Love story Part 22 Updated/Pg 66 May 15

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Good so far..

Got 2 know the bond they share among themselves

good 2 know that they treat geet as glass doll!😊

So waiting for the story 2 continue. .

Waiting for the next!

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

congrats and welcome here ...

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

padne ke baad comment doongi dear

welcome

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Both parts are awesome i loved it

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome👏👏

its interesting😃

hope veer is fine😕

update soon

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

good concept

The story involving human trafficking and then the love stories seems good

A writer needs everything to come in right way and

you have written excellently from the start

loved it

continue

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Really loved it, please continue soon now if you already written a lot, love all the characters ,
Thanks

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sessy

@sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

seriously r u really a first time writer ? because the way u wrote is excellent

excellent concept.HT is a very big thing and it's making a lot of girls life hell

loved the bond between veer and ashi.looking forward to read more of maneet too.

thx for the update,loved it.

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

both parts are nice its different from all other stories they all are very transparent in their relations and everyone knows about eveything and happy to see that they all accepted fully. veery and aashi are in love and this time veer is serious about his relationship and maan and varun accepted tha. Now maan confessed his feelings to geet and geet is in dilema inspite of loving him she still hesitaes about her health issue and now maan wants to make her believe.

human trafficking is very serious issue and now these four are going to tackle this issue
thanks for the pm dear