Love story Part 22 Updated/Pg 66 May 15 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Good so far..

Got 2 know the bond they share among themselves

good 2 know that they treat geet as glass doll!😊

So waiting for the story 2 continue. .

Waiting for the next!

Originally posted by: micky11

good concept

The story involving human trafficking and then the love stories seems good

A writer needs everything to come in right way and

you have written excellently from the start

loved it

continue

Originally posted by: sessy

seriously r u really a first time writer ? because the way u wrote is excellent

excellent concept.HT is a very big thing and it's making a lot of girls life hell

loved the bond between veer and ashi.looking forward to read more of maneet too.

thx for the update,loved it.

Originally posted by: priya111111

both parts are nice its different from all other stories they all are very transparent in their relations and everyone knows about eveything and happy to see that they all accepted fully. veery and aashi are in love and this time veer is serious about his relationship and maan and varun accepted tha. Now maan confessed his feelings to geet and geet is in dilema inspite of loving him she still hesitaes about her health issue and now maan wants to make her believe.

human trafficking is very serious issue and now these four are going to tackle this issue
thanks for the pm dear