THE LOCKET (21) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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AISHAJS

@AISHAJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Thank you for updating, just live the innocence and naughtiness combined. Really beautifully written.🤗

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Cology Ji:

Bear Hug back to you to Ji🤗

Yup Now I feel like you have mirrored my thoughts!! hum Ainey main chuppan chuppi khel rahein hai kya!!!🤣 But I agree to all that you have mentioned and not just that but I learnt something new back from you: '..reading does not make a person experienced but only informative'👏

Now that Avi ji knows that we both belong to the singletons' club..with Besharmi I will confess that we have collected enough data to outdo our future hub2bs' !!

**********I joke☢️ I am petrified!!!********

Khair that's for us to not worry about for NOW!!

In Geet style.. Zindagi main aur bhi gham hai.. Mohabbat ke Alaawa!!

Dry story🤣... I am telling you I have never read anything as informative in the sense of literacy of writing and language/grammar as much as I have while reading Hasini's work!! its nowhere dry.. its a fountain of lush knowledge...

I was so happy when she came back here to write a new FF called Mudra..but could neither find the FF nor her!

Since you mentioned Guroor.. Have you read Muski's new SS kya?! left me reeling with shock 😲 and battered! ..love her work though... I just wrote back to her in the same daze! and then came on Avi's thread to bring back some life in me😳😃😆

Avi Ji:

Awww... Dev!!! Rab ne Banadi Jodi

Though I don't know you too well Ji😳😃 But I cannot imagine you as the full to full Avi in Naintara avatar... For me you are Bambi and I-Star mix... Ehh😆 well there is a saying that a writer lives in all his/her characters! 😉

Happy for you Ji that you have experienced the bliss of marriage and more so of companionship that's to last a lifetime and forever onwards... Nazar na lage☯️

Avi...I actually feel bad for taking up space again and again here!! I just hope others don't mind man😆

Waittinggg * yeh my idea of spamming!! even this is novel-like/size!🤣

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

lovely update
hailaaa yeh geet to maan ko maar hi daigee apni innocence se
pehle itna tempt karti hain
phir kehti hain di hain naa pill doctor ne last week🤣🤣
bechaara maan kya hoga uska😆😆😆

or geet ka yeh "it" my god avi mera hans hans ke pait dard karne lagg padha hain😆😆🤣🤣

love the pay back u wrote still maintaining the jhalli geet's in her mode😉😉😉 and doing what she can do.
but for now I am okk with this but
shaadi ke baad hamien bold geet's pay back chaahiye
or ab matt kehna ke likh ke too word to word😆
woh kaam tumhara hain😉😉😉 mein to comment hi karne wali hoon
or hamari maange poori karo ka naara lagane wali hoon😉😉🤗
is se jayada mujhse expect naa karna🤣🤣 warna gadhbadh ho jayeegee😆😆😆

ohh love dadi and her jasoosi is back on now😆😆😆

she is such hilarious in all her modes😆😆

wonder how will they meet with each other chupp chupp ke😉😉

if i forget anything i will be back to write😳😳

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Beautiful👏⭐️.

Geet thinks she can go to the library and get the books and read. 😆😆No wonder Maan couldn't control his laughter.

Pinky has done enough for once, Maan is wise to teach her himself than let her do it.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

lovely beautiful banner dear

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

ohhh my dear darlinggg 🤗

y u mad at me??

I love TL.. and ur Geetu ..more than Maanu though.. what else i can offer..when so many ppl praise u for ur varied thoughts and frankly ur readers make me speechless or in other words.. they make my mouth SHUT!! 😆 😆

I love u aviii 🤗

but heck Ur DEV is making me go bonkers with his sexy sauve char!! ☺️ he and Vyan.. are my dream guys.. Maan is the Perfectionist but Dev is reality!! 😃

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COLOGY

@COLOGY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Avi we are waiting for official confirmation!

Lol... maine toh already pange leliye hain tujhse... so this time i'll write sometime with your approval... End mein mat kehna ki humne tumhara threaad ka Satya nash kardiya😆

No yaar seriously i don't want to have sour feelings again...n i'm very emotional abt others perception on what i write in their thread. I never visited TL thread until recently...

@Misty

I had similar experience with Muskan's also! Phooti hui kismat... i was pissed off with Maan n ended up writing a big analysis on him ...but guess what Muskan was not happy with my words i guess. So i had to deduce my commenting to mere two words for next updates...Amazing updates! That was the first time i ever wrote a 2 word comment! It is inappropriate to write it here... and i know i can't stop myself from giving lambi lambi comments to ppl who deserves it😆

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Ann

@annbell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

fabulous update .. 😃 ..

its fun to watch a bold yet an innocent geet .. 😆 .. but poor maan had a hard tym..

dev n his plans .. but who can outsmart daadima ..

she knows her grandsons too well ..

enjoyed the update .. 😃 ..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

part 91
awesome dear...
excellent...
i just loved it so much...
am so loving this...
my Geet is such a cute baby...
and Maan is lucky to have her and also she him...
the love they have for each other is so strong...
OMG hahaha Geet baby is trying to seduce Maan...
bechara Maan hes already seduced and her antics are gonna be uncontrollable for him...
indeed shes his bholi bhali Geet...
Geet baby u dont know what u are doing and also to Maan...
hahaha shes instigating him in the names of SRK and Salman...
and the reaction was so apt...
my God that was so so so romantic...
so lovely...
poor Maan seriously he was thinking entirely something else but here Geet baby has no idea what she doing...
and Maan finally came to know about her lil' knowledge...
hahaha that was so hilarious...
and Maan at this rate u wont allow Geet to converse with anyone...
shes telling about her tablets for fever and Maan was thinking those pills...
yaar this is too good and so entertaining dear...
well they had a good time in Manali...
seriously Dev and Maan are so naughty...
and CID Daadima is too good...
shes gonna catch them red-handed...
u keep writing like this and i will enjoy a lot...
cont soon dear...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Ooo Emmm Geee.. Itna Hottt Hottt Update... Avii din ba din Besharam hoti ja rahi hai 😆
Talking experience kia 😳 😆 😉
Maahii my one of Fav song sequenc on MG.. Full of Love, Passion n what not 😳 😉
Haila senti hote hote in dono ki Rajdhani express patri se direct Sahi station pohnch gai 😳 😆
Two brother Khuranas are Sair tou Dadi Sawa Sair 🤣
Superbbb enjoyed it fullessttt 🤗 🤗