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Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 52



Maan was in his room in the hospital, when Geet came in, "what happened Geet, how is Dadi maa" Maan asked, "She is perfectly fine, and she is sleeping due to the medicine effect," Geet said with a big smile, "Thank god," Maan said and Geet smiled up, "Maan, you take rest, I will go out" Geet said and turned around to move away, "Geet," Maan stopped her holding her hands, "don't go, I need you near me," Maan said slowly,




Maan's words made Geet to feel nervous, she even felt shy even to turn around, "Maan, please, you need to take rest" Geet said trying to get herself free, Maan then pulled her up and made her fall on to him close, "Maan" Geet trembled as she felt his closeness, Maan held her close and made her lean towards him, "Geet" he said slowly and Geet blushed up, "you need to rest" Geet whispered up,

"Sure, will do, but before that" Maan said pulling Geet closer, "Before that" Geet asked though she knew what's his intension, Maan then moved his hand towards her waist and held it tight, "Maan" Geet said trembling up, "Geet, Kiss me," Maan asked shamelessly making Geet's heart to beat an million times faster, his direct request made her to blush high, "Kiss me Geet," Maan asked again as he pressed her waist again, Geet was feeling the heat and her cheeks burned due to the high blushing,




"Not now" Geet said pulling from Maan's hold and went away, "Geet, when I decide to get something, I get it" Maan said in a bossy style and Geet looked at him, "and when I said no, that means No" Geet said as she went and stood near the window, "Oh really" Maan said and pulled the wires connected to his chest and jumped down, "Maan what are you doing" Geet freaked out, "what, I am trying to get what I want" Maan said and Geet turned nervous again, "Maan," she said and Maan went and held her close locking her in his arms,




"Maan what are you doing" Geet asked trying to get away from his hold, "what I said I will do" Maan said with a grin, "Maan please, leave me na," Geet pleaded, "sure, Kiss me, I will leave you" Maan said stubbornly, "Maan this is hospital" Geet said but her fight was getting weak with Maan's closeness, "I know, I am the one who build it" Maan said pulling her close and making her tremble




"Maan" Geet said but it was more of a whisper, Maan felt Geet's weakening control and moved close enough to press his hard chest on her soft frame, as she felt Maan's hard self crushing hers, she tried to step back but she hit on the glass window and stopped, Maan pressed her to the glass window and pressed himself more on to her, she blushed and shiver with pleasure, Maan held her waist and leaned on to her more and pressed his lips on her neck,


"Maan" Geet moaned trembling up with pleasure, Maan made a wet kiss on her neck and pulled back to look at Geet, whose eyes was red with desire now and her lips trembling up parted, Maan grinned and pressed his lips on her shivering lips making it calm holding her waist, Geet let go of Maan's waist and hugged him up putting her arms around Maan's shoulders and holding him close, as the Maan's kissing speed become restless, Geet held his hair tight in her fist, Maan was kissing her wild his hands where roaming around her, caressing her body making her hot,

He felt the hunger raising up high and high as he kissed her long, his passion was growing and not lessening up, Geet felt an difficult in her breathing yet she wasn't ready to pull away from his kissing, the kissing went for a long time and when Maan finally pulled away both whether patting up for breathing, Maan finally rested his hand on her waist and Geet too loosened her hold and held his shoulders, "See, I get what I need" Maan said breathing heavily with a slight grin on his face,

Geet pulled away from him suddenly feeling defeated and Maan grinned big, "ok, now as you got what you need, go and sleep" Geet said and pulled Maan and Made him to lay on the bed and covered with the blanket, and stood away, "feeling defected," Maan asked with a grin and Geet looked at him with her hands folded, "yes, before the great warrior, how can I win," Geet said scorning up, "but this warrior had already lost to my Choti Rani, years before, I lost before her true n crazy love" Maan said and Geet heart lightened up and she smiled big,




"Maan, please sleep" Geet said and Maan nodded and Geet sat on the sofa and Maan was looking at her, and Geet signed him to close his eyes and Maan nodded a no and stretched his arms, Geet shook her head and stood up and went near him and sat on the bed and laid on his chest and Maan held her in his embarrass, "Much better" Maan said and Geet smiled and Maan closed his eyes and Geet too closed her eyes hearing his heart beat,

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Morning sun shined up, "Geet" Dev entered Maan's room and Saw Maan sleeping hugging Geet up and Dev turned around immediately, Hearing Dev voice Geet too woke up and seeing him standing with his back on to her, Geet pulled from Maan and jumped from the bed, "Dev, where were you yesterday, why didn't you come to see Maan" Geet asked, and Dev turned around, "oh, Geet I was scared, stills scared, I lied to bro about Dadi maa na, so he would be anger, right, so only"

"Dev, he is you brother, how will he be anger, I already convinced him, so don't worry," Geet said, "Thanks Geet" Dev said with a big smile, "or, should I start calling you Bhabhi" Dev teased and Geet blushed up, "Bro is ok right" Dev asked looking at Maan, "yes, medicine effect, he is sleeping still" Geet said, "ok Geet, you go home and get refreshed and come back, until then I will be with bro," Dev said, "Dadi maa" Geet asked, "she is also sleeping, at night she woke up and asked about bro, when I said he is fine and you are with him, she felt a bit relaxed and slept off again" Dev explained,

Geet smiled up and went to Khurana Mansion and in no time, she bathed and refreshed and rushed back to the hospital, and saw Dev talking with the doctor, and Geet rushed towards them, "Dev," Geet called and Doctor smiled at Geet and she too nodded back, "Mr.Dev, Mr.Khurana is totally fine" the doctor said making her to smile big, "thank you Baba ji" Geet prayed, "it's like some kind of magic, though he didn't have any internal injury, his head was badly hurt and now he is perfectly fine with everything normal, it's an miracle" the doctor said amazed,

And Dev jumped up in joy and hugged Geet up, "I knew my bro is the strongest, nothing can harm my brother, nothing" Dev said and Geet held his hands, "Yes, nothing will, " Geet too said with her tears raising up, "Geet, you know it's your love which made him cure this soon, you are an gift for my brother's life Geet, you are an blessing" Dev said with immense gratitude holding her hand and Geet looked at him, suddenly an guilt covering her mind, "blessing, will he say the same if he knew why I am here" Geet thought looking at Dev's smiling face,

"Geet, I will say this to Dadi maa and come" Dev said and rushed away, Geet walked slowly towards Maan's room, "now as he knew I knew the truth, there is some more truth he need to know, Truth to be revealed between us, should I say it now, or should I" Geet got confused as he went inside Maan's room, "Geet" Maan's high voice made Geet too look at him and Maan was sitting there so fresh and fine and it made Geet to smile forgetting everything,

"Maan" Geet said and Maan signed her to come near him and sit near her and Geet to went and sat near him looking front and Maan held her shoulder and pulled close to him, "Geet, what happened dear" Maan asked and Geet tried to hide her confusion and smiled at him, "I am happy, that's all" Geet said slowly, "then why am I seeing the trace of confusion and worry in your face, Geet" Maan asked and Geet felt caught,




"No Maan, nothing like that" she said and Maan pulled her close, "Geet, still lying to me" Maan asked and Geet heart stopped for a second, "Lie, lying" Geet asked trembling with fear, "yes, don't hide any of your discomforts to me, Geet. I didn't get out of that blast alive to see you in trouble," Maan said and Geet eyes opened wide, "Blast" Geet asked shocked with her eyes teary, "yes, didn't your brother say this to you" Maan asked and Geet shivered as he said about Breej,




"May be he might have thought you would get scared" Maan continued, "You know my brother, admitted you" Geet asked slowly, "yes, Dev told me" Maan said and Geet's fear hit heights, "Maan knows my brother, and if he had seen Breej's face then" Geet thought scared, "but I wasn't able to see his face as I was un conscious, need to meet him," Maan said as if reading Geet's mind, "Maan, can you tell me, what happened exactly" Geet asked without looking at him, and Maan too said what happened,

"I should have be careful" Maan said, "Vikram" Geet mind said first, "The card" she remembered, and Breej's phone call, meaning Breej knew it, and he instead of stopping Maan, he let the blast happened, after all he wants Maan dead from the begin, Geet thought. "Maan, I will back," Geet said and before Maan could say anything, Geet jumped from the Bed and rushed away. "What did I say" Maan thought confused,

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Maan got confused as he searched the whole hospital for Geet. "Where did she go" Maan thought and finally decided to call Geet, Geet was on the taxi, her mind filled with anger and upset, Geet's phone rang up and Geet took it up, "Geet where are you" Maan asked worried, "oh, I will tell you when I come back" Geet said and her taxi stopped before Breej's office, Maan turned silent and so as Geet wasn't hearing anything, "looks like he cut the call" Geet thought and throw her mobile inside her purse, "How much" she asked, "80" the taxi driver said,




"Geet, Geet" Maan called as he hear the taxi guys voice, "Geet had gone in taxi" Maan thought, "Geet, Geet" Maan called again, "looks like she didn't cut the call, yet thought that she cut the call, silly girl, but where is she going" Maan thought and was above to cut the call but stopped as he heard her voice, "I need to meet Officer Breej" Geet voice was so clear, Maan hold the phone tightly as he heard her voice, "Officer Breej" Maan thought shocked,




After that there was an silence, Breej was getting ready to go out with his team, but stopped as he saw Geet, "Geet" Breej asked shocked and looked at his team, "you guys go I will join you later and be careful," he said and everyone nodded and went out, "Come on" Breej said and walked Geet to his cabin, and Geet as soon as she went in kept her purse on the table, "you knew right, about the blast" Geet yelled immediately, "Geet, first relax" Breej said knowing why she had come,

"Relax, you knew na, if you don't bring him to the hospital on time, then he would have" Geet voice trembled up as her tears flowed down, "Geet" Breej went and held her shoulders, "Geet stop," Breej begged, "I don't understand one thing, what do you really want, you want him dead or alive, because you knew Vikram had planned to kill Maan, and you hide it from me and then you let the blast happened and then saved him in the last minute, why" Geet asked pained and confused,

"I saved MSK just for you" Breej said stressing his words, "because I know you love him" Breej said shocking Geet, "then why didn't you tell me first even about the plans, I would have stopped him," Geet asked puzzled, "Because I don't know" Breej said, "what" Geet yelled in anger, "then why did you call me, why did you ask me about how I am, why, if you don't know anything, why did you ask whether I am with Maan or not" Geet asked,

"I didn't asked whether you are with Maan, I asked where you are" Breej said, "yes, and if you knew, that Maan's life is in danger, then only you would have asked like that to make sure I am not with him" Geet said, and Breej was feeling an frustration now, "No Geet, that trap was not for MSK, and I didn't know MSK is in danger," Breej said, "Then why did you call me" Geet yelled again, "Because your life was the one in danger" Breej yelled back shocking Geet, "means the trap was for me by Vikram" Geet asked slowly, and she remember everything was going around her, the card, the call, her car, except for Maan exchanging the car with her, "Means, I am suppose to be in the blast" Geet asked and Breej nodded an yes,

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Maan was standing there frozen up, "I am suppose to be in the blast" Geet voice made him filled with fear, he couldn't even imagine Geet in the pain he had under gone, his eyes filled up, "It was all my fault, It was all my fault, that Geet's life is in this much big danger now, what if I didn't exchange the car, No, No" Maan thought with fear, "what have I done, what have I done with Geet's life" Maan thought with tears.

Precap: DCP n Vikram's New Plan,,, (my network under prob,, so will update the next part when it gets fine,, hoping it will be ok with two days)


Edited by Maya_Maan - 11 years ago
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awesome ud
geet wants to know the truth behind blast
geet didn't disconnect the cal and maan
heard brij geet conversation
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Posted: 11 years ago
aawsemmm update maan heard geet brij plan maan guilty for putting geet life in danger
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
emotional, fearful,lovely
maan is shock after knowing the truth behind blast
he is cursing himself
what will be the next step of maan ,geet n brij
will vikram n dcp get success in their mission
what is relation between dcp n vikram
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Posted: 11 years ago
toh dcp vikram k saath mile hue hai...maan geet ko galat maat samajhna...pata nehi abb kya hoga...

scary update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerky fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
liked it...
thought maan will get to no entire truth...
but looks like he won't get to no whole truth...
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maan heard geet nd brij talk now what is going to happen?
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so secrets are geting unfolds slowly and gradually brij subconsciously saved maan and saving geet i am sure he is her real brother and maan will recognize him.

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