Love story Part 22 Updated/Pg 66 May 15

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sweet-mishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome Story
Loved it very much

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 1

This concept is amazing. I liked it very much. All of them r working in army.

I loved the way u put each characters. Each r different n important. N everyone adores n love Geet.
Veer is a very protective brother. Love how he cares for her, understand her unsaid words, n is tensed abt Geet health. Want to know more abt Geet's disease.

Start is awesome. Veer catching up with Aisha. Openly flirting with her. Varun making faces. Varun also is friendly with her n knows all her secret abt Maan.

Veer the over protective brother doesn't let Maan come near her incase he hurt her. But is loving Aisha like a mad. His relationship was beautifully shown.

Geet at office. Maan talking minimum to her. She is feeling bad. But is Jealous of Yash. Lol. Finally asked her to come with him n opening his heart. Geet is very happy hearing his confession. Both kissing n expressing their joy of love. Maan teasing her abt the kiss. Lol

Geet can't keep anything with herself. I loved how cutely she came to Veer n told everything Abt Maan n her.

Thank you for long long update n pm.
Continue soon.