Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

fabulous update. you updated after a long time. try to update sooner. this is afabulous story.



Thank you!
I know, and I will try to be more frequent.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Interesting part
Doesn't she realize
If vyan can notice then
Maan could actually see through her
Wonder how he feels abt it
Probably he knows it all just waiting for her accept it
For just given upon it
Exactly! She is actually prejudiced towards Maan and she consciously or subconsciously chooses not to realise the truth.
Another point
While we r lost t torture geet is goinig through
Can't even imagine t vibes she gives to him will only freak him out
It took him a long time to build this himself
Normal & enjoying

& then same old her
Her half cooked emotions
Her feelings so evident
So much unset
It would take a whole lot effort to hold himself together
Not to think abt past
Not get carried away in those eyes that try to read him understand him
& does nothing abt it
He definitely need to be in check around her
More tightly guarding himself
She so much conveys her feelings indirectly
There are very few readers who have thought of this: of how Maan must feel to see her so close, how he must be holding himself together, how hard he must be trying to keep his guards up whenever he faces her... It can't be easy for him, can it, when she left him in a bereft condition?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

awesome ud

i think maan doing all this intentionally
to geet accept her own feelings
she J with jess


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Maan's intentions will be unfolded slowly, if there are any at all, in the first place.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

So now she is showing her emotions, unlike earlier. Loving it. But when she thought Vyan was too much of a gentleman to prode further, I felt like Uff ye ladki. Vyan toh faltu mein hi gaya.



Faaltu mein toh definitely nahin aaya hai. There is a purpose behind the presence of every person in our life, don't you think?
Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: docgurti

finally an update!!!!!!

loved it.😃😃

geet was J of jess...lovely..😆


maan geet working together.. interesting scenario...


will be waiting for next.


Thank you! I am glad you're liking it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

Maan ... Is actually acting weird ...lol

Irritated Geet ... in full form



He is, indeed! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

awesome part. Maan has changed obviously or is he showing it to geet.


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Geet will discover the truth soon enough!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



@Bold: what does that mean?


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Tum jiski hogi uski banogi na jaana, jaanu.. Babaji, yeh Mari bhi na!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

So now the chase begins...
Loved this part specially the hide some - show some expressions mode😉
Jess😕 and Maan😵
I can't see why not set Jess with Vyan
Maaneet bhi khush aur hum bhi khush😛
I think Vyan deserves better than Jess too.
Jokes apart
I just loved Maan today
He was truly a show stealer...he always is😳
But today he made it clear that Geet has to do a lot of damage control!
Yes, Geet has a lot of damage control to do. Let's see how she goes about it. But before that, she needs to understand this before.
She needs to come clean and plus have to make amends
No matter how much I would love to have Maaneet together but can't bring myself to forgive her so soon
Maan behavior justifies two possibility one he is trying to gauge her frame of mind and also provoke her to voice out her mind
I think it is kind of logical for you to be unable to forgive, and perhaps your forgiveness for her will come when she redeems herself, him and them.
As for Maan's behaviour, you will know more in the next chapter.

I totally agree with Muskan that its quite obvious that Maan knows it all as he is closely scrutinizing her each move and is all aware of her😳
Oh, he is not as oblivious as he portrays to be! 😉
Its was super update
Truly loved it
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I'm really glad, Heytal! Thank you! 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



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Tum jiski hogi uski banogi na jaana, jaanu..Babaji, yeh Mari bhi na!

😆



Oh! 😆
Where did this come from? I didn't say anything about getting you a jiju yet. 😆

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