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Posted: 11 years ago
geet in hspital,,,,s meera bhind dis,,,??
hope mystry jaldi solve ho...
osm stry,,,waiting 4 nxt,,,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Different concept but very nicely written... eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
Pakka it is the outcome of rb n angel's prank...
Thanks for update...continue soon...
Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So glad geet got conscious. But how did she get hurt. Poor dadi and maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gosh.. it's Geet in hospital.. She was injured.. par yeh accident tha ya kuch aur..? But thank god she is fine now.. Hope RB will soon get to know truth...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful story. ..
read it in one go..
maaneet married but due meera couldn't tell anybody..
There is some big mystery behind meera accident n how maaneet got married in which situation...
Very gud suspense yar.. :-)
Wonderfully written..
Curious to know Wat happen to geet...???
How is got hurt..??? is meera behind geets hurt..
N how come geet reached store room..
Very eager to know... :-)
Continue soon... :-)
Luving the story :-D








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Posted: 11 years ago



Main BR aarahi hoon...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago



Hello friends...here I am with another update...thank you for the likes and comments...hope u will showere them on this part too...


Here is the next part...



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Khurana mansion...


Veer was very angry...Rb was standing stealing glances at everyone in the room...naina was holding angel ...and Anu stood with rb...giving glares to him...


Veer - geet hamari mehmaan hai...aur uske Saath Kya kiya tumne...agar uske ghar wale poochenge toh hum Kya mooh dikhayenge...kabhi socha hai...shukar hai ki kuch Nahi hua...agar kuch hota toh...


Rb...bhai ..mera aisa kuch irada Nahi tha...Woh bas angel...he tried justify his act...


Veer - angel...angel bachi hai...agar Woh kahegi toh Kya tum maanloge uski har zid...Woh tumhe building ke upar se khud ne ke liye kahegi...toh Kya tum khud jaaoge...kabhi socha hai tumhari wajah se agar geet ko kuch hojaata toh...kabhi socha hain hum handas ko Kya jawab denge...aur Hum sab ka Kya...dadi ka socha Woh unka saamna kaise karti...veer was very disappointed with Rb...


He turned to naina and said...Main angel ka school change karr raha hoon...Woh poora din school mein rahegi...bohut shaitan hogayi hai...Angel started crying seeing her father so angry and shouting at them...naina held her tightly...she was about to protest...veer...and veer stopped her ...I don't want to listen any thing regarding this matter...Maine decide karliya hain...aur main apna Faisla Nahi badlunga...aur tum...he turned to rb and said...tumhara Faisla bhai karenge...Chalo ab ...he said and moved out of the room...


Rb looked at Anu...for help...she didn't respond and left from there...she felt that someone has has to stop rb from doing his pranks...even she enjoyed some of them...mostly she would be the target...but later she also laughed with them..it's ok if it doesn't harm any one but that's not the thing this time...geet was seriously injured and she doesn't want to support him this time...she went to geet's room to collects some of geet's stuff...


When she came down naina was trying to convince veer to change his decision ...but veer didn't budge...Rb was silently looking at naina...naina looked at him and nodded her head in a no and said sorry...Rb kept silent...he knew he has to answer...Rb went with veer...Anu followed them with geet's stuff...three of them went left to hospital...


At hospital...


Maan fed geet her lunch and she slept soon...maan sat there watching her...


After some time...Veer, rb and Anu reached hospital...


In the room...nurse came with geet's injection...


Nurse called geet - mam...I have to give this...she showed the injection...Geet nodded...nurse again said...mam..this will give u pain...if pain is more u have to use ice pack...is that ok...or shall I call the doctor...

Geet - koi baat Nahi sister...main theek hoon...u can do ur work


Nurse asked geet to turn as the injection has to given to here hip...


Geet - haath mein kyun Nahi...aap haath mein lagayiye...


Nurse - no mam...this has to be given to the hip only...


Geet was about to protest...maan came and asked the nurse to give the injection...geet made a baby face and turned ...nurse gave her the injection...it pained...but not much...


Nurse - mam a little pain will be there...if u feel more pain...plz call me...she left from there...


Geet tried to turn and sleep...but it pained her to turn...maan asked not to move...


Geet was feeling uncomfortable in that position...maan thought for a min and joined her on the bed supporting her and geet kept her head on his shoulder...


Maan - is this ok...


Geet - umm...


As he nurse moved out of the room...Anu , veer and rb came there...they were about to enter...nurse stopped them...


Nurse - patient ko abhi abhi injection diya hain...unko dard horaha hoga...aap please thodi der Rukiye...plz go after some time...


All agreed and sat outside...as the room has a private waiting lounge for visitors...


Inside the room...


Maan asked geet - abhi bhi dard horaha hain Kya...


Geet - thoda...


Just then maan's phone rang...it was from Inder handa...


Maan looked at geet...geet papaji ka phone hain...


Geet took the mobile and attended the call...


Geet excitedly called papaji...


Inder -...


Geet - papa ji main theek hoon...bas choti is chot lagi...kuch Nahi...maan glared at her...geet smiled sheepishly...


Inder - ...


Geet - Haa...maan mere Saath hi hain...


Geet gave mobile to maan...it came on speaker mode...


Maan - hello papaji...I am sorry papaji...main geet ka khayal Nahi rakh paaya...maan said as he was guilty...


Inder - Arre Nahi maan aise mat bolo...tum toh waha Nahi the na...toh tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho...I am sure...yeh geet ka koi adventure hoga...


Geet - papaji...


Inder - aur Nahi toh Kya...tum ne hi kuch gadbad ki hogi...jaise hamesha karti ho...tej ne sahi Naam rakha...the falling princess...geet was annoyed listening to the name...Kya papaji aap bhi...veerji Nahi hai...par aap unki kami poori karr rahe hain...geet whined...


Maan smiled listening to geet's talks...he missed it in these two days...


Inder - maan ko zyaada tang mat karr...usse aur bhi kaam hote hain...tu apna khayal rakh a seekhle geet ab toh...he said...


Geet sensed his tone which is a bit serious...so she didn't say much...just replied in a yes...ji papaji...


Even jasmeet talked to geet and enquired about her health...and cut the call after her talk...all the while geet was talking with her head on maan's shoulder...maan moved a little and kissed her fore head lightly...he was scared that his small kiss might pain geet...main theek hoon maan...she said understanding maan's state...and then he turned as he heard some sound ...there stood veer, Anu and rb...looking at geet and maan stunned...


Maan slowly helped geet to settle down and got down from the bed...and was about to talk...the nurse entered again and enquired whether geet had any pain...the nurse went away...rb was shocked to see maan that close to geet...he remembered maan saying meri geet...earlier in the morning when he came to the hospital...


Maan now turned towards his siblings...he knew he had to answer them ...he wanted to tell them...but not like this...he so wanted to introduce geet as their bhabhi...but not like this...


First he wanted to know what has happened that day and how geet reached store room that lendedi her in hospital...


He turned to geet and said main abhi aata hoon...tum rest karo...main nurse ko inform karunga...Woh tumhara Saath rahegi...geet nodded...


He asked everyone to come to the waiting room with him...which is attached to geet's room...


Everyone followed maan to the waiting room...thinking of maan's concern for geet...


Once they were out of geet's room...maan came straight to the point...ghar mein Kya hua...geet ko chot kaise lagi...Ali ne kaha Woh store room mein padi hua mili...Woh waha kaise pohunchi...tum logonko kuch pata hai...he asked his siblings...


Veer looked at rb and gestured him to tell every thing...


Rb started narrating...


Flashback...Previous day...


After talking to angel...rb also felt that it's quite a time he played a prank...so he thought of different ways to annoy Ali...as Ali was his target...he got a flash of store room while thinking of a plan...it looked like a ghost room with all the furniture and other things covered with white sheets...so he made a plan to send Ali into the store room at night...he made some arrangements...he took of the light in the store room and arranged a pedestrian fan for special effect...when he switched on the fan all the sheets started moving ...it gave the effect of blowing air...and then he took a very thin wire which will not be visible in dim light, and attached some small skulls and bones with radium effect and tided them with the thread...he tied the ends of the thread to two corners...and then spread some color also and even some bird feathers...on the floor...to give the effect...when the fan is on the feathers will fly...and arranged a mini music player with creepy music


And tied the thread end to the door...so when the door opens all the actions will be initiated...moving of the bone...flying of feathers when the fan is on...and then the music playing...he was satisfied and moved out of the room...he closed the door and locked it...


He waited till dinner time...after dinner everyone retired to their rooms...and then he called Ali...and asked him to get the old cycle...which Anu used...as angel wants to see it...Ali agreed and went towards the store room...then rb also went away to his room...he waited to hear Ali shouting...but he heard nothing...so he thought that Ali might not have entered the store room...so he slept...he count not enter the store at that time as he removed the light...so he thought he would remove all the things in the morning...but he woke up late and all were up by the time so he couldn't go to store room...


Flashback ends...



Rb - I really don't know bhai how geet reached store and how she got injured...when Ali called us then only I came to know that geet went to store room that night...



Hearing the prank played by rb maan could not control his anger as the store room is full of furniture stacked up...it could have fallen and the person could have lost his or her life...Even if it was not geet someone else life would have been in danger, how could rb play such a prank.



Everyone was waiting for maan's reaction as no one can say whats going in his mind... And the next minute the room echoed with the sound of slap...yes maan has slapped rb... Everyone was shocked to see this... Maan was strict with rb for his mischivous behaviour..but never ever raised his hand on him...veer could understand the gravity of situation as they heard maan apologising Inder handa ...



RB - he was numb, he could not understand why maan is so worried about geet and what he has seen in the room is not helping him...it added to his misery...he could not digest the fact that being married to meera he is close to geet...and for her he raised his hand on him...He has tears in his eyes that his Bro has slapped him for some outsider...RB with a meek voice asked maan Bhai app kisi baharwale keliye mujhe mara ...



Maan lost his patience totally and shouted wo koi bahar wali nahi hai ...she is my wife ,Woh geet maan Singh Khurana hai... iss ghar ki bahu aur tum sab ki bhabhi...



Everyone was shocked hearing this if Geet is maan's wife then who is meera...Anu said but meera ...


Maan- meera tumhari bahbhi nahi hai geet hai tumhari babhi...



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Phew...finally updated...

I would like to thank my cute jerry...I.e., valli30...as I was stuck up with the part and she helped me a lot...half of the part is written by her and I just added one or two lines...thank you jerry...love you...baby...



Plz give me ur view on the update...





Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally I m editing my comment
Veer is angry on RV but I think his decision to change the school of Angel is not right
bachchhe to galati karte hain na
aur sab schools me ek jaise hi bachchhe hote hain
punishment should not be agressive
Galati to RB ki hai
if the prank was for Ali even then he was wrong
he doesn't have a right to do such dangerous pranks..
injection wala part samajh me nahin aaya..
NP.. thode din me samajh aa jaayega
Maan joined Geet in bed
bechara kya karega
ghar me to mauka milta nahin hai usko
to hospital me hi sahi😛😉
wow Maan geve a nice slap to RB..he deserved that
SB... well done👏 you did well in that section😉
and now everyone comes to know about Maan and Geet's relations.
Thank God
Indu tumne ye kaam to achchha kiya
ab ya bhi bata do ki Geet store room me kaise pahunchi?
waiting for the next update😉
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haan kar dete hai,,...
jab chaiye edit karlo

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