MG~ FF~The Mist-2- UPDATED Pt 6 / Pg 133 / 14th May................... - Page 59

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

dont wrap it so soon ..atleast have 15 parts ...

This one was supposed to be OS... but as I couldn't keep it without posting said it as ss & started posting...
let me see will try to give as long as I can
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pata nahi Valli.. we are chatting from long time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

Pata nahi Valli.. we are chatting from long time

ya..thats y im asking..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Hello Hi yarooo:)

Shocked hehehehehehe
yar babie bohat saray updates pending hain i'll read and comment yar ...


😆😆 Hi sona dear...jhappiieess
how r u..?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4001291/mg-ff-the-mist-2-updated-pt-6-pg-133-14th-may?pn=40




Part - 4


They enter in Delhi ,, Geet was amazed and looking out very curiously * she was in a metropolitan city after her childhood * she spent her childhood in city's cantonment area ,, her eyes became teary remembering her happy childhood days with her mom and dad * Dadima called Nakul in KM and instructed him to arrange for GrahaPravesh Rasam .
After a long and tiring journey they reached in KM in eve * Dadima stopped Maan and Geet at d door and Nakul brought arti's Thali and placed a kalash filled with rice at threshold * Dadima did d Arti and told Geet to enter in d house kicking that Kalash * Geet did that and Maan and Geet entered in d huge living room together .

Maan: Dadima bas ab sab ho gaya na ,, aap chlo rest kero mai change kerke aapke room mei hi aata hoon BP aur sugar check kerna hei.

Dadima told Nakul to placed Geet's stuffs in Maan's room ,, Maan brought Dadima in her room and settled her in her bed ,, Geet followed them ,, she was very nervous seeing d huge and beautiful KM and she realised that this family is very rich * Maan came back and checked her BP and sugar ,, both wr lil high * Nakul brought d dinner in Dadima's room , Maan was helping Dadima in everything and Geet was looking all from distance ,, Dadima told them to take d dinner ,, Maan served his and started eating sitting near Dadima ,, Dadima shook her head in disappointment ,, Maan se kuch hope nahi ki ja sakti .

Dadima: Geet beta tum bhi apni plate laga lo jo aapko pasand ho but Geet denied and said that she wd take later .

Dadima forced her and lastly she took very lil just for formality ,, she was in a new place with unknown ppl and missing her house though they wr their relatives but she spent many yrs with them ,, Darji , Rajinder and Brij talk to her very less but taiji ,preeto and Rajji wr normal ,, Taiji gave orders only for works ,, Rajji accompanied her in school/study and with Preeto she did all d work ,, for elders girls must learn house hold works and cooking * Darji and Brij wr very strict and allow Geet and Rajji to study only for d sake of society ,, Darji was d Surpanch of d village and d girls education was free from Govt ,, if d surpanch of d village won't allow their daughters to get education then what he wd reply to others ,, he allowed distance education to Geet for her graduation ,, Rajji was in school * women wr not allow to argue with men and they ate after taking d meals by men * this was d 1st time in many yrs that she was taking meals like this ,, whole family * Geet hardly swallowed some food ,, Nakul secured d plates and brought back d trolley ,, Geet didn't know how to talk and how to ask for some work ,, Dadima knew that Geet was also tired so told her to go to sleep * she took d intercom from her side table and called a servant and when he came Dadima ordered him to show Maan's room .

Dadima: Geet beta jao change kerke rest karo kal din mei araam se baate karenge .

Geet: aapki tabiyat theek nahi ,mai aapke pass so jati hoon .

Maan: Dadima ke pass mei hoon unki care ke liye , mai yahan so raha hoon .

He replied coldly while typing in his laptop ,, she silently left after servant who showed her d room ,, she entered in d room and her eyed widened .

It was a king size luxurious bedroom , very beautiful ,, she slowly came near d bed , touched that .. very soft and spongy , ye Maan ka hei ,, her tummy felt a somersault ,, she blushed and a sweet smile crept on her lips ,, she looked around ,, adore everything ,, sat on d bed with thudding heart circling her knees with her arms ,, she felt that d room was warm as compare to outside weather and witnessed a warmer in a corner ,, there was Maan's photo on side table ,, she was watching d pic when she heard d sound of opening d door ,, she turned her face ,, Maan entered in d room and gave her a look ,, he slowly went towards d window and stopped there looking outside ,,,, Geet ,, Geet .

*****

She jerk opened her eyes and find Maan there lil bent ,, he was looking at her confused ,, when Maan came in room he find her sleeping on d settee cuddled like a small baby ,, he was confused why she was sleeping here leaving d comfy bed ,, he called her name,, Geet,, 2-3 times but she didn't wake up then he tapped on her shoulder to wake her up .


Maan : tum yahan ku so rahi ho ?

Geet looked at him and then around and realised that it's morning ,, she didn't know when she slept last night lost in her thoughts after Maan's avowal for their relation and marriage .

Maan: tum theek ho ?

She nodded in a yes ,, she didn't want to talk to him ,, last night broke all her hopes and she felt that she was an unwanted thing for him ,, just a thing of satisfaction for his dear Dadima ,, d very person who is in front of her belonged to someone else ,, a stranger ,, she composed herself and stood up ,, she moved away having a proper distance from him ,, Maan looked at her and thought that she belonged to village so behaving like this ,, he shrugged his shoulders carelessly.

He moved in d washroom to freshen up and then to his gym ,, she was still standing there ,, after his departure she look for her suitcase and opened that ,, took out her dress and went in d washroom to take bath ,, she cursed herself to wake up late ,, came down ,went to see Dadima and touched her feet ,, Dadima was up ,, smiled at her and blessed her .

Geet: ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hei ?

Dadima: hum theek hei Geet ,, aap jaldi uth gai ?

Geet: nahi aaj to der ho gai ,, wo nayi jagah se pata nahi chala .

Dadima : koi baat nahi .

Geet: wo nasty mei kya banau aap bata dijiye .

Dadima: Geet beta wo sab Nakul ker lega ,, aap fikar matt kero ( she caressed Geet's cheek lovingly) aap bas pooja ker lo aur kuch meetha bana lo bhog ke liye .


Geet: kada-prasaad bana du aur kheer ?

Dadima smiled: jo tumhara dil kare .

Dadima narrated her d kitchen route and informed Nakul to help her on intercom ,, Geet left from there , she entered in d kitchen and looked awed ,, it was a big mod kitchen ,, Nakul wished her and showed her d things though she was familiar with all d equipment , but in HP d kitchen was very simple .

She prepared d Kada-prasaad for bhog and placed milk for kheer side by side ,, Nakul was watching that she is very fast n perfect in work ,, she asked for mandir room to Nakul .

Geet: Nakul bhaiya aap ye kheer dekhenge , mai pooja kerke aati hoon .

Nakul was touched with her addressing Bhaiya ,, he smiled and told her d direction of d mandir room ,, he liked her humble nature ,, she respect even servants too.


Precap - 1st dose of NPM ...😳😉



Part - 5


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

update pad liya meine ..commented too


😃 Hi tabby...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

dinner karke aathi hoon


😃 priya diner ho gaya kya..??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😃 priya diner ho gaya kya..??



haan hogaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
muhje chod ke khaal liya 😲

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