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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

waiting 4 Jab se tere naina😊

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

he he

maine padh liya isko

achhha tha ..but bahut chhita sa tha..

Maan ne sab kuchh plan kiya tha Geet ko paane ke liya..😳😳

Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

One of the beautiful story !!!

So it was all planned by MSK.

So lovely .. loved it

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
awesome update...par ye maan geet ke peechhe hi kyun khara rehta hai??..kahi jan bujh ke to nahi rehta??😆

OMG! You actually guessed the plot!😲😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: _lehar_
nice part
loved it
geet wanted to see her sister's saptapadi but she missed it because of maan
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i have doubt is maan has any feelings for her by any chance he fell for her in their first meet itself
eagerly waiting for their next encounter
hope we get long updates...😊

Haayo Rabba! 😲You guessed the plot!!!!!😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Deelight
shocked to suprise again bak to shocked
Shocked isliye cos u hv strtd a whole new SS while u hv 2 on-goings
suprised as its gonna b a fab one as d othr two, n it indeed is
shocked again cos do FF ke update dene ke liye apna readers ko itna wait karati ho ab ek aur add ho gaya to... uff
bechare readers😭
cmg 2 d SS i jz luvd it... its superkool.. but yeh kya sirf do ya teen para ka short update hota hai... not happenin...sare part ek saath daal deti but nahi readers to tadpana hai na😔
u noe yeh SS to padne se pehle hi khatam ho gaya...i really lykd it.. Maneet 1st crashin thn d nxxt n d last argument "kyunkki tumne PLEASE nahhi bola" hillarious... totally mindblowing! jaldi nxxt wala update karna... waiting. . . . . .superb SS😃

My reaction to your Shocked to Surprised to Shocked --> 🤣😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Only Geet will think about her marriage and the groom during her cousins marriage. Naintara is about to get married and here geet is praying to god to send her a dulha like Dev.
I just love that rasam. This way we Salli get a lot of money. But in my case I got so less since my grandmother interfered and let the groom and his family enter. To this day I haven't forgotten about it.

Poor you! Maine toh apne do jeeju ko khoob loota tha!😉

Well what can we expect from Maan. He will never smile even if it's his younger brothers marriage and geet is just like, can't he smile for once and not being some angry guy. And the looks she gave him. Poor her but thank god Maan didn't see her looking at him.

And of course they had to crash with eachother again. But I would say that it was Geet's fault. She didn't see if someone was behind her or not.
OMG what maan said is so true. I don't know why but us ladies are always ready to fight. No matter what, we are like "wanna fight? Bring it on" hahahah.

Well we all know this fight is not over yet, waiting for their next argument which about going to read tomorrow :)

Thanks for the update
Continue soon <3

Thanks for the review!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Deelight
aww...lovely update... tooo goood.. y do u giv such short updates han?? nw m gonna strt cryin lyk Geet..

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Tak care of ur hand dear... don stress urself 2 giv us early updates n ol.. hum to mangte hi rahenge agar late ho gaya ya thoda short update mila to bhi hum usse padege n njoy karenge.. jz commentin main kanjusi dikhaenge... no worries.. take ur own sweet tym 2 update !!!
Ache se rest karo phir update karo!
luv ya... tc !

So sweet of you to say that! I felt emotional and touched the first time I read this comment!😃

This is for you -->🤗

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
Oh what a relief!!! During the epilogue, which I was enjoying, but I felt sad too cause I felt I missed out on so much of their journey.

I really hope u do write the rest of their story cause there is so much potential there.

At least right now I know they have a happily ever after.

Suggestion, when you complete their love story (working at KM, marriage etc) then maybe you can add another part about Geet's reaction to Maan's confession. I mean she has to still react!!! Crossing my fingers ...

Luckily for you, I had already planned Geet's reaction to Maan's confession. It will be in last Story of this series.!😃 It will be called Band Baaja aur Maan😆😉

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Deelight
wat was tat han? epilogue as d headin n the end at s end... i actually tot u worte sm parts n din PM me,went 2 page 1 n again readpart 3 n 4 it was d sme as i had read n u ended d story without d actual masala hw could u brutus? n u r even askin if ppl r interested in readin d further story... Man seriously u hv lost it... haath ki chot dimag main to transfer nahi ho gayi...??on a serious note PLEASE CONTINUE wit d story iss pehle ki main tumhari pagal stalker ban jaaon,phew! jab se tere naina jaldi update karooo

My reaction to your comments -->🤣

Haila! Stalker???? Kyun maine itne jaldi JSTN update kiya? Ek achcha khaasa stalker milne ka chance tha, woh bhi gaya!😃