopy she would sleep any moment and right now that would be the best for her!

I walked around the store room in the dim light of my mobile scanning the things here, this portion consists of all the memories related to our baby! A tiny cot, a cute little wardrobe, toys, paintings, cradle, tricycle and much more. We had probably created a whole new world for our angel!




Nakul had mentioned that I had stayed up all night and personally designed and painted the whole room and also arranged all the things surprising Geet. But fate had also ensured that I was also that one person who had been responsible to shift all these things from our baby's room to this store room!

If it agonizes me so much now when I don't even remember those moments, I can't even comprehend how painful it would have been then for both Geet and me!

I peered at her face, she was asleep but wasn't relaxed. She was constantly tossing and turning like missing something, seeking something... Not able to stop myself anymore I walked up to the cot and sat beside her caressing her head lovingly and instant came her response, she grabbed my hand placed it near her heart. Holding both, the doll and my hand close to her she eased a bit.

Her reaction like an answer to my question as to what she was searching for?... Me, My presence!



I could sense her discomfort in the tiny bed, so lifting her up in my arms I headed back to her room. She snuggled close to me resting her head on my shoulder like this was her usual and rightful place, her breath falling on my chest like evoking thousands of sensations in me. Having her so close to me, her innocent touches like setting me on fire.


This was all so new for me! These feelings which I couldn't name but still they felt so right! I had always maintained a safe distance from women since... but Geet!

How did she manage to break the barriers around me... How did she manage to make me, Maan Singh Khurana fall for her... How did she breathe in a new zeal in my otherwise lifeless heart! Each revelation like introducing me to a whole new Maan! The Maan whom I had myself buried in deep somewhere but probably Geet had found him and rescued him out!

I walked up to her bed and carefully laid her down but she was again restless and sniffing in her slumber. And now exactly knowing what she craved for I slipped beside her, lending her the comfort of my arms. She had turned to her side, her back resting on my chest but still she held my hand closely like fearing I would disappear any moment. I felt so guilty witnessing the extent of her insecurity! Moving in closer and resting my head in crook of her neck, plastering her to me like assuring her of my presence I closed my eyes.




I felt relaxed in her embrace! Instead of me giving her comfort it was like Geet easing out all my restlessness, healing all my pain and after so many troubled nights today I felt at peace by just being in her arms.
A feeling that this is home to me and this is where I truly belong!

Today I had realized what Geet meant to my life!

From the day I had gained consciousness a feeling of something amiss was haunting me day in and day out! My frustration of not being able to voice out my turmoil came out in form of my anger and that too only on Geet! With Geet...I always experienced some kind of a strong magnetic pull which inspite of all my attempts to ignore... I couldn't succeed! So the only option left was to shun her away from me. But that too didn't help a bit...Infact day by day I was all the more burdened with guilt and shame!
So many things had changed in matter of few hours, earlier in the day Geet had so easily relieved me of my guilt to have hurt, misunderstood and misbehaved with her and tonight's events vouched how strong our bond is and what place she truly holds in my life!

There is a constant waging war between my heart and my mind, my heart has finally started breathing the language of love and my mind still fighting to obtain all the answers related to our past. Geet's words in that hotel room the other day keeps echoing in my mind and somehow I strongly feel that in her intoxicated state, the story she had narrated...was OUR STORY!






This is link for the scene 😊

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvWZV1-0P3w

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvWZV1-0P3w[/YOUTUBE]




I could feel it, relate to it and was deeply affected by it!

I had to obtain some answers and only Geet could help me out and tomorrow I will make sure to have my way out!

"Geet sirf tum mujhe hamaari zindagi ke uss hisse (part) se milva (remind) sakti ho aur kal tum hi mujhe mere saare sawaalon ke jawaab dogi!" Promising myself I relaxed in the arms of My Geet!


I had no idea how long I slept here in Geet's room only when my mobile started vibrating did I realize it was morning and I was late for my workout. I was about to get up but then the thought that I had already over exerted myself with Tai-Chi last night and also a strong desire to bask in some more moments of bliss of having sleeping Geet in my arms overpowered me so closing my eyes I slept for few more minutes.
Luckily I had managed to sneak out of Geet's room in time without anyone noticing me, Geet was still asleep which seemed very strange as by now I know that Geet is also an early riser, infact she is the one who prepares my coffee before I leave for my daily workout. I brushed aside the thought concluding maybe yesterdays events must have taken a toll on her mentally and now after a good sleep I'm sure she will be feeling much better just like me!



I greeted Dadimaa as I walked down to the dinning hall for breakfast. She smiled at me and asked me to proceed towards the dinning table and she made her way towards the stairs. Knowing whats running on her mind I spoke.


"Dadimaa...Geet abhi neeche hi aa rahi hogi. Main usse mil kar aa raha hoon aur waise bhi hume office ke liye jaldi nikalna hain" We both settled in our places.



I had peeped in her room sometime back and found her lost in her own thoughts, not wanting her to stress herself more I ordered her to get ready fast as we had a important meeting to attend. The only thing that can distract her from these disturbing memories is to drown her in work and thats exactly what I have thought of doing today.

[Dadimaa's POV]

I was about to head to Geet's room to somehow convince her to come down for breakfast when Maan descended the stairs. There was a kind of distinct calm on his face today, something which has been missing since his accident. Today I felt he had smiled from his heart! I told him go to ahead but he halted me saying Geet would come down any moment and they were soon leaving for office.
Geet was very disturbed since last night!
I had already ventured to her room a couple of times since morning but she was still asleep. Right now I have no idea about her frame of mind and knowing Maan and his no nonsense attitude, the last thing I want is that Geet be on his receiving end today. Maan is unaware of her trauma and Geet is in a very vulnerable state.

I need to protect her!

"Maan...woh hum keh rahe the...ke...Geet ko aaj ghar par hi...." I tried to urge him to let Geet rest at home but he didn't let me complete.
"Dadimaa aaj office mein ek bahot important meeting hain aur usme Geet ka hona bahot zaroori hain." He said in finality leaving no room for me to argue.

"Dadimaa main ab theek hoon...aap fikar mat kijiye." Geet assured me taking her seat and grabbing a toast for herself.

I felt relieved and she seemed normal. Dev who was till now silently observing everything blinked his eyes signaling me to relax. On second thoughts it would be better if Geet was away from home as with Naintara around it was no more safe for her specially after yesterdays happenings. Naintara has been taking advantage of Maan's memory loss and implementing her devious plans on us. Thats when I realised.

"Dev...NT kahan hain?" Both Lucky and Dev fumbled at her mention.
"Apni sahi jagah pohuch gayi hain." Dev mumbled but when all looked at him questioningly he pretended nonchalantly.
"Pata nahi...hogi yahin kahin."
But I had heard his earlier statement clearly and knew he was surely up to something but before I could query further the landline phone's ring interrupted our conversation and Dev rushed to answer it. And my suspicion was confirmed as he declared.

"Dekhiye yeh wrong number hain...Humaare parivaar ki saari Mrs Khuranas iss waqt ghar par hi hain." Maan inquired about the weird call but Dev waved it off saying it was some wrong number.
I needed to wait for my answers.


Thankfully Maan-Geet took our leave as they were running late for office and even Lucky, Nandini and Geet's Mamaji left for somewhere. Finally walking up to Dev I waited for him to continue but again the phone call...

Finally Dev disclosed what exactly had transpired last night and right now he needed to go there urgently. I couldn't help but worry about his latest stunt and cautioned him.

"Dev...hum jaante hain ke aap jo bhi kar rahe hain woh iss parivaar ke liye kar rahe hain lekin NT bhi chup nahi rahegi. Hum nahi chahte ke hamaare parivaar ko woh aur nuksaan pohuchaye woh zaroor iska bhi badla hum sab se legi."

"Yahin toh main chahta hoon Dadimaa ke woh kuch kare aur hum uska sach Bro ke saamne laa sake. Kal toh usne peeche se vaar kiya tha iss liye bach gayi lekin mujhe yakeen hain ke ab woh apne gusse mein zaroor koi badi galti karegi. Aap fikar mat kijiye Dadimaa meri nazar har waqt uss par hi hain aur hum bahot jald NT ko hamaari zindagi se nikal denge." He assured me.
[Dev's POV]
I headed towards the Police Station where NT was detained on charges for trespassing someones private property. I couldn't help but laugh at her foolishness and mentally pat myself that finally I could give her fitted reply. Since years I had been dominated by her, never did I question her authority or actions. Bro had tried every possible way to stop my wedding with her, he always maintained that she would ruin my life, our family...everything but I like a love struck fool braced my own doom!

I was blinded in my love for her and have committed a lot of crimes! The only reason I'm with my family today is because Geet has forgiven me of my dirty crime but I haven't forgiven myself and now I exactly know what I have to do to keep my family safe maybe then I can redeem my filthy self to some extent.

I behaved in a mysterious way in NT's presence last night and walked out of the room talking on my phone purposely mentioning NT's name and as expected she started following me. I hid behind the main door while Lucky drove my car and NT fell for our trap as she too rushed behind him, Lucky took her to some deserted warehouse and the moment NT entered the warehouse Lucky locked the door from out and returned home.
After days of tension last night I had a peaceful sleep. The very thought of NT locked inside the dirty, dingy and stinky warehouse for the whole night was like a soothing balm to my aching heart!. Assuming the security of warehouse must have handed her over to police who inturn called home to verify NT's statement.

At the police station I feigned ignorance to all her accusations of me deliberately plotting against her, she also asked the officers to verify my whereabouts last night. But being with her for so many years and knowing her little too well I already had a back up plan! Once Lucky and NT left KM I too left to meet our family lawyer regarding NT's pending cases, so with a reputed lawyer vouching for me being with him last night at his home.NT had no grounds to accuse me any further.

I paid for the fine but not before informing the local police about NT's track record, about her pending cases and also specified that NT always stoops to such kinds of false accusations against me and my family to defame us by misguiding and misusing the law procedures.

Luckily with the help of all the required papers that our lawyer submitted in the police station and now even gaining the trust of local police proving to them NT's misconduct and that I was a victim of troubled marriage, I had closed NT's one major option to defame and torment us.
She was seething with anger and for the first time I felt satisfied!
On the way back home she barked out.
"Dev yeh aap ne accha nahi kiya...bahot mehenga padega aap ko."
"NT ab tum fikar karo kyun ki ab police bhi tumhaara saath nahi degi. Kya keh rahi thi tum mujh pe domestic violence ka case karogi...mere poore parivaar ko arrest karwaogi! Ab toh tum khud bachne ka raasta dhoondho kyunki ab police toh tumhaari koi bhi baat maan ne se rahi." I stated sarcastically.
"Kal raat kaisi gayi Naintara?...Mazaa aaya wahan?" I rubbed in salt on her woes.

"DEV... aap..." But I cut her off midway.

"Ab tumhe ehsaas hua na darr, dard aur takleef kise kehte hain! Yaad rakhna iss raat ko...aur iss sabak (lesson) ko bhi!" I warned her.
KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS
[Maan's POV]
I had successfully managed to keep Geet busy in one work or another not giving her any time to ponder over last nights events and luckily she seemed back to normal. I guess that is one of the most remarkable quality of Geet she smiles through all her miseries and I keep sulking over mine! Suddenly I was reminded of my agenda for today and I need to implement it but how?

A knock broke my reverie and Aadi...my man! entered my cabin. I immediately brought my plan in action and rued to him that I needed to spend some quality time with Geet to know her better and also make attempts to start afresh.

"Aadi tum toh sab jaante ho...tumse kuch bhi chupa nahi hain. Mujhe Geet ke saath kuch waqt akele bitana hain, taake main usse jaan saku...hamaare rishtey ko jaan saku lekin..." And as expected he immediately volunteered to help. I specified that KM or going outside was not a great idea as there is too much disturbance but he assured me he will think of something soon.

Aadi came back after sometime and urged me to take Geet to our old wing citing an excuse of some project. I was skeptical and confused but he convinced me this was the best option and I trusted him totally!

He was my true friend...my brother! I hugged him with gratitude.
OLD WING

"Maan hum yahaan kyun aaye hain?" Geet inquired looking around as we made my way inside the room.
"Geet hume ek important project pe kaam karna hain" I stated. Not wanting anybody's disturbance I closed the door but
"Maan yeh kya kiya aap ne...darwaaza kyun bandh kiya aap ne?" She instantly reacted, panic evident in her voice.
"Kyun...kya hua Geet?" I queried in confusion.
"Maan...iss darwaaze ka lock kharaab hain, yeh jam ho jaata hain." She informed me.
"WHAT????" Now it was my turn to panic.


It was the old wing of our office and not many people used it. Now being locked in here, how were we to come out. Why did Aadi send me here...out of all the places! Geet was trying to open the lock, I too joined her banging on the door in a bid that someone hears it but...

"Yeh lock kharaab hain toh kisi ne isse theek nahi karwaaya. KC sab kuch perfect hota hain! Kaun bewakoof hain jisne ab tak isse change nahi kiya hain?" I burst out in sheer frustration halting Geet's attempts to open the lock as she gave me weird meaningful look.

"What??? Joh iske liye responsible hain usse toh main..." I blurted out not understanding her reaction.
"AAP..." She affirmed.

"KYAAA!"


"Haan!"
"Maan aap ne hi kahan tha ke ab hum nayi wing ka conference hall use karte hain toh isse aise hi rehne do. Iss room se hamaari bahot saari yaadein judi hain Maan. Aap ko yaad nahi hum dono pehle bhi yahan lock ho gaye the.." She disclosed a new fact. Maybe thats why Aadi had stressed on using this very room. Realizing what she spoke out Geet turned away.
I too halted my attempts to open the door and walked up to Geet, placing my fingers under her chin I made her look up at me and spoke.
"Mujhe toh kuch yaad nahi hain Geet lekin sirf tum mujhe meri yaadon se milva sakti ho." I paused for a moment and then continued.

"KC ho, KM ho, Pyaar ka Ghar, hamaari first date ka venue yaa phir Delhi ke kone kone mein hamaari yaadein, hamaare pal base honge jise tum yaad kar sakti ho, jee sakti ho lekin main..."
"Main har pal koshish karta hoon ke mujhe kuch yaad aaye, ek halki se jhalak, ek dhoondhla sa chehra, ek lamha, ek ehsaas kuch bhi...bas yaad aa jaaye!" I rued paifully.

"Geet jab tum apni aankhen bandh karti ho toh tumhe hamaara khushiyon ke rangon se bhara ateet nazar aata hoga lekin mujhe sirf andhera nazar aata hain. Main har pal sochta hoon ke kahin iss chair se hamaari koi yaad toh nahi judi, kya iss window ke paas humne koi khaas pal jiya hain.." I opened my heart to her and she happily replied.




"Haan Maan...yeh woh window hain jahan hum pehli baar ek dusre ke nazdeek the, yeh woh chair hain jahan main pehli baar galti se aap ki god mein baith gayi thi." She cupped my face in her palms and continued.

"Maan aap ko dheere dheere sab yaad aa raha hain...aap hosla mat haariye. Mujhe vishwaas hain ke bahot jald aap ko sab yaad aa jaayega." She assured me but I wanted to know our past. I wanted to calm my restless heart.
"Geet main apne ateet se milna chahta hoon aur sirf tum mujhe milva sakti ho. Kal raat ko mujhe hamaare baby ke baare mein pata chala...tumhe koi andaaza nahi hain ke maine kya mahsoos kiya! Woh dard, woh takleef, woh adhurapan, woh bechaini..."





"Store room mein woh saari cheezen dekh kar mujh par kya biti hain yeh sirf main jaanta hoon. Aisa laga jaise meri zindagi bemaayne ho gayi hain!" I confessed hugging her. I could feel her crying too but suddenly she broke the hug and spoke.
"Kya kal raat ko aap mere paas the Maan?" Geet's question caught me off guard but not wanting to hide anything from her I nodded in a yes.
"Aap poori raat mere paas the na...mera dil keh raha tha ke aap mere paas mere saath the lekin phir socha ke yeh mera wahem (illusion) hoga...aap ko toh kuch yaad hi nahi hain.." She beamed with happiness through her tears but again saddened with the thought of distance between us.
" Geet main nahi jaanta meri yaadasht kab aayegi...aayegi bhi ke nahi lekin tum mujhe hamaari guzari zindagi ke baare mein toh bata sakti ho. Hum kahan mile the...kaise mile the...kaise hume pyaar hua?"

"Geet uss din bhi hotel mein nashe ki halat mein tum hamaari kahaani bata rahi thi lekin phir usse bhi adhoora chod diya. Geet main jaanta hoon tum sab mil kar mujhse sach chupa rahe ho...mere aate hi tum sab chup ho jaate ho...jhooth bol te ho mujhse."


"MSK itna bhi kamzor nahi ke apni zindagi ki sacchaai seh na paaye. Kal raat ko mujhe itna bada sach pata chala lekin main theek hoon Geet. Mujhe kuch nahi hua aur tumse sab jaan kar shayad meri bechaini kuch kam ho jaaye."
"Kya tumhe mujh par bilkul vishwaas nahi hain Geet?" I confronted her and raising her hand and placing it on my head I made her promise to disclose the facts to me.
"Geet tum mujhe hamaari kahaani sunaogi na?" I pleaded to her and she nodded in affirmation.




Settling down on the couch Geet reluctantly started.

"Hum pehli baar Hoshiarpur mein mile the! Main ek mele (fair) mein apne parivaar se alag ho gayi thi aur kuch goondey mujhe pareshan karne lage, main unse bach kar bhaag rahi thi aur aap se takra (bumped into) gayi." I couldn't help but smile typical Geet like understanding my thought Geet pouted and complained.
"Aap mujh par has rahe hain?"
"Nahi...Main toh iss baat ko soch raha tha ke kuch cheezen kabhi nahi badalti aur tum toh musibat ko saamne chal kar invite karti ho...hain na!" I teased her to which her mouth opened in a wide O.
"Aap ko kahaani sun ni hain ya nahi?" She threatened me to which I nodded obediently and she continued.
"Maine aap se madad maangi.."
"Aur maine hero ki tarah tumhe unn goondo se bachaya." I declared.
"Nahi...aap toh mujhe dhakka de kar beer peene lage." She added in mock anger.
"Phir?" I asked in confusion.
"Phir kya main wahan se bhaag gayi aur bhagte bhagte paani mein gir gayi. Tab aap style maarte hue aaye aur mujhe doobne se bachaya aur haan phir jee bhar ke mujhe sunaya (taunted) bhi." She stated dramatically.
I wondered how unusual our first meet was!
"Aise hi har baar main musibat mein phasti aur aap mujhe bachate... mujh par chillate lekin phir bhi meri madad karte aur main pata nahi kaise aap se har baat par lad padti(get into an argument). Aap ki rukhi baatein mujhe bahot chubhti! Ek silsilla sa ban gaya tha jahan na chahte hue bhi hamaare raaste ek dusre se takrane lage."

"Hamaari har takraar ke bawajood (inspite) pata nahi kaise lekin main aap par bharosa karne lagi! Koi ajeeb sei door thi jo hume jod rahi thi...yeh Taveez!" She proclaimed.

"Yeh taveez tumne mujhe pehnaya hain Geet? Mujhe toh laga yeh Dadimaa ne.." I stated.


"Yeh taveez mujhe ek Baba ne diya tha ussi mele mein aur kahan tha aaj mujhe apna humsafar milega! Yeh taveez hamesha aap ke paas reh jaata jaise kismat hume jod rahi thi!" She cleared out a fact.

"Phir meri zindagi ne ek bahot ajeeb mod le liya jahan main bilkul akeli pad gayi, koi mere saath nahi tha. Main ek aise do-rahe (crossroads) pe khadi thi jahan ek taraf mera parivaar tha aur dusri taraf sach! Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha ke main kya karu tab aap ne mujhe raasta dikhaya Maan!" She stated emotionally.

"Maine?" I queried.

"Haan... Aap ne mujhse kahan tha ke meri zindagi mein tab tak kuch nahi badlega, jab tak main khud apne pairon par khadi nahi ho jaati!"
"Mujh jaisi darpok ladkiyaan hamesha ek aadmi ka sahara dhoondhti hain ya phir rote rehti hain. Agar dimaag ki madad chahiye toh aansoon ko rokna hoga kyunki aansoon rukenge toh dimaag chalega!"
"Zindagi mein zosh se nahi balke hosh se kaam lena chahiye!" She declared.

"Pata hain Maan...Aap ki yehi baatein jo mujhe pehle bahot chubhti thi woh baad mein mere dilon-dimaag mein goonjti rehti aur ek ajeeb si himmat mujh mein paida karne lagi! Aur phir maine faisla kiya sach ka saath dene ka. Main apne hi parivaar ke khilaaf khadi hui aur unhone khandaan ki izzat ke liye mujhe jaan se maar dene ka faisla kiya. Main toh shayad aaj zinda bhi nahi hoti agar aap meri jaan nahi bachate!"
I was appalled to hear about the events of our past. Geet's family were involved in honour killing!

"Aap ne mujhe Veerji aur unke doston se bachaya, aap ke kehne par maine unhe arrest karwaya aur hamesha ke liye HP chod kar Delhi aa gayi...zindagi ki talaash mein, ek nayi shuruaat karne. Meri yeh zindagi aap ki amaanat hain Maan!" A tear trickled down her eye and on a reflex my hand reached to wipe it off. She smiled ruefully and continued.
"Kismat ne phir hamaare raaste mila diye aur main yahan KC mein aap ki secretary ban gayi. Main galtiyaan karti rehti...aap mujhe daatte...chillate lekin phir sab sikhate. Aap hamesha mere saath khade rahe Maan...meri taaqat ban kar! Main jaanti hoon meri har bewakoofi ke bawajood aap mujhe hamesha apne paas rakhte kyunki aap jaante the ke main iss naye shaher mein bilkul akeli thi. Issi tarah hamaari nok-jhok chalti rehti...Aap mujhe 'Chalta Phirta Disaster' kehte aur main aap ko 'Dusht Danav'! Aise hi dheere dheere main apne ateet ki kadvi yaadein bhoolne lagi aur hum ek dusre ke paas aate gaye."
"Maan hamaare ek saath hone mein Dadimaa ka bahot bada haath hain warna shayad hum kabhi ek saath nahi hote. Hum dono apne ateet ki wajah se ek dusre se door bhagne lage the lekin Dadimaa ne hume alag nahi hone diya."

"Dadimaa mujhe Khurana Mansion mein rehne ke liye le aayi taake hum chah kar bhi ek-dusre se door na jaa sake."


"Tum Khurana Mansion mein rehti thi?"


"Haan outhouse mein."


"Phir kya hua?"


"Phir humne ek dusre ko apni dil ki baat bata di, ussi jagah jahan hum kal gaye the."


"Aur phir bilkul ek fairytale ki tarah hamaari shaadi ho gayi. Mera har sapna sach ho gaya...hamaara khushiyon bhara aashiana ban gaya... Humaara har sapna sach ho gaya lekin phir ek toofan aaya aur aap sab bhool gaye...mujhe bhool gaye!"

"Maan apni Geet ko bhool gaya...Hamaara rishta, hamaara pyaar, woh pal, woh ehsaas...sab kuch...sab kuch!" She weeped.
Turning towards me she held my face in her palms and poured out her heart, her insecurities, her fears!

"Pata hain aap ko Maan jab aap mujhse nafrat karne lage the, mujhe aisa laga ke main phir se ateet ke uss andhere mein chali gayi hoon lekin iss baar mere 'MAAN SIR' nahi hain jo mujhe unn andhero se bahar nikalenge, meri himmat ban ke khade rahenge...mujhe phir se zindagi ladna sikhayenge!"


"Kyun Maan...kyun hamaare saath aisa hua...kyun kismat ne hume itni badi sazaa di...bolo na Maan...pehle hamaare baby ko aur phir aap ko kyun cheen liya...kyun ...kyun...kyun MAAN...????" She confronted me breaking down in my arms.
Till day I thought only I was suffering but today I realized what Geet must have been through! I was her sole support, her reason to live and in my ignorance I had hurt her the most!


"Gairon ki di gayi chot se toh koi bhi ubhar jaata hain lekin apna jo chot de woh insaan ko tod deta hain!" I held her tight in my arms.I know there more to this story and I will hunt down every tiny detail about our life. I will not let fate win this time.
"MSK apni kismat khud likhega aur badlega bhi!" I promised her and myself!
PRECAP - NT's Pack up!






A/N: I know many of u may not be happy with Geet skipping the Dev part from her story but firstly I just wanted this moment to be MAANEET MOMENT! 😳

Secondly I hated Dev-NT parts popping up even in show ruining Maaneet romance 😡

Please trust me Maan will know soon and that too his way!

I hope u all agree with me otherwise jutta- chappals are welcomed 😉



Happy Ganesh Chaturthi to all celebrating it

😃


Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Last dialogue👏
I have always maintained that you write superb dialogues Heytal but this one was outstanding.

The story line is something the serial should have followed

All of the fans would have been happy

Dev ne kya sahi kiya NT ke saath👏


loved it

NT ka pack up? 😆

waiting for that.

Chalo next time itna wait mat karana.

Happy Ganesh Chaturthi to you too

I miss my Juhu Ganpati so much😕
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'd just come to read and noticed your note. Firstly thank you for dedicating this update to me, 🤗 was quite a pleasant surprise. I appreciate it so much. ❤️
Coming to the update, I absolutely loved how you penned down each emotion of each character, be it Dadima, Maan or Geet. I don't know whom to feel sorry for, they're all going through something and you can't even blame either of them, it's just the situation and that stupid NT has tried to take advantage. 😡 😆

I absolutely so fell in love with Maan at this moment when he climbed into bed with Geet 😳 Comforting her whilst she slept. Read that scene twice 😆 loved how you penned it down, the tenderness in that scene is almost felt when you read it.
Aww so so happy he's realized Geet's presence in his life and what she means to him.
Glad that Maan had taken her to the office to distract her, had she stayed home she probably would've been thinking and depressing herself over the baby. 😭

That video is beautiful. Have you watched the vm of this scene, think it was beetein lamhe or something. It is heartbreaking. An intense scene of Geet and Maan. Loved DD's acting here, she absolutely nailed it, made me want to cry for her. 😭

Now... coming back to the update before I trail off 😆

Lol Dev's plan 😆 Might hate the guy personally 😉 but glad he did what he did. 😆

Aww love Adi here. Lol he sent them on purpose and Maan hadn't even realized. First she locked them inside and now it was his turn. 🤣

Their confession, Geet revealing her past in the room was just so beautiful, swear down I don't think anyone else could've penned it down so perfectly as you did, it was emotional and so so amazingly written. ❤️
I'm kind of glad you didn't reveal Geet and Dev's past just yet because that part might've over shadowed their past that she'd shared. So I'm happy with that and know you'll reveal it brilliantly like you did with the baby. Can't wait for Maan to take charge of his life and theirs, want to see the loving MSK soon...

NT's pack up? Really... Now I'm looking forward to this. Should be quite funny.

Continue soon. 😃
Edited by -Diamonds- - 10 years ago

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