MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155 - Page 4

very very heart breaking but beautifully written prologue dear.

great start...eager to read more...

part 1

she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...,ma baba , my this all happen with me why , i got monster like him in my life I never hurt anybody to my life than why I have punishment like this khud ke hi sharer se ghine aane lagi hai ,/ I just hate my own body , touch of all that unknown ,... like same time so many hand caressing on my body ..., I want clean this touch , but it cant go away from me ,har din kisi anjan ke samne naga hona /every day be nude in front of stranger man ...it just killing me just killing me but I don't kill myself

if if I kill myself than don't know what will he do with my muskan , my ma don't know , why i can't finish all this why ,now her eyes also turn stone ,there are no tears in them just kahalipan rah gaya hai usmain .../just emptiness in her eyes , before her marriage this eyes are soul of geet , now turn lifeless , just lifeless , and now she lost all hope of her life , that she could be out from this , hell ...bas ma ke ilaz our muskan ki life this aim of my life that sit , just than her eyes went to watch ,she just say herslf , took some sleep now don't know tomorrow what is waiting for you, she just look to mirror cut near lips ...she cares lips with her hand ...and mummer with sad smile ab to dard bhi mahasush hona band ho gaya hai /ihave so much pain so nowadays I cant feel this small pain cannot ,feel...

her so called husband just looking to money and talking on phone and say yes , yes she will come their on time don't worry sir ,she will be their ,ohhh you want her in western outfit ok ok she will, and he cut the call with smirk , and just took one nude girl on his body , yes he is sleeping with another girl in same house ...

early morning geet busy with muskan ,routing it is relief time for her , time wiout any tension , without any fear , just mother daughter world , her four month muskan start to give response to her with her sound like hu , uuu,griii...baby become naughty now always trouble geet for feeding , bath , wearing cloth , but geet just enjoying this , like it become energy , courage for geet ...just than she got sms 10pm xyz hotel ...western outfit room no ...,money ...,she just closed her eyes and she come back in real world , dirty world ,today also she should be ready for another abuse ,abuse or rape , to feel that unwanted eyes, gaze , touch on her body ...she feel like throwing up ...

she just push all this thought away she just want to spend this moment with her baby yes her baby her life ,she just called caretaker of muskan come to house on 9.30pm ...and ma ,baby lost in each other , she have separate kitchen to her room with bathroom so she don't have to face that monster , it is her world with her baby ...but prisoner world cant fly like bird , can't live like simple human can't

it 9 pm geet give feed to baby and waiting for caretaker , she come on 9.15 and within 5 minute geet just kiss baby and went from there for one night stand she don't know which monster waiting for her body , she just took cab and went to her destination she went to reception and ask for room no ... receptionist just tell her way and she went their , she just enter in room like machine , and without watching anything just ask so what you want , with cloth or without ...on bed or on...

there is dim light in room that person cant see her face properly because of dim light , but her voice , just like , he fell like it is so lifeless voice , no emotins , emotions , he say in mind emotion , from when you start to think about emotions ...sad smile appear in his face , he say with arrogant , take a sit first I want to finish my drink ...geet just reply huuu, but that sound ...she first time want to see that man face , don't know why but ... she just shooo her thought and sit on sofa ...silence are in room , sound of glass and breath of two person coming in room

one hour went like this now geet start to feel restlessness , because, she just want to finish this and went from their , it is only work for her unwanted work that sit ...but this man just finishing his so called drink , he hardly make 2 glass drink in one hour and she just sitting their ...with waiting his next move, she only have more two hour in hand after that it is time of muskan feeding and that make her more restlessness ...she once again ask ...when you will start ...i have to go ... but her word just dead in her mouth , that person just pick her in his hand and put her on bed ...his touch , she first time feel something different she don't figure out it but it is different ,he just say , dance and strip , she just closed her eyes in disgust , strip , she just hate it ...

just than he start song ...and with heavy heart she stand on her feet and start to swing her body on beats , she just feel disgust about herself , but muskan and mother face come in front of her and she just start to dance and strip ...one by one she remove her cloth ,jeans , her top , now she standing in her slip ...and that man just watching her ,he don't touch her just watching her ,more half hour went like this , now geet eyes just again and again went to watch , just than she feel his hand on her tummy , and he ask what so hurry took extra charge , his hand traveling on her tummy under slip and he start to plant kiss on her shoulder , she just closed her eyes , it is slow death for her and , muskan thought ...just than his hand open B** hook and he put his palm on her blossom ,he start to keen sq-used it that ...it is more than three hour to muskan took feed and her restlessness ...her milk start to come out with his act ...he just took his hand from her blossom ...and he took to his nose , it smell like milk

his eyes winded with shock , he just on all light of room ...and he just blow out , froze with beauty in front of him girl near 20,21 standing with closed eyes in slip ,cleavage hanging loosely ...bare skin white like milk , he just want to see her eyes ...and just she open her hazel , but that shake him ...so beautiful but full of emptiness , with just one emotion fear ...big fear , cut near lips which can't hide with makeup also ...just than his gaze go on her slip , that is wet because of milk , than it strike him and he just ask with cold and angry tone , how many month baby , she look him with shock ...she fearing about his reaction like abuse , hitting etc ,but he asking age of baby ...but his voice have some aroma , she just ans 4 month he just closed his hand to control his anger and say ...wear your cloth and come to reception area ...and he just walk out after taking his mobile ...now she scare ...for that monster reaction who is waiting for her ...her money she just wear her cloth and went to reception area , their he sit on sofa with no emotions he just mummer follow me , she don't know why but she just follow him he took driver sit and open other door for her , she just sit their , he ask address ...she give them , both reach her house in half hour , with shaking leg she reach near door of house ...that monster just open door and ask my money , she just bend her head and nodded nooo, next second she feel tight slap on her face and she just fell on floor ,blood start come out from her mouth ...he raise his hand for another slap , but his hand stop in mid air with irony grip and , two eyes which spiting fire looking to him , his grip so tight like he broke his bone with only grip , geet husband say she is my wife hey who are you, he just smirk and say with attitude MAAN SING KHURANA ...

Aww .. Her savior !!!

felt bad for geet

nice update. thank god Maan came to her rescue.

damn man
paraye log isse jyada hamdardi dekha rahe the
what her apne didnt
what life she has
but she is living just for muski
and her mother getting better
man that was just horrible
she has stopped feeling anything
except for her baby
ahhh maneet meet at such circumstances
her baby is her life naa
but why did maan stop
of course he would stop
but what now
and is there name for this story
cheers for pm