Love story Part 22 Updated/Pg 66 May 15

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Ameera.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

good story

quiet different & interesting

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Reshu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Nice...deep n intense ..

Waiting fo more

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kainturakiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

superb story line dear...

love it

continue soon...

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

nice start dear really different subject ,maan care for geet and love her crazily , geet feel guilty because of child issue ,beautiful update

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indiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

The second part is also very good,

Update the next one soon

Thnx

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

very nice concept. loved all the pairs. each person is very well portrayed.like it how the brothers are protective and lovers are passionate for their ladies.continue soon...your script is far more well drafted for a first timer...best wishes.

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

part 1
nice...
so the team is working to save the girls...
and Geet here has some health problem...
and Maan loves Geet...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

part 2
nice...
though she loves him she doesnt want to spoil his life...
cont soon...

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harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Read both the parts

They are awesome

Geet has a special place in everyone heart

Everyone is scared aboth geet's health

Rocking start

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Veer tensed for Geet as he lwill leave her for few weeks. Geet assuring him that all will be good.

Geet at Khurana's. It will be nice for Maaneet as they will be able to spend some time with each other. Maaneet moments were sweet.
Maan claiming his love for her as that he will now be faithful to her. N will love her. That's wat Geet wanted. His assurance. Now that she is getting she is afraid that she is spoiling his life.

Continue soon.

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