Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

Not a single pov of maan


I'm sorry, but no POV of Maan.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prema_ks

Loving this new Tom and Jerry. Maan is surely getting entertainment.😆

What he feels seeing this side of Geet?


I'm glad you're enjoying it! 😃

What Maan feels will come in due time. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ramarora

lovely update
completely enjoying geet's jealous side
please add more romance to it and update sooner if possible
thank you😊


Thank you! I am glad to know you're enjoying it, and I will surely work on your suggestions. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



I agree with Muskan about this.

Even I wonder about these two.

When she does eventually find herself, how much courage is it going to take on Maan's part considering how she left him

I am sure there are circumstances that we don't know, but it is rather hard to trust again.

@Bold: This one line of yours is actually true for Geet as much as it is true for the readers. There are things about Maan which Geet does not know about, and those things are going to make it all the more difficult for her to hain that trust in his eyes, and on top of that, for Maan to trust her the way she would want him to.
When he brings Jess into the situation it almost seems to me that he is pointing out that there are others who want him, even if she doesn't.

It is a cover but it leaves him double vulnerable when it will be exposed..

We must not forget though, that the more vulnerable he will feel himself to be, the more he will step back and raise his guards, and consequently, the more Geet will have to make efforts to reach him.
Update soon otherwise I promise to keep irritating you like this..😲with my half baked theories and suppositions..
I'm more than eager to read what you're calling half-baked theories and suppositions. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

njoyed th whole part...vry cool n calm maan..n jealous geet if m i rght...her expressions so obvious vyan noticed...did also maan.. me also eagerly wtng to c whn changed had occurred


I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Maan surely did notice, only, his way of dealing with things is different from that of Vyan, especially when it relates to Geet.
The next chapters answers some of your questions, I think.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.

gud one. Geet was big J. really happy with tat.

busy, mayyo?? u updated after one month and 2 days. 😛




Thanks, Mannu! 😃

Yes, been kind of busy. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

i sooo much enjooyed n loved watching the antics of a very very jealous and irritated geet...i knew this MD would be Maan...😆😆afteer a loong tym you updated😊but thanku for updating...waiting for more😃


I am really pleased you enjoyed it, Purvi! 😃

I know I updated after a very long time and I hope I will not take as long a break again.
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

J is for Jolt of surprise the MD gave.

Y is for "yayy" feeling in me right now. 😃
J is for a Jellie fish Geet, who is confused at the boss and the ex neighbors tete-a-tete.
O is for the only one who has the power to make her (and us too!) jellyfish. 😳
J is for jolting her into awareness slowly but surely.
U is for the upper hand Maan has on her. 😆
J is for just toying with her are you Maan?
M is for the Maan-magic he is weaving her into.
J is for a just plainly transparent in her jealousy Geet.
A is for the awareness of her own jealousy which Geet still needs.
J is for Jerk that Jaanu is pretending to be.
D is for the darling that he is. Jerk or Jaanu doesn't matter. 😳
J is for Jaded aura that Maan is pretending to cultivate.
E is for the ease with which he is doing it, haina? 😆
J is for jibes delivered and undoubtedly hit whomsoever they were aimed at.
M is for, my my! What aim and precision! 😃
J is for just whom is he going to end up hurting by doing this? Himself or her?
E is for, every happiness has to be fought for, even if it means you hurt yourself temporarily.
J is just let him explore all the avenues. For all roads lead to the lady who is slowly letting the mists of self containment around her part.
H is for the hullabaloo his explorations are causing in her life. 😆
J is the joy I feel at receiving my gift with my name on it.
A is for the alleviation I have gotten at finally having given your gift.
J is the just not enough feeling I get after seeing the update.
P is for the pleasant mood your comments has pushed me into!
J is for just reminding you of the remaining interest I still have to collect.😆
P is for my pea-sized eyes which grew into pan-size after the reminder. 😆
J is for Just love you and thank you for this wonderful update
Y is for, you don't need to thank me! 🤗
J is for just missed you terribly and welcome back.
🤗
H is for happiness I found to be back! 🤗
And H is also for, have you noticed the message above? 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



Oh! 😆
Where did this come from? I didn't say anything about getting you a jiju yet. 😆



😆 Waise bhi tum kitna kuch bolti ho! 😲

Maybe

perhaps

can't say

not sure

😲

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