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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

sry 4 d late comment!

D previous update was amazing with the way maaneet spent time with one another! d way maan controlling was soo thoughtful!

u know, maaneet's love story is so beautiful n I always wondered did such love story exist for real! N guess wat it does!

Recently, a very renowned politician n lawyer, Karpal Singh passed away n his love story with his wife is indeed so beautiful as well!

he saw his wife first when he was 16 n she was 8 n he fell for her but waited for her till she completed schooling first n then he approached her but d 1st thing he told her was I want to meet your father and ask yr hand in marriage!


now back to yr this recent update...

this update was beautiful n fulll of passion! d way u described their dance... uff marjawa...

d way geet wanted maan to open up to her n maan controlling his needs n wanting...just no words for it!


Ab tujhe hi kuch karna padega Giit, I tell myself. Warna Baba Maan Singh Khurana will be miserable and so will you.
I am a Maan addict now, a Maan deewani. Without his loving, his naughtiness, his besharmi, I feel bereft. Life seems incomplete, like there is no spice in life, no colors in it.

loved this dialogue a lot... geet has definitely progressed well! actually d whole part had me grinning all d way!

lols... mentioning SRK at such a moment was epic! n i have to agree to maan's comment about SRK's abs. n then came salman...

geet's seduction made hell loose for maan... wonder when she's in full form n released, maan ka kya haal hoga... but must say geet was successful to bring maan back into d mood!

wow...maan ectually wanted to celebrate SR before wedding n geet's answer must have been like a bucket of cold icy water on his desires!

Right now she is in kindergarden and I am on graduate level.

this made me burst out loud! god... graduate? more like PHD!
D book was part hilarious!

the whole was hilarious! thoroughly enjoyed it! but wat happened during d trailer...??? :P

dev and maan's plan was awesome! maan became an actor! he definitely deserves an award for his hardwork frm trailer, explaining facts of life to geet n being sneaky!

daadi is sooo coolll

now waiting for your next maaneet thud!!!

all in all, this update was a total package of entertainment

Thank you for the story you gave me. A lot of girls are like Geet and at the time of our wedding all of us are scared of what we have to face. There are so many questions and doubts.
I wanted to show that with the right Ma(a)n, everything can go smoothly😆
Thanks for a lovely comment. You made my day!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow wat a update..oh god.. u made me speechless.. thanku for giving a very lovely heart touching update.. just one word BEAUTIFUL.. yes its beautiful poem..i felt a feather caressing my heart..


wow lovely emotional touching cute update.te way geet ki resolution to beak my maan ki wall and bring my old naughty maan was lovely cute.. geet making my maan to feel jealous with srk and salu and his gussa was lovely cute..so she is seducing him without knowing wat effect she is having on him.. song selection and they pictiurization was lovely touching..te way geet ki innocent seduce making my maan to crush her and but wen he asked abt pills oh god me too fall on te ground seeing geet ki innocent speech, bechare my maan too thought for a sec tat his geet became matured but all his thought went in vain wen she said abt her infection pills, was lovely cute..maan babu u have to teach her everything, but u so bad u read everything without ur geet😉 😉..te way my maan laughing making his geet to pout and wen she decide to ask pinky his possessive was lovely cute.. te way geet lost in her speech and my maan in her taking her sari to drown her in his passion was lovely cute ..te way khuranas bros ki plan, but naughty dadi gusseing abt his devils grandson was lovely cute.. te way geet was happy feeling my maan and they naughtyness was lovely..i love te update so much..

Thank you so much. You always praise my writing so much. I don't feel I deserve it but I accept it gladly😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Misti you surely lost the plot😆
I was only meaning Guroor's Maan! Where did passion come from?... i think we left it in last page only :P Well i was saying i was pissed off by Guroor's Maan n ended up venting my anger in the form of words.

Abt Muskaan and her Maan... i have almost written a thesis! Me and pallu di (another crazy fan of muskan)... we toh have spents nights discussing/dissecting Muskan's Maan😆 If you are MG FF reader you are ought be Maan fan..haina?
Passion ke baare mein i totally second you... i tld how embarrassed i was when i read PE but again Muskan ki kamaal, i become besharam :P

P,S: i got my first job😎 Yayyy!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Dono ki beech ki duriya mit gayi with additional gyaan free to Geet 😳
Par yeh tho sirf trailers hai ...
awesome update Avi... You know ur updates could be injurious to mind 😛

😆
I think there are many more on IF who could be more damaging.. mera toh kindergarden level hai unke samne😆
Thanks Praf😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: COLOGY

Misti you surely lost the plot😆

I was only meaning Guroor's Maan! Where did passion come from?... i think we left it in last page only :P Well i was saying i was pissed off by Guroor's Maan n ended up venting my anger in the form of words.

Abt Muskaan and her Maan... i have almost written a thesis! Me and pallu di (another crazy fan of muskan)... we toh have spents nights discussing/dissecting Muskan's Maan😆 If you are MG FF reader you are ought be Maan fan..haina?
Passion ke baare mein i totally second you... i tld how embarrassed i was when i read PE but again Muskan ki kamaal, i become besharam :P

P,S: i got my first job😎 Yayyy!

Congrats Nethra👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Congrats Nethra👏


Awww! such a cute wish <3
Thank you so much Avi 😃⭐️

I caught the single rose falling😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ishika18

O M G wt a hot update. i m still blushing.hye babaji sr par kya hoga?

Itne shocked reactions ke baad, should I even write SR scene?😆
Seedha bacche aa jaane wale hai ab..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: COLOGY


P,S: i got my first job😎 Yayyy!

Congratulations Nethra...
yel sikthu...??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: COLOGY


Awww! such a cute wish <3
Thank you so much Avi 😃⭐️

I caught the single rose falling😳😆

Those are rose petals on your path to success.😃
You are welcome.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Itne shocked reactions ke baad, should I even write SR scene?😆
Seedha bacche aa jaane wale hai ab..😆


Omg! this is hilarious🤣😲
Readers will die with desperation only😆

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