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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1. FROM WHERE IT ALL STARTED!

Maan knew that he was seeing an angel, the moment he saw her. Looking like an apsara from heaven, she descended from the stairs and Maan felt his breath hitch! His heart came up to his mouth the moment her eyes met his and he knew; he knew that his whole life was going to change from the very moment. One glimpse of her and he was lost to the world. He continued to stare as she passed by him. She did not notice him as she walked by him but smiled at his brother standing nearby. Maan frowned; Dev ko smile aur mujhe dekha bhi nahi? Maan felt hot jealousy bubble inside him and he had to remind himself that Dev was in love with NT and not with the angel who passed by him. Mesmerized by her beauty and her smile, Maan asked Dev about her only to come to know that she was Geet, NT's cousin sister!

Geet! What a beautiful name! Maan absentmindedly noted as he stood staring at her. Suddenly, Geet came towards him and before he could move she grabbed Dev's hand and dragged him to the middle of the room. Maan was stupefied as Geet teased and coaxed Dev into singing a song. It was Dev and NT's sangeet and Geet wanted Dev to sing for NT. Dev shied to sing in front of so many people at first but after getting a loving glance from his future wife, he took the mike from Geet's hand and started crooning.

Jab Se Tere Naina

Mere Naino Se

Laage Re

Maan stared at Geet as she clapped eagerly for Dev.

Jab Se Tere Naina

Mere Naino Se

Laage Re

Maan's eyes refuse to move away from Geet's angelic face.

Tab Se Deewana Hua

Jag Se Bagaana Hua

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

As Maan stared, Geet's eyes wandered across the room and reached his.

Jab Se Tere Naina

Mere Naino Se

Laage Re

Her eyes widened and she looked away but Maan kept on staring at her.

Jab Se Mila Hai Tera Ishaara

Tab Se Jagi Hai Bechainiyaan

He observed as Geet dragged NT to the middle of the room and made her stand beside Dev.

Jab Se Mila Hai Tera Ishaara

Tab Se Jagi Hai Bechainiyaan

She pulled NT's mother to the floor and made her dance with her.

Jab Se Hui

Sargoshiyaan

Tab Se Badhi hai

Madhoshiyaan

Soon Geet was dragging everyone to the dance floor to dance with her.

Jab Se Jude Yaara

Tere Mere Mann Ke

Dhaage Re

Maan watched as she spun NT around with both the girls giggling.

Tab Se Deewana Hua

Jag Se Bagaana Hua

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

His eyes widened as Geet suddenly came towards him, grabbed his hand and pulled him to the dance floor.

Jab Se Hui Hai Tujhse Sharaarat

Tab Se Gaya Hai Chain-O-Karaar

Geet danced in front of him all the while smiling at him.

Jab Se Hui Hai Tujhse Sharaarat

Tab Se Gaya Hai Chain-O-Karaar

She pouted when she noticed that Maan was not dancing.

Jab Se Tera

Anchal Dhala

Tab Se Koi

Jaadu Chala

She grabbed his hands and placed one on her waist and other in her hand.

Jab Se Tujhe Paaya

Yeh Jiya Dhak Dhak

Bhaage Re

They swayed to the music as Maan stared into Geet's eyes.

Tab Se Deewana Hua

Jag Se Bagaana Hua

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

Rab Bhi Deewana Laage Re

Her eyes, her smile mesmerized him as they continued to dance oblivious to the whole world.

Jab Se Tere Naina

Mere Naino Se

Laage Re

"Maan beta! Kahaan kho gaye aap?", Daadima tapped on his shoulder and Maan came out of his thoughts only to be shocked as he noticed that he was still standing in the corner of the room while Geet danced with others in the middle. It was all his imagination! His imagination! Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? Maan wondered.

Daadima's repeated tapping on his shoulder brought Maan out of his shock and he looked at Daadima in confusion, "Haan Daadima!" Daadima frowned, "Kahaan kho gaye aap beta?" Maan fumbled for a while but managed to reply, "Ek... Meeting ke bbbaare mein soch raha tha!" The moment the reply was out of his mouth, he stormed out of the room. Daadima pouted, "Kya Maan beta aap bhi! Khayaalon mein bhi meeting hi aati hai aapko?" She huffed and walked away. If only she knew what Maan was thinking!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Before you move on, please stop and have a look at the banner below this post! Once done, thank the maker Priya Di as I had only planned to write Dh Dh as a one shot and forget about it, but I saw this banner and suddenly I had a flash of Maan staring as Geet danced in Sangeet while Jab Se Tere Naina played in the background and before my eyes the whole series of Dhoom Dhadakka was created! So don't forget to thank her as she is indirectly the reason behind this series!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
wow me first😊 Fab update! ⭐️Beautifully written! 👏Superb song! Love at first sight 4 Maan! He sees her is head over heels in love! Admiring her cute gestures! Maan jealous wen she is smiling at Dev! HE chides himself! Maan enquires abt her! She has a beautiful name! Maan shocked wen she gets Dev to sing! n den gets everyone dancing! He is staring at her! His apsara! She notices n looks at him! Maan imaging Geet pulling him n dancing wid him! Dadi interrupts his thoughts! Maan embarrassed n covers up! He lies that he is thinking abt wrk n leaves! Dadi wonders abt him! Bt she does nt knw the truth! update soon! 😊 lovely banner Priya!
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous Update. Loved it. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ for this story,
Edited by fffan123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
almost missed it
if only dadi knew
damn that was so funny
okay not funny but cute
he is gone
hook line and sinker baby
ab inka kuch nahin ho sakta
really dude
jealous of dev
when you know he loves nt only
bless who would have thought
he would fall in love at first sight
but of course he did
and boy was he mesmerised
and lost in her
haiyye can picture it in my mind him doing that
man this was so cute
hmmm what a dream that was
as if she would do that so soon maan
but like where your imagination sorry kalpana is going
cheers for pm
this is start of it all naa
and there is more to come yipeee
like the little banner pic at end
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
going to read dhoom dhadaka now.
Since this story tells how Maan planned his love story this is a prequel not a sequel lol!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it dear...
hailaa,, ye kya ..?? sab dream tha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
awesome ud
maan lost looking at geet
maan asked dev about her
she so her bubbly side
and it is starting of love at first sight
he lie to daadi
and he knows he lost his heart to that apsara
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...maan is so mesmerized by geet...par ye kya...😲...maan singh khurana giving lamest excuse that he was thinking about meeting...🤣...jhoot to dhang ka bol lete...😆...aur daadi ne bhi maan liya...😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update 👏
love maan staring session 😳
most fuuny thing when dadima asked abt wht was he thinking thn he reply tht he was thinking abt meeting 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BB lov dis idea of series,,,,
jab se tere naina,,,mera fvrt song fits as title 👍🏼
ist prt maan lattu on geet pehle nasar ne aisa jadu kar dia,,,,khyalon mein dance kar lia
aur cid dadi ko meeting bolna pada,,,,😆
geet ko pta hi nehi chala hye,,,,,
song ke saath saara ist prt ankhon ke saamne pic ki tarah chal reha hei,,,,😳
u r rocking BB,,,,👏👏
special thnx 2 priya,,,,😳

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