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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazin update. Waitin for the next update..😃

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Hello friends...Lakshu,priya,lily,dona,mauaa, Avi, BB,chawi,
rashmi,sona nd mona...🤗
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hello di's chavi,avi,mauaa,BB 🤗
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wait karo di wo to gayab ho gayi hai 😆
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon


wait karo di wo to gayab ho gayi hai 😆

ok mei dinn karke aathi hoon
tab tho updt hogaya hoga na😆
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ok mei dinn karke aathi hoon
tab tho updt hogaya hoga na😆


nahi pata 😆
par aap dinner kar ke aao 😛
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 71


Next day Maan was there at late night ,, Dadima nd Geet wr waiting for him ,, He hugged Dadima nd gave a side hug to Geet ,, Nakul brought coffee for them ,, they chat for an hr nd then Dadima told him to take some sleep ,, he was also feeing jet leg nd went to his room ,, Geet slept with Dadima for this nyt too.

In morning all wr up nd relaxed coz it was Sunday ,, Geet was in her room nd Man came to Dadima's room ,, he took his morng coffee with her nd that time Dadima told him all d happenings of last week ,, he was shocked nd angry .

Maan: Dadima aapne mujhe kaha ku nahi ?

Dadima: we r handling d matter nd didn't want to disturbed u there .

Maan: how he got these closely -held- shares ?

Dadima: he got them last yr from some ex KC employees .

Maan: market per effect pada kya?

Dadima: haan aur abhi bhi thodi down hei but last 3 days se constant hei ,, Geet did some efforts for that.

Maan was overwhelmed by Geet's efforts ,, it was beyond his imagination that Geet cd do this for him ,, Dadima informed him that they wr planning for a press -conf.

Maan: hmmm ,, OK let me think what to do ,, after this week i'll show that RM stars ,, they talked for some more time nd then Maan directly came to meet Geet,, he just wanted to crush her in his arms * Geet was enjoying d pleasant morning near d pool after taking bath ,, Maan came from behind nd called her in a husky voice ,, his heart was heavy nd chocked with emotions .

Maan: Geet .

Geet turned nd gave a smile seeing him there : Hi , GM .

Maan didn't reply nd with a swift move he came close nd hugged her tightly saying ,, thanku so much Geet ,, thanku so much ,, 1st Geet was startled with this sudden hug but when she heard his thanks chanting she understood that Dadima told him everything * She too was very touched with his efforts ,, for her he took risk to show her Rajji's clippings nd gave her info about HP ,, she reciprocated d hug nd thanked him too * they remained like this for long ,, both wr getting a solace in each other arms ,, Geet felt a protection nd relief there nd Maan was feeling that he got a very precious thing ,, they parted after getting some peace .

Maan: Geet , tum janti ho tumne kya kiya hei?

Geet looked at him confused ... usne kya kiya?

Maan: kyajaroorat thi essa kerne ki ?

Geet: kya galat kiya maine? She was still very confused.

Maan: apni puri saving use kerli wo shares lene ke liye ,, Geet uss saving ki value unn shares se bahot bahot jyada hei ,, wo tumhare mom -Dad ki money hei .

Geet smiled: Maan tumne responsibility di thi Dadima aur sab ki to uss waqt mujhe jo sahi laga maine ker diya.

Maan: ku mere guilt ko aur bada rahi ho,, mai ye deserve nahi kerta .

Geet: to responsibility ku di mujhe ? ku ye haq diya ki mai koi bhi decision le lu tumhare behalf per ? bolo.

Maan: tum janti ho , tumhe nahi kahu to kise kahu?

Geet: Maan tum kerty pahale ho aur sochty baad mei ho ,, tumhare liye kuch karo to musibat aur na karo to bhi musibat ,, she pouted nd turned her face.

Maan smiled ,, cupped her face to make her to look at him ,, u r right ,, buddhu hun mai ,, bahot pareshaan kerta hu na tumhe ? sorry .

Geet: ab ye sorry ki mala matt japne lagna ,, list bahot lambi hei ,,, Maan thanku so mauch for Rajji's pics , mujhe do na wo ,, dekhne hei .

Maan: Oh ,,haan ,, chalo mei tumhare liye kuch aur bhi surprise laya hoon.

He held her hand nd brought her in his room ,, he made her sit on d bed nd opened his bag ,, he handed some belongings of her mom nd dad ,, Geet eyes widened in shock seeing them ,, she looked at him with open mouth ,, these things wr in Handa haweli then how he got them ? she fumbled with words nd tears drop down from her eyes ,, she caressed them lovingly ,, it was really a big surprised for her ,, she never hopped in her dreams that she cd see or get these things in her life .

Geet: ye ,, ye to wahan ,,

Maan wiped her eyes nd nodded in yes : haan ye maine wahin se li ,, kaise wo baad mei bataunga pahale inhe dekho aur khush ho ,, bas ab rona nahi ,, tumhari har cheej maine wapas le li hei unse aur Khurana haweli mei secure hai ,, kuch mai le aaya as ur Bday gift ,, belated Happy Bday princess.

She didn't find words to speak nd hugged him tightly ,, Maan .

Maan: sshhh ,, Geet aansu nahi , now everything is urs,, he secured her in his arms lovingly.

There sweet nd emotional moments broke with buzzing of intercom ,, Maan attend that ns Dadima called them for BF .


Precap - Happy moments ,, Maan got d award ...


Part - 72



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
maan is back from india...
dadima told him all the hungama which happened in his absence...
maan talked with geet...n thanked her...
both spent some lovely moments...
maan gave her her parents things...
loved it...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago

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