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awesome update loved maaneet lovely moments maan heard geet & brij talk geet must tell him truth loved it
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part 50
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Daadima called Brij Ranveer?
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part 51
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GEET AND MAAN BOTH KNOW THAT GEET WAS THE TARGET FOR THE BLAST
NOW MAAN IS FEELING GUILTY ABOUT PUTTING HER LIFE IN DANGER
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely romantic update! Maan gets what he wants! Geet gives in! Maan teasing her! Wonderful pics! Geet n Dev talk! Maan senses tht Geet is hiding something frm him n confronts her! Geet upset abt the blast! Maan overhears n is sad tht Geet is in danger cos of him! interesting precap! update soon
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Read all parts in one go...
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part 52
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Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva




Part 53


"Damn it, damn it" Vikram shouted in the phone breaking the nervous in DCP's Ears, "Everything went waste," Vikram yelled again, "what can I do for that, I gave you the right information only" DCP said coolly, "oh really, you said MSK will not be there, and from where the hell did he jump into the scene and also your sincere agent Breej, how did he save MSK," Vikram yelled, "Are you playing Double game with me" Vikram asked,

"No, No, why would I do that for," DCP freaked out, "and with Breej, he must have seen MSK in trouble coincidently and saved him, I know him, he might be daredevil but still has an heart, well I will warn him," DCP said, "ok, I will give you one more chance, I want MSK or Geet dead" Vikram said, "that's possible in only one way" DCP said, "how" Vikram asked eagerly, "plan something for both, if MSK is in danger, Geet saves him, if Geet is in Danger, MSK saves her, if Both were in danger, with no one to save" DCP said with a wicked grin,

"Wow, what an idea DCP, sure, will plan something like that and will call you soon," Vikram said and cut the call and DCP too put the mobile in his pocket and walked out, Breej was standing behind the curtain shocked as he heard the conversation, he is now 100% confirmed, that DCP was playing with Vikram against MSK. But why Breej thought and went to his cabin, though he knew DCP hates MSK but why should he join up with one more criminal to destroy MSK, may be there is an logic, a plan which he doesn't know, but killing Geet, what could that be,

Breej came in to his cabin and sat in his chair and thought about the it, his heart was still refusing to think DCP as an bad guy, he was inspiring for Breej in many ways and now this, he can't digest, he thought about Geet and their conversation an few hours ago,
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"No, No, No, Maan can't be an bad guy, though everything seems so, but trust me, he is not bad, and he is definitely not a killer" Geet cried, her tears rolling down as falls, "Geet, please stop being emotional," Breej said and gave her a glass of water, "first drink this" he said and Geet too got it and drink it up, "now relax and tell me, do you know MSK before" Breej asked slowly and Geet looked at him confused whether to trust him or not, "Geet, trust me, it just between us," Breej said but Geet was still not ready,

"Do you feel that this is an trap" Breej asked exactly what Geet was thinking, "ok come with me" Breej said and walked out so as Geet, Breej climbed the stairs and reached the terrace and Geet too followed him, "Hmm, now you can tell me" Breej said and he took his mobile and gave it to Geet. Geet then nodded and started to tell him her story as she needed Breej's help some how, " it all started when MSK was not an Khurana but just Maan Singh, My Warrior," Geet started as she looked at the blue sky, her heart feeling an big happy smile as she thought of Maan in his childhood,

"We were born in Hoshiarpur, and I am Geet Handa" Geet said and Breej stood there shocked, "Means, what I gave you was not your reel but real identity" Breej asked shocked, "yes, it's a Game of Fate, I was said to act as myself," Geet said with a grin, "ok, you are Geet Handa and he was Maan Singh, what happened in your life's that you ended up like this" Breej asked slowly, Geet turned silent and Breej went near her and kept his hand on her shoulder,

"Geet" he called, "I was small, and I didn't know many things, I never really remember much about my father, but he was an bad guy, really bad, he made my mom cry always, he insults my brother, he treats every one so harshly and he hated me so much," Geet said her eyes filling up, "but my life was still beautiful, because of my Warrior" Geet said with a pride, Geet then started saying about her life with her warrior, her brother, her mother and everything,

Breej was hearing it all so sincerely, don't know why he was easily connecting with all Geet was saying and every emotion she was saying, "Finally the day came where everything turned dark, that day which turned my life forever" Geet said tears running down her cheeks, Breej clucked his fist feeling the same emotion, "I was standing up, looking down stairs, crying heavily, where my father was beating up my mother and she was crying like hell, I was scared and I don't know what to do nor don't know what's happening down there"

Geet then looked up at the cry trying to get the scenes from the sky,

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"Leave her, I am not going to accept these acts anymore" Geet's mom was shouting as her mouth bleed as she spoke, "shut up, I will do whatever I need, I can marry any one I need" the old Handa man shouted, "Not this time, enough, how many young girl should lost their life for you," Geet's mom shouted, "As long as I need, it's guruji's words, if I had to get more stronger, I need to marry an young girl and celebrate my first night with her and Devote her to Guruji, and instead Guruji will offer me power and good life as he always did" Handa Man yelled in pride,

"How stupid can you be, how blind can you be, that guy is a fraud, womanizer, he is no god, he is not even an human" Geet's mother shouted, "what did you say," the Handa man slapped Geet's mother hard on her face making her to fall on the ground, "one more word against my guruji and" he yelled up, "not once but I will say an million times, that he is an cheap womanizer and you are an blind fool" she screamed looking at him, "How dare you" he shouted and took the sword and waved at her,

"Rani maa" Maan jumped in and the sword made an slight cut on Maan's arm, "Maa" Geet's brother rushed in, then there was an huge fight between Handa man's bodyguards and Maan and Ranveer, but Maan and Ranveer were both strong enough to handle the guys, Maan held Geet's mom up, "Choti Rani" Geet mom said, "don't worry, Maan take maa to the well in our field, I will take care of Choti Rani" he said and Maan nodded, "but where is Shimi and her family" Ranveer asked,

"Shimi is been locked in the small go down in the out shirt, and her family is locked up in their own house" Geet's mom said, "Ranveer, you take care of Choti Rani and Shimi, I will go and free her family, will meet up near the well in half an hour," Maan said and Ranveer nodded and he rushed up stairs and scooped Geet in his arms and rushed outside, Geet was so scared even to speak, "Choti Rani, don't cry, don't be scared, Veer ji is there na," Ranveer said and wiped her tears as the rushed out, and he run hiding themselves from the guys searching them,

"Damn" Ranveer shouted, as he saw fire everywhere when he reached the go down, "Shimi" Ranveer shouted and he dropped Geet there, and looked at the spreading fire, it was almost all over the go down, "if Shimi is inside, I need to save her, I can't let her die because of my father's cruel intension" Ranveer thought, though he had nothing to do with it, he felt responsible as it was his family, but he doesn't know whether he would be able to come out alive, if he goes inside, so he made up his mind,

"Choti Rani," Ranveer kneeled down before Geet and Held her face, "look here, I want you to run to your Warrior now, go to our field and you know that big well right" Ranveer asked and Geet nodded her little head an yes, "Go and sit there and until your warrior come there, and then he will take care, ok, Go" Ranveer said, Geet felt something was wrong, "Veer ji, you" Geet asked, "don't worry about me, you go and ask your warrior not to wait for my arrival, as soon as he comes there with Mama, ask him to take you both away from this village ok" Ranveer said,

"But Veer ji," Geet paused, "My Choti Rani, please listen to me," Ranveer begged, "Go, and remember if somebody else come on the way, hide from them, just like hide and seek game, until you see your warrior don't go before anyone" Ranveer warned and Geet nodded, "Now go," Ranveer said and she turned back, "Choti Rani" Ranveer called and Geet looked at her brother, Ranveer called her near him and held her little face and kissed her both cheeks and his tears raised up,

"Choti Rani, you will always be my little princess and I am sure your Warrior will take care of you well, just tell him, that he will always be my best friend, I need you, our Mama and him in my next birth too, and remember you should not come back here near this building once you start running, it's an promise on your warrior and you know what happens when you break an promise right " Ranveer said and Geet nodded an yes and he kissed her finally and asked her to run,

Geet too ran fast and after she went a few yards she turned back to see her brother, who disappeared inside the fire, "Veer ji," Geet shouted panicked, and stared at the place without moving for a few minutes, she knew her warrior had always kept her away from the fire and taught how dangerous it was and also from school she knew it will kill an person and after few minutes the roof fall down with a great sound, "Veer ji," Geet cried out loud and started crying, she wanted to rush towards the burning fire, but her promise stopped her,

"Warrior," she screamed up and run towards her field, hiding from all who were searching for them and finally reached the well and in few minutes, Maan and Geet's mom came back and Geet rushed towards them and her mom scooped her up, "Choti Rani, Ranveer, where is your veer ji" Maan asked and Geet wiped up and said what happened, "Ranveer" Geet's mom cried as she heard it and Maan tears rolled down, "No, No, I need to see my Ranveer" Geet mom said as she rushed up but Maan held her hands, "Rani maa, no, they are everywhere, come on, please" Maan pulled her with him,

And Maan fought with the Man's on the way while moving forward and he got hurt too and was bleeding and then Maan took them to his house,

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Breej was listening to her his heart was crying, "Then Maan took us to his house and we were chased there too and so we run from there too," Geet continued, "finally we reached the railways station but on the way we were trapped with some big guys and Maan fought his best but was bleeding everywhere, and when a guy came to hit him with the sword from behind, my mama went in the middle and she was hurt, the sword wounded her badly, then somehow Maan made us catch the train and board us in but he wasn't able to come with us as he wanted to stop the guys from following us"

Geet wiped her tears and turned to Breej, "That's the last time I saw him in India" Geet said with an heavy heart, Breej stood there feeling pained and his eyes red, and turned to Geet, he was feeling so emotional, and he felt like screaming, he suddenly hugged her and his tears flowed down, Geet could feel his tears on her neck and she was shocked and but didn't pulled back, after a few seconds, Breej realized what he was doing and pulled himself from her, "sorry" he said and turned away, and there was an silence for a few second,

"How did you join in Ghost" Breej asked finally breaking the silence, "Oh, in the train an foreigner helped us, that's Ryan, he is an Ghost agent and was on duty which he had to do here in India, especially in Delhi, he took me and mom with him, but my mom couldn't make it and she left me alone, but before she die she made Ryan to promise that he should take care of me, Ryan was so kind hearted and took up my mom's promise and took me with him to US, he educated me and protected me and loved me so much, and as per ghost rules, I too turned into an ghost agent"

"And Maan, How did Maan, turned into MSK and why is he into this," Breej asked, "I don't know" Geet said looking down, "find it, there might be some way to pull Maan out of it, he is not an Khurana by blood and it can change the whole case, so ask him what happened, he might turn innocent as you say, we can change the case" Breej said and Geet smiled big, "we can?" Geet asked with a big hope, "yes, first know what happened in his life" Breej said and Geet nodded an ok, "I will do anything to save him," Geet said, and turned to leave,

"Sir," Geet called him and Breej turned around, "yes" he said, "why are doing this, I know you hate Maan, then," Geet asked and Breej still himself don't know the answer for that question , "I don't hate MSK, I hate what he is doing against the law and order, against people, and you are so confident that he is not an don, then I think I should trust you," Breej said, "you trust me" Geet asked and Breej nodded an yes,

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"Breej can't be trusted Maan" an strong male voice was screaming from inside the phone into Maan's hears, "but he saved me, and Dev said how he helped my family" Maan said, "it might be an trap, he is same as DCP, he can't be trusted and his moves would have two meanings" the voice said, "But I heard him, he cares for Geet" Maan said remembering the phone conversation he overheard,

"Don't be a fool Maan, Breej doesn't care for anyone, not Geet, not you, not anyone, he blindly follows DCP's order, I knew how cold hearted he is, I had seen him kill just because DCP said, without any question, I know him, though He is an rightful person, and loyal to law and order, but his loyalty to DCP is much high, he will not go against him, it's better, you start acting now, and I will be ready with my team to help you, lets end it, everything," the Voice said and Maan said an ok and cut the call,

Maan throw the mobile on the bed and looked up, "lets end everything, but how will it be, good or bad, hell or heaven, whatever it is, I will not hurt my angel, my life, and Dadi maa, Dev and Annie had to be kept away, it's my battle and I will do it alone, I might live or die but that should not affect my family nor Geet, and first I should pull Geet into my family, I must give her an family to love and protect her even if I am not with her, before I do anything," Maan decided,

Precap: Maan shocks Geet with their engagement news (next update on Saturday)

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