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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 very nice. Please add index in title.It will be easier to know about update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for all your comments and likes. add lovestory3 as your buddy if you want me to pm you when I update. your compliments about my writing as a first writer made me so happy. i will update part 3 tomorrow!!😊😊😊
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Thank you for your comments and likes guys. I really appreciated it. Here's part 3 and 4. Tell me how it is. Leave me your comments, i feel excited to hear from you!!

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PART 3

When they were done with dinner, they decided to go right away.

Varun came to geet and gave her her medicines. Have it sweetheart...he patted her head. "Maan, I'm pinning this paper to the fridge and I told you where I kept the medicines. In case I'm not here, make sure you remember. Maan nodded.

Varun!! Im here you know. You are worse than Veer. I can remember to take my own medicines." Geet complained.

Yup!! I know that very well. He said sarcastically.

Geets's face changed completely and Varun realized what he said. He went over to her and bent down a bit. He was so much taller compared to her. Hey look at me. I didn't mean it like that. I know you are responsible now. We just don't want to take anymore risks, right? Geet nodded.

Maan was confused. What had happened? He had to ask Aashi. She was right there cleaning up the table. He took her to the kitchen and asked her. Why did geet get upset when Varun said that?

Maan that last time geet got sick. 8 months ago. She had been sick because she hadn't had her medicines for 2 days. The medicine prevented her from having her periods. Unfortunately when she stopped taking them, she started bleeding and all that pain associated with the endometriosis had come up, along with all the complications. That's why everyone makes sure she has them all the time now.

Maan did not know all of that. He had been there just for two days before he had gotten deployed. He was thinking when Varun called them so they could leave. Aashi, I'll do the dishes when we get back. It's my turn.

45 minutes later they reached there. Veer called and informed that he had reached and staying in some cheap hotel. That's how it worked. In order to get information, he had to mingle with those people who lived in those indecent places.

Mexico

Veer was sitting in his room. He was glad that he at least had Internet. He connected the line to another secure one which the headquarter used. They always had to make sure that no one was able to track them. He opened the satellite map of the places that Aashi had reported suspicious. It was only 3 in the evening. He could do some work by walking down the street. He changed, put on his jeans and a loose grey shirt and put his gun attached to his belt. No one could notice the gun. To other people, he'll just appear like a random person walking by.

He went out, rented a car and went to the first address. There was in total 4 addresses he had to check out. He got into a bar and sat down. The girl who was serving the men was wearing the least clothes she could possibly wear. She came to him and asked him what did he want.

I don't mind a beer sweetheart.

I'll get it right away. As she went off, Veer pretended watching her ass.

"You get them better sometimes" one man said as he sat down besides him.

he was talking about the girl.

Are you indian? He asked

Yes I am. Veer replied. I find her nice enough man! Still checking her out.

Huh...You don't have a taste then. You sure you're from India. That's where the real goods are from. I have had my taste.

Veer was surprised. This was going in a good direction. "Everyone has their own tastes I guess. I have to cone all the way over here to get mine. How do you get yours?''

The man was almost drunk. Getting him some more drinks will make him sing like a bird when he start asking questions.

The girl came back with the beer. "how about something stronger sweety? Something local!" veer asked. She smiled and went back in.

" Huh, I don't have to go all the way to India to get my girls. They come here themselves." The men bent down and whispered. 'I have my own settings".

Really? I don't believe this

"You don't believe me? I know a man. A great man. His name is Milano Chez. He works for the Boss. He is the one who gets me the good stuff. Some of the girls are already damaged and broken, so he sends them to me to have fun''

What do you do with them after that? Veer asked.

I let them go. Most of the time I find them working at the brothel in the corner down the street. Poor girls, they don't have anything to go back home. Its good that they get their living by this.

By the time he was done, Veer was feeling disgusted. He couldn't understand what kind of people do these sorts of things. But, then he knew there was a whole reality behind the one normal people lived in. Even after asking a lot about the Boss, he couldn't get anything. But at least he had got a name. He was done for the day. He headed back to the hotel. He called Varun and gave him the name. Then he went for a shower. he needed to cool his head down. He thought about Aashi and geet. He realized how unsafe this world was.

PART 4

"What happened? What are you thinking about?" Maan came out of his deep thoughts and looked up at his brother. "Nothing. I was just looking at geet. She is already sleeping. Those medicines really do weaken her."

"Yes. They do. But she has to take them. Better seeing her weak like this than in so much pain."

"Tell me something Varun; Veer left Sahil's number with you right. Do you have it on you?

"Well, I have it saved on my phone. Here it is." He took out his phone and gave it to maan. "Why do you need geet's doctor's phone number?"

I'm going to meet him tomorrow. I need to know specifically what is going on with her. I know that she got endometriosis and I read about it, but it's hard to understand how much it affects her.

Varun patted his shoulder. I'm glad maan. You need to take care of her. She is far from being in good shape. I know about most of the stuff. That's why Veer left her medicines and all with me. If you go to sahil, he will explain everything.

Maan nodded. He called Sahil and asked if he could meet him tomorrow. He told him to come in the morning itself.

The next day maan went to drop geet to college. It was only them in the car.

I am going to meet Sahil geet.

Geet looked surprised when he glanced at her. Why? Why do you need to meet him?

Geet! We're together now. I want to know more about your health, that's why I'm going to see your doctor. He said casually

Geet didn't say anything. She was happy in some way though. He was really taking care of her by meeting her doctor. But she didn't want him to get worried.

Ok you can go. Everything is fine anyways.

Maan smiled at her talks. Did she think he was asking for her permission?

They reached her college. "Ok bye. I'll see you later."

Wait girl! Why are you in such a hurry?

Geet turned around and sat back in the car. What is it Maan? she asked calmly.

Nothing. Have a good day.

Geet continued to look at him. Then she leaned forward. She lifted her hand and traced maan's lips with her fingers. Maan just stayed still. Slowly she bent down and placed her lips on his. She kissed him slowly and maan let her. He just stayed still and let her shape the kiss. Then geet retreated back and looked at maan again.

Maan could read her eyes. She wanted him to kiss her. Gently he brought her face closer. Close your eyes geet. She did as she was told. Maan took her lips and started to suck slowly. He kissed her slowly and gently. They had talked about a lot the last day. He knew that geet loved him. She had told him. but she was vulnerable. She thought she was inadequate. He had to make her see how special she was for him.

Slowly he broke the kiss. He kept her close still and kissed her forehead. He whispered softly "I love you geet... love you a lot"

Geet looked at him. she was again surprised. Maan said that he loved her. she didn't know what to feel.

Ok go now. I'm getting late. You need to be on time too. He caressed her cheek and geet left, still dumfounded.

Maan drove towards the hospital. The special moment he had shared with geet made him realize how vulnerable she really was She knew that everyone loved her deeply, but she still felt really inadequate. She had made up her mind that she will not get married ever because she can't have kids. She had also talked about a normal sex life. He really had to talk to sahil. His mind was too confused.

Headquarters:

Varun, Meera and Yash were working together. They were looking at the names Veer had given them. Dev was there too. He apologized for not being able to come for the last meeting.

'He's already checked all the four addresses already. That guy is quick man!'' Dev said.

"Yeah, he already got someone to talk to him at all 4 places. We're moving in the right direction. Meera what did you get about Milano Chez?" Varun asked.

"Give me one second. I'll give you a report."

"Take your time baby!"

Meera frowned at his endearment. Clearly she didn't like it.

Varun just shook his head. She had never seen someone like Meera. He couldn't deny that he was attracted towards her. she had that mysterious air around her. he had never seen a girl quite like her. She was slim and petite. Long hair always tied in a ponytail. But yet, you couldn't relate her to a girl. She had a strong personality. She looked hard and too serious. Not his type. He liked the feminine type much more. But still, he was attracted towards her. Anyway, he shouldn't be thinking about his colleague right now. He had a job to do.

Where the hell are you lost? Meera shouted out. Here's the report. You can read it. You'll find all the information about the guys Veer gave us the names of. I've made 3 different copies. We can all read it and connect the dots.

Varun took one copy and settled on the couch. They worked on it for several hours. Reading all the information about those people left a disgusting feel in the air. Varun glanced at Meera. Her face was hard. Apparently she was affected with all this stuff. She wasn't that immune as she wanted people to feel. She stood up and put the copy away.

I'm going out. I need some fresh air. She said

Wait. I'm coming too. He glanced at Yash. He told them to carry on.

They stood on the terrace together. The wind was blowing hard and one of her tendrils fell on her face. She looked beautiful like that. More like a women. However, She quickly put it back in behind her ear. Her face hard as always. Varun knew he was thinking in the wrong direction. But something told him that it was worth to know something about her. So he asked her. "Tell me about you Meera. You've been working for almost 4 years with us now and we basically know nothing about you."

What do you want to know?

Anything...something new that we don't know over here.

Be specific Varun. I don't know what to say to that.

Varun stared at her and came up with the most ridiculous questions.

Are you married?

No

Engaged?

No

Divorced?

No

Any boyfriends?

Where do you want to go with this? Meera looked pissed. "Look. We work together and lets keep it like that. You really don't want to know more about me"

Ok. I don't have any problem with that. Varun said. He had really crossed his limits.

Meera left and Varun sighted. What the hell was I thinking about when I was asking such questions?

Then he remembered. He had to call Veer.

Hi Varun. What is it? Is everything fine?

Yes everything's fine. The information was useful. When you get back we'll have a team meeting. Rite now, we still have to read the information Meera pulled out.

Veer. I need you to call sahil. Maan went to meet him. He wanted know more about geet from her doctor. Call him and let him know that you are aware that maan is coming. He can show him her reports then.

Yeah ok...I'll just give him a call. Bye


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Edited by nishasharma18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So much happening with those unfortunate girls...god save them all. So what is it about meera? even i am curious like varun😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

So much happening with those unfortunate girls...god save them all. So what is it about meera? even i am curious like varun😊


dont worry our team will save them. Meera has her own story. it will unravel much slower though.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb parts!!
Curious to know about Meera now..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update, love the girls, all are different but seem vulnerable in some way or the other...
Waiting for your updates now...
Thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story
loved all parts
maan and geet relationship
to the story with health problem
i hope she gets better
Loved the way story is unfolding
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Posted: 11 years ago
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felt very sorry for geet .she is feeling so insecure and thinks she is not worth to be some ones wife because she cannot have children.hope maan makes geet to get out of this insecurity.left disguested while the buy was talking to veer about the girls in that way.i have a feeling that meera has a past,that is the reason she is putting on a hard face before others.looks like varun is getting attracted to meera.
thx for the pm and the updates,loved them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chalo maan is taking care of geet...gr8...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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