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Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
I seldom wonder when and how such an affection was born
An ordinary day it was...when he had slipped and there he was lying at her feetWas it the care in her voice r the smile on her face as she moved away frm him that had made the ordinary day special?When had such affection spread its root?Was it during the days when he secretly watched her while she remained unaware?R the first tym he complimented her shirt rather than her?R on the trip running away hand in hand from the jungle lest they would be eaten by animals?R the moment when she had assured his mother would be alright?At ranbirs marraige?Or was it on their date?Was it the magic of the simple kiss r the innocent confession?I m still pondering how and when such an affectionwas born.A simple college romance only that it did not reach its destination.A heart wrenching separation it was...Was that the moment when the affection was born?The time moved and they came back after 7yrs gap7 yrs gap ...and it brought lot of memories and changesEverything seemed fresh and changed and new"He has changed terribly",my mind cried out aloud."Even she isnt the same.",my heart whispered.Only that i hadnt changed ,the affection for them hadnt changed .it seemed to have multiplied.Only that the heart craved for their previous avatars.How did they change so much? Oh i so miss the old maan! He has changed drastically. I dont like it this way. Even amidst these cribbings the love for them increased with timeIf only i knew how difficult it is to set the broken pieces of your heart and smile to the world as if nothing happened.If only i knew what a vulnerable situation it is to see your beloved leave u in front of your eyes and still remain emotionless.If only i knew how difficult yet necessary it is to move ahead and take control when every part of your existence cries out for what is left behind.Then was it her fault?Isnt it difficult to make choice between two most imp people f ur life?Wouldnt i choose the one whom i owe my existence to?
If only i knew how it felt to know the reason u were reluctant to give a chance never existedEven after all this realizations i seem to miss the old romance. The change doesnt allow the romanceBut then i realize again doesnt all this change paves way to a better tommorrow.. two fierce lovers ...a lot of passion ...love and romance.No aloofness no reluctance no vyan no jess nobody to stop themWell i still cant pinpoint the incident r tym that made me attached to this story but but i must tell u how much i adore this story.That is why time and again i come here to eat ur head
thank u fr writing such a beautiful story:)
Nivi, you do not have any idea of how much such kind words as yours can mean to a writer. It made me want to smile and cry at the same time. It made me want to squeal in joy at knowing that a story written by me can garner such an affection from a reader, and it made me want to go back in time just so I could continue writing IOYSM without ever ending it. But then again, if IOYSM had not ended, there would be no chance for a fierce, passionate romance, just like you have pointed out. If IOYSM had not ended the way it did, with their separation, there would not be a lesson learnt for a girl who was a reluctant dreamer, and for a guy who gave his all to be heartbroken. If IOYSM had not ended the way it did, two souls would not come together with greater force and intensified attraction.
Thank you, thank you so so much, for making me feel these emotions!
I am finding my words short to reply to your comment.
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