MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155 - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

aww maan is bearing too much pain

Geet showed some improvements
waiting for next






thanks for comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...feeling so sad for maan...I am happy that geet is back to normal...😃



thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
nice part...
Muski is so attached to Maan...
that was so lovely...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
monikaseth, goldenmoon, pop77, suhaaana, spvd


thanks dear for beautiful comment i try to replay all your comment please read that and this four who are left so giving reply them hear thanks for comment dear and always encourage me like this so Mahi give more beautiful update once again thanks




please look page no 97 to 102 i comment everyone comment if possible for you give comment on that
Mahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 12

adi , dekh o mk , kiss time pe don't get shy and now shying like girl

but ladki se pitai chi chi

veer - just cried mk say him to stop nahi to he will cry now

maan - but Veer not any game with naina else you have to face Real MSK get it , veer just nodded in yes

Just than nanina come their for something ask to maan , poor girl just feel shy to face Veer , adi and maan giving teasing smile to veer , maan get it that nanina feel awkward , maan just say adi and veer please wait me for some time (outside ) poor veer so much lost in nanina don't hear anything of maan now maan want to bang his head , what to do with him yaar , he just in high voice say Veer out

and veer just looking to nanina without blinking eyes ( mahi think he lost in kiss ) poor adi just pull veer with himself

maan just shake his head and went near nanina and ask in soft voice

Maan - you want to hug your big bro dear

nanina just hug maan and tear star to flow from her eyes , she know she have friend of golden heart ,they are really closed to her that's why she feel so hurt for their stupid act , ye veer to kabhi bhi kuch karne se phele sochata nahi hai

maan just caressing her head with love , he know she need this cry

maan just cup her face and weep her tear and touch her cheek and say slap bahot zor se laga kya

nanina - feel so chocked with so many emotions , she also feel guilty to accused maan like this who is brother figure for her she just nodded in yes than no

Maan - maan smile on her antic and mummer sorry nanina for all , and specially for veer act he is such donkey you know na , and I think he got enough punishment from Doc pinky what say

nanina - she feel so shy with maan word kiss image start to come her mind and her cheek turn red , she just cried bro and hug maan and say he is donky bro koi purpose , date se pehel aisha karata hai kya , next moment she closed her eyes in embarrassment , what is she talking

maan - just smile loudly and say so you don't have objection about kiss , but you want it with proper way , nanina just want to run from there , she start to wiggle to come out from maan hug but now maan want to tease her and say

Veer come in yaar she is ready for your purpose and date , nanina just turn in shock , but nobody is their she just cried Bro I hate you and maan just run away from her to save himself from his sis , nanina just running behind him

both feel tired with this running game

nanina say time please and sit on sofa

Maan sir I want to talk with you about geet

maan just stop with geet name , nanina feel odd but she sue her thought

Maan- what about geet and with glare say can you stop your sir sir

nanina - just giggle on him and say yes MAAN , wo from today doc pinky want to start her treatment and I am sure you want to present there na , so what time is ok for you so I called her in that time

maan nodded in yes and say ok I will tell you after some time

nanina start to go away

maan - Naina talk with him ( veer) ok and ya if you want any BG than I think doc pinky is good na with that he just wink to her

poor nanina just run from maan cabin , and maan laugh loudly , he feel so light after talking with her

just than rano come in his cabin

maan just stand from his place and say oh ma why you come hear , why don't you call me , and who is with musky and wo wo

geet rano complete his sentence

maan just nodded in yes

rano - don't wory doc naaina with them and your devil is sleeping with my pari ok

Maan - cried like child Ma not devil she is my princess ok she say with Msk style

rano ya ya we know it princess now stop mr papa and lesion me , I want to go there

maan get her unsaid word and nodded in yes he just called Kaka and ask can he come there now after got positive reply he just cut call and sms to adi and veer , that he is going to meet him

maan just took ma with him ,where dev is admitted by Kaka

when they went closed to his room , rano stop for second and closed her eyes , maan know it is very tough to her , he just give side hug to her and say ,ma iam with you always

soft smile come on rano face , she nodded in yes , maan just open door of that room and loud gasp come from rano mouth , that room is so cold ant there that monster tied with iron chain in corner of room , he have only half pant on his body , all body including his face have mark of injury her soul shake for some second but next moment geet pale face and crying muskan come to her mind and her eyes turn blood red in anger , she start to look hear and there , like searching something kaka who is behind them just read rano mind and give , one wooden rod to her hand , she don't look who give her and just went near that monster who now scare lke hell he know what is coming to him he just start to beg please no please

but first rano full of force just hit to his leg and he just cried in pain , it say that true human being is that person who feel other pain and try to erased that pain but this monster pain giving peace to burning soul , who watch two innocent life suffer because of his act , his pain giving them happiness some satisfaction rano just hitting him again and again ,not single word coming from her mouth she just hitting her at last that rod broke in two pieces and she start to hit him with her hand at last maan come between and took so angry rano in tight hug and say stop now ma stop we are hear to punish him , i know he deserved more but you don't put yopur hand in dirt he is dirt ma just a shit

rano just cried out beta , you don't know what I lost because of him , my daughter who never stop to laugh , last some days , I just wanted to look her little smile , smile laughter to bahot dur ki bath hai beta meri innocent bachi ko kannch ki gudiya ki tarah tod madorker fake diya is rakshes ne , pata nahi , pata nahi kitne log ake vasna ka shikar bani is eke wajese / don't know how many person lust have to satisfied for this monster , meri poti ko bhi nahi choda issne , what you think I never saw mark on muskan body , beta nothing is hide from mother eyes kya kasoor hai mere 21 sal ki beti and 4 month ki poti ka bolo maan ku itna dard bahr diya mere beti ki zindgi main

maan iam so scare that I don't know how many days I have to collect my daughter who brake in so many pieces , idont know even she will become normal or not

maan meri geet dying day by day just dying in front of me maan icant see her like this

maan just hug rano and say don't say this ma , she have to live , live for us , for muski and for herself , she have to fight for herself against this monster ma , and for that you have to strong like , stone ma dilko stone se bhi jada strong karlo apni geet ke liye , rano just nodded in yes and maan just took her out from that room

he give glass of water to rano ma just than maan phone start to ring and its from nanina

maan took called and his face turn white like he saw some ghost ,he just took ma hand in his hand just run to hospital , rano heartbeat miss for second she sense something wrong , in low time they both are in front of geet room door naaina , veer , adi just try to open that door and crying sound of muskan coming from room , geet not only closed one lock but she closed all lock because of that they cant open door with key also ,window also closed from inside

nanina just hug maan and say bro poor girl start to cry in maan hug

just than rano went near door and say softly Geet beta look me your mother come , cant you open door for me beta

geet - I know you are dev and you want to me send to that hotel , but I will not going there , muje dard hota hai , wo saare touch ...no no iam not opening door

rano just put hand on her mouth to stop her cry ,veer just took rano in his hug and nodded for no , he just mummer in her ear , try once again ma

rano - accha chutaki you don't open door for me na than I am going , only geet baba and ma called her chutaki

just than all hear sound of door and geet just run to rano with muskan and start to cry loudly kaha gayi thi muje chodke , why you go away , why , she is in real mess , hair coming out from band , drench in water tears failing from eyes , rano just hug her and mummer sorry sorry kahi nahi jaaungi , khi ahi jaanungi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum update
emotional
geet is really in a bad condition really she is a broken doll
dev shld b tortured daily n aisa ho jaye ki mare b na na zinda rahe
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling soo bad for geet
happy for dev he deserves more than this
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan's and naina's moments really lovely how maan started teasing naina 😆😆and poor girl sharm se chip gayi hai aur BG pinky ka dialogue tho ek dum mast hai😆
the most important moment rano meeting that monster😡😡😡and very happy to see that rano has beaten him like never before aur dekho kaise dard se chilla raha hai wo jitna dard geet ne saha uske saamne yeh dard hi nahi hai

oh no geet phirse apne aap ko band kardiya but thank god uski maa ki awaaz sunnkar wo door open kardiya its so painful to see daughter like that to any mother sach much patha nahi ab kabhi geet wapas purani geet bann payege bhi ya nahi agar change bhi hogayi tho marks tho rahi jaathe hai jaise kaanch tootne ke baad phirse jode jaasakthe hai par phirbhi poori tarah se normal nahi hojathi hai jaise hi hai ab geet ki zindagi😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dev ko acha punish kiya rano ma ne loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




Ya after kissing now he feel shy shy 😉😳
Monster ke to din bhar gaye hai kya pata what happen next 😡
msk and rano




uska abhi aur tadapna hai itne aasani se usko mauth nahi milni chahiye 😡😡

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