Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Agar SBV chahiye tha

toh seedha seedha maang leti...


Mere dil ki baat padh li 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Mere dil ki baat padh li 😳



Ab iss baat ke charche saara zamaana karta hai, ye koi secret toh hai nahi... 😆 😆

update de do.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



Ab iss baat ke charche saara zamaana karta hai, ye koi secret toh hai nahi... 😆 😆

update de do.. 😃



Sach hi suna hai... Dil ki baat chhupaye nahin chhupti 😳

Update after the weekend. Will tell you the exact day afterwords.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mari come to my thread.. 😃 pg 60 onwards.. 😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Hello kittu! how r u?
I know the comment became too long . It wasnt supposed to be so..long . I thought zada bada nhi hai now that u pointed i realized ki kuch zada hi bada tha. It always happens with me .i start writing and then keep writing:D:p
by the way did u just call ur comments rambles r something no ways kittu ji i love reading all f them . Its my fav. Past time. And who calls those beautiful quotes just rambles it always leaves us enriching our knowledge. And other times when you are all in praise of fawad ...i like reading those as well fr i am myself a fawad fan.
While we r talking about fawad i remember mayyo mentioning that we can demand scenes and she ll include them well if u dont mind seeing ur love for vyan i.e fawad i'll ask her to bring someone named kittu r kitts who ll be working with maan . Okay we can call her katrina and our vyan who ll start liking her will give her a short name kitts r kittu ..you know ur vyan calling you bilkul pyaar se kittu darling:D:D:p
maza aayega .mayyo if u r reading this plzz. Include this one. That way we ll have double romance in the office. If it is too early to remove vyan frm maan geet story then no problem we will wait but do introduce her. It will be fun after all kittu is learning urdu and all and we can have vyan teaching kittu urdu ekdum direct contact kyun kittu.
After all this is said i hope kittu u didnt mind anything nothing said above is intented to hurt anybody.
It seems u r too popular nowadays making special appearances in the story TL.
Poor me i am still in the first thread f TL .started reading again frm yesterday. Imagine i am in 1st chapter and the story is now on verge of completing its 100th ch.
See i again started my bakar bakar. Bye kittu see u again. Take care.:):D


all i could see is my name ..vyan name ☺️ and Fawad...

let me complete it... my sis is soo geared up.. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

@Nivedita: Idea achha hai Katrina to Kittu. 😆 Let me note it down so I'll see if I can fit it.


hayyeee mere Pyaareee ppl!! 🤗 you all are darlings!!!

Angels in Disguise for sure!!! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Prelude:
Another day.. few more thoughts.. few more prejudices.. . and ...unnamed longing.. 😳

Vyan... her thoughts about him .. and she comparing Vyan to Maan.. i like it.. one does very unconsciously..

Vyan's personality, his attitude towards me reminded me of the Maan I had known seven years back. Known and cared for.

"had" - this one word reveals how much she is thinking of Maan.. and how deeply she is affected by his behavior and attitude towards life.. and Her

Is it wrong to draw conclusions from his behaviour?? No..not at all... its human mentality to draw conclusion from what ever you see..hear and listen...its their tendency to judge.. the first thing that is too common among humans is to Judge!! Thats what she did... u can name it as assumption too...

He was the kind who would go to any extent for the people he loved, who would not leave the side of his loved ones for a time longer than necessary. Where had that Maan gone? Was he still alive in the handsome and agile Maan, who I had not seen around his family during breakfast?

We know that Maan can go to any extent for the people he loved... and doesn't she knew the fact?? She knew it by heart... yet again.. the things you see and listen are sometimes too much to take...or its just that you cannot accept it.. u can say it slightly manipulates our mind and heart... we are too helpless in the matters of heart ... that too when our loved ones are involved.. we are too judgmental!!

Can we atleast see this that she is missing him dearly?? she is missing her maan who looks at her with all the love.. who poured all the tenderness .. and now all she could see is his Smirk ..😆😆 ishhh we die for his smirk.. and think about her situation.. she is too flustered.. 😳 she just cant express it.. even she falls for his charm.. isn't too prominent?? 😉😆

It takes time for her to come to terms and analyse few things around her... she is just taking what ever is shown to her...

i wanna go on with my thoughts and views about her.. but no.. few ppl here are too good with words.. i wil leave it to them 😆

and about Vyan ☺️ well... why she dint correct him about Vyan being boyfriend or not ... sometimes you just dont feel to correct ppl .. or it may be.. a part of her wants to know his reaction...😉😆

me tho happyily doing bhangra 🤣 meri itni kismat ki Vyan is my Boy Friend ☺️ ishhh u two are angels .. avi introduced my Prabhas.. and u gave me my Fawad...

anyways.. after that what ever happened.. is just too beautiful... 😳

Jack and rose ...facing each other.. and this is where they belonged.. and i second Avi ... no more comments on this part. 😆

i love this part splly... too much of love and tenderness in that small part of conversation.. indeed Tom and Jerry.. love to tease each other..

the smirk.. what can i say.. 😳 *sigh* fill the blanks mayyo...

"Let us be grateful to the people who make us happy; they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom."
- this is for you Mayyooo 🤗 Im more than glad to read something which just makes me happy... for Many Reasons!! 😳

Vyan did not like to shop, I discovered and I could not stop laughing at the faces he made whenever we entered a new shop. I told him many a times to go find himself an occupation but he persisted and stayed with us, citing the excuse of it being the last day of our holiday.

"Why don't you buy some gifts for your family, then?" I suggested when he refused to go away once again. "Might as well utilise your time fruitfully if you so want to stay!"

"Good idea." He grimaced and I laughed. "But the problem is, I suck at shopping! I can't pick anything for them."

"I'll help you." I volunteered. "You just tell me a little bit about every member of your family and I'll help you choose something for them."

He was relieved with the suggestion and we went around shops to pick gifts for his family.


Ishhh its me again ☺️ ,... hey bhagwan... I hate SHOPPING!!! Yeshhh.. i literally hate it.. Gawdd..it soo painful ...

Hayyeee Mayyooo 🤗 i love you more... 😆

@bold.. heheh 😆 this reminds me and my jaan.. lol when ever we go out for shopping.. I behave as if im her hubby.. who is carrying all the bags.. and she roams around and i make faces.. eggjaaccktlyyy!! 😆😆 and i stick around without leaving her.. lol few onlookers named us" Typical Wife and Hubby" lol 😆😆 .. her fiance was too embarrassed!! 🤣 🤣 he never showed up after that when ever im around

Me and Vyan!

well fawad and Me also not bad 😉😆

this is why i love you and your words more mayyo... its just too natural for you to write something which is pretty common in an uncommon way!! 🤗

many things you write are very dear to me.. may be coz i have experienced it... or its just... 😳 heartfelt.. somethings are better unsaid 😳



"The happiness of your life depends upon the quality of your thoughts."

"There is no happiness like that of being loved by your fellow creatures, and feeling that your presence is an addition to their comfort."

"One day I will find the right words, and they will be simple."

🤗

edited: lol i love this hand clasp ...his hands over hers.. 😆😆.. some significance.. but i just cant name it.. 😃 loved it 🤗
Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
he is playing his cards very well..
pata hi nahi chalne diya ki wo MD hai..
or ye jess...nakhre to dekho iske..poor geet..how can his dislike towards jess transformed into this comfortable relation..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh... i was equally shocked wid Jess's entry & maan's behaviour towards her bt den its MK not jst maan... & i loved it becoz it gave us d reaction from geet wich i was waiting for so long... she was irritated, & somewat jealous dat maan is comfortable wid even jess wen dey have quite an awkwardness around dem... & it make her think to go in past & search for d reason & tym wen d changes occured in maan... bt i think dat nw jess is a gud frnd of maan instead dat teenage clg grl who had huge crush on maan... & maan was loving d reaction of geet wid his behaviour wid jess... & i was rite on d MD being maan to make ways for dem to be in constant touch though professionally but still... v will see maaneet in different moods... 😉 totally loving it & d wait was totally worth it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


Ishhh

another one

This is my fav ❤️

PS: No offence to anyone!! just a random thought!! 😊


PPS: Credit to Makers.. not mine 😛😆
Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago

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