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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Geet gave good answer to Maan...

waise Geet ke alawa maan ko koi aur saamna nahin kar sakta...

waiting for next part...

Thanks for the review!

So glad that you liked it!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: LILY111144
BB,,,,,🤗
lov de title...
pehliii mulakaat nd dhoom dharakaa...😆😆
maan itanee jaldiii vanishd ,,,,,
koi na ,,,waiting 4 nxt dhoom dhraka,,,😉
dadi ko lgta idea mil gaya hei ,,,geet prfct hei 4 msk
sher maan ke saamne sherni geet,,,,😛
fantabulas BB,,,,👏

Thank you FD!

Glad you liked the title!😆

Nope! Daadima is not going to play much role in this story!😉

Thanks for the review FD!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: mauaa
hey bb.. congrats for the new story.. all the best for it..

part 1is already fab... maneet fight is damn funny n interesting..

nice work dear!!😳

Thank you so much for ereading!

Glad you liked it!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: honeygrape
suuuperb start dear...
congrats on your new story...

looking forward...sounds very very exciiting story...

Thanks dear!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: spvd
congrats...

Thanks!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
awesome...
interesting...
so this is how they meet...
NT is Geet's cousin and she loves her very much...
and NT and Dev are getting married...
and Geet has heard about Maan's anger...
Geet is 18 and what is Maan's age?
cont soon dear...

Thanks for the review!

Maan is 25 in this!😃