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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already! Awesum start! Cannot wait 4 Wednesday! 😊Pls put a banner😉

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Just so you know I'm reading all three of them cuz I love all three of the couples!

So it was a dhamakedar start!

Waiting for tomorrow!! :D

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awesome start..loved it
waiting for next..cont soon
and congrast for new story

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome start. Looking forward to next part.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

he is 25
well aru aint too old
thank god for that
but never is in your story
dont tell me he did see her
thats why you are laughing
naa cant be right
well lets see what mystery you have cooking
anyway will know by sunday
yeah too much age gap can be annoying

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

CONGO FOR THE NEW STORY BB

Thank you so much Di!😃🤗

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
first of all the name of the story... just superb... naam sunthe hi dhoom sa mach gaya😆

the first part was fab... geet and maan ka pehli takkar!!

the best thing was even though maan intimidated her, she answered back to him... that was great...

but where did maan vanish??? thodi aur baatein karaathi... mein aur doob jaathi un mein😆

will be waiting for the next part...

will dadima play a match maker now seeing the sherni geet😳

😃 Glad you liked the title Di! I wasnt sure about it much!

I am so happy that you liked the first part so much!

And Daadima wont be much in this story! I have already made her match maker in DFL so cant repeat it here!

Thanks for the review Di!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -indu-

BB!!!!!!!!!!!

Mast title hain.😆...its different...alag che🤣...but really nice😳

Toh geet chumui si hain...par dekho Maan ka saamna hote hi sherni bangayi😆...

Pehle update mein hi hogaya Dhoon Dhadakka...Clash of the Titans( caption acha haina😉) ...me rubbing my hands ans waiting for more...Jaldi jaldi updates dena...🤗

Thanks a lot ID!

Really happy that you liked the title! I was bit nervous about it!😳

Nice caption and thank a ton for reviewing!

Next update tomorrow!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi dear! Congrats on the new SS! Cld nt wait pm! Awesum title n fab start! Uff angry Maan n chirpy bubbly Geet! Geet enjoying the wedding n Maan n she collides into him! Maan angry! update soon! Well written! 😊

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!