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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3
awesome dear...
nice one...
lovely...
and NT is too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loving naina very much.i duno y
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Posted: 11 years ago
ho gaya maan k kaam tamam...

cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
waiting to know geets past
n mahi is cutipie
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome concept
loved it
lolz brchara dev
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...thanks 4 pm...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dil Ne Jise Apna Kaha

~Part 4~

"stop glaring dev" yelled Maan coming towards him with slow steps...

Dev looked towards Maan hearing him and imagined himself as a meek deer baby begging to leave him and Maan as a lion coming in slow steps ready to hunt his prey...

"so Is it true what Naina is saying ?" questioned Maan seeing him looking at him.without blinking his eyes...

Dev revrie broke hearing Maan question , he shook his head and answered " hmm wo bro" shuttered Dev scratching his head looking for a excuse...

"I am waiting dev" Maan placed both of his hands on his waist and eyed him narrowly...

Dev look behind Maan and saw Naina making his video smilingly and why she should not these are the special moments which u only got to see once in a while and she has to show it to her partner's in crime who are not at home right now...

"dev beta sorry bol aur apni jaan bacha le nahi toh agar bro aur gussa ho gaye toh phir tu toh gaya aur is chipkali ko toh main baad mein dekhloonga"thought Dev not wanting increase Maan's anger...

"hmm bro sorry aaj ke baad aisa nahi hoga pakka promise" said dev mentally promising to take revenge from Naina afterwards...


"thik hai but Dev last warning for u If I next time saw tears in her eyes then" trailed of Maan pointing towards Naina . He walked to Naina and told her "If he says u anything or does anything with u just tell me ok" patted her cheeks . He crossed Dev while going towards his room and gave him a look...

"veerji aap chaliye main aapke liye coffee lekar aati ho" shouted Naina seeing Maan stepping on to stairs going to his room and ran to kitchen to make coffee...

"veerji main coffee lekar aati ho " mimicked dev with flared nose . "chipkali(lizard) kahi ki jab dekho veerji veerji karti rehti hai mujhe toh aaj tak ek glass paani (water) bhi nahi poocha office se aane ke baad aur toh isne shaadi bhi mujhse tab ki thi jab bro ne ise kaha tha"said dev exasperated and walked to his room . Yes it true Dev used to love Naina from chilhood thats why he always used to fight with her , irritate her so that she will talk with him . When he joined business with maan he told Maan about his love for Naina and Maan was more than happy to know . He gave
his approval and told Dev to propose Naina but there was a problem as Naina always treated Dev as a friend so he
asked Maan to make her agree for marriage . Maan talked with Naina and she instantly agreed as there was no one in
her life at that time and most importantly her Maan veerji has demanded something from her . Then after 1 month Dev Naina got married and their love blossomed . Right now they are very much in love but Naina loves to tease Dev , always does something bcoz of which Dev got scolding from Maan and she can't leave this habit of hers as she is doing this from childhood...

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Maan stepped out of washroom after freshing up in his vest and tracks brushing his hair with towel , looked upwards and found Geet there in his room holding coffee cup . She forward coffee to him . He gently took from her hands , sipped coffee , smiled "hmm sweet taste" (me not bad maan u found black coffee sweet) . He placed cup on table , grabbed her hands and praised her " very nice coffee"...

"thank u veerji"

"veerji !! why she is calling me veerji " mumbled Maan confusingly . He raised his head and found Naina instead of Geet . He instantly left Naina's hands , rubbed his eyes not believing he actually imagined Geet in his house no no not house but room...


"veerji aap theek hai" Naina shook him breaking his thoughts..

"haa main theek hu and plz tell servants that I don't want eat to anything" said Maan . Naina walked our of room giving a slight nod...

Maan laid on his bed wanting to live in peace at this time . He can't believe that he imagined Geet whom he had met only once . He was wondering how can he think about her . He doesn't even know her properly except for her name and her occuption as a teacher . He has met so many girls but never thought about them so imagining is far away . He deal with girls daily but never felt like this . Lost in his thoughts he slept soon...


Precap - Maan meeting sherni geet


Thank u for all the likes and comments 😳
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story !!
Read all 3 parts together ..geet is such a chatter box ..Maan totally fida on geet in first sight only ..geet hv a daughter maahi 2yrs old bt isnt geet herself is jst 21 n already hv 2yrs daughter ..where is her husband ??
dev in trouble & maan ready to burst on him for making NT cry ..
w8ing for nxt part ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part...
bechara dev...naina is too good...
and precap maan is going to see sharni geet...
and thanks for pm preeti..
Edited by icskwt - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol nice.. maan babu already latoo on geet.. ohhoo lol poor dev.. cont soon hun

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