Journey ..... Season two epl update on page 138- 24 sep - Page 42

geet some planed so she stay in her house 😉 maan drooling his wife iher beauty

sorry for late comment mommy

hi all this comment is given by my one reader
she pm me and it is so beutiful , i cant stop my self
to update on it she dont want to come now on thred
she will come she promise me , hai dear just hug you
and big thanks




mahi,

Journey update is awesome yar. i loved the way geet denied going to nani's home after hearing ami's talks. poor gal duno tat it was all planned by her bro...😉 n showing natunki to maan...😆ammay wow at a bil yar... 😛rano and maan's relation is so beautiful she undertood his silence n supports him morally... maanets moments were so beautiful... i loved the way maan introduced himself to his baby so he wants a pari ...😊 geet remembering past is natural... she neds time to overcum that...ammy again put maan into trouble...😉 poor ,maan got struck btwn bro n sis...😉😃 so the gal who hugs maan is ridhima n she s ammy's gf.. i wonder wt will geet do wen she cums to know ammy and ridhi's relationship...😉 geet becoming j and wearing saree which again became a big trouble for maan. poor him struck in this natunki parivaar...😆 "ye lo ho gaya ab abhi tak batchit bhi nahi , aur she come like this , ab main khud ko control kaise karunga , how I will control myself yaar ," tese lines are so cute... how come both maaneets washroom don have water at same time? i guess its also coz of ammy... so maaneet are struck in washroom with one being wet and other half nude😆maaneets moments in washroom are so passionate.😳"maan just hug her tight and say geet I miss you geet ,ab muje chain mila hai jab main in baho main aaya hu geet" tese lines show how much he miss her. i loved tese lines so much...🤗 overall the entire update is awesome. i couldn stop myself from laughing... all moments are so cute and a stress buster... even wen both maan and geet are not together u brought them together always... i never know even separation can be so beautiful...yar mahi again u stopped at the wrong moment😡.. wen u r planning to update again? i'm so eagerly waiting yar.

superb and amazing love it

part 15
awesome dear...
nice...
cont soon dear...

awesome update..
geet in full of anger nd jealousy...
continue soon dear. ..

Part 16

other side armaan just hug ridizy who all lost in lappy he just nuzzal his nose in ridzy hair and kiss her shoulder he expecting moan and he got slap he just froz in his place she never react this way

he mummer kahi ispe Msk ka jadu to nahi chala na

she again slap him and say he is my bro don't say anything and he is more hot than you get it

ammy took long breath than what is this reaction ha

ridzy - ek to main itani pareshaan hu ke muje samaje nahi aa raha kya soulation du usko

ammy - kisko

ridzy- yaar mahi ko

ammy - ye mahi kon hai

ridzy - ammy India forum wali mahi

ammy - said with disopppint wo mahi

ridzy - kya wo ye MERI mahi hai

ammy ha pata hai mere romance ki dushman

ridzy cant hear him and say pata hai Ratna , don't ask who is ratna , reader hai bahot pyyari kitne beautiful comment deti hai just make page colorful and she is angry on mahi ke mahi ne usko comment like nahi kiya lakin poor mahi kare kya Ye LIKE ka buttan hamesha dushmani nikalta hai mahi se

and you know uske town main mahi ke light ka kitana problem hai and aparna thought aparna another reader ke mahi uspe narraz hai

and upon that mahi by mistake hurt her basanti

ammy say with tont another reader

ridzy na na not only reader now writer also , wo non stop bolti hai na so mahi called her basanti uska naam uma hai and other side that pari jo itni parigiri karti hai jab bhi uska pm aata hai poor mahi ka bp low hone lagta hai kya kya karti rahti hai mahi ki pari such main

and mahi have to comment on so many story you know from desigirl to vrinda di , abhi itani sari problem mahi face kar rahi hai and you want to romance with me ammy

ammy just gap her like fool , and mummer ye mahi ke husband ka number mil jaye to usko hi bol dunga apne mahi ko smbahal hamesha meri romance ki vaat lagati hai

in maaneet room maan who lost in geet just remove pallu from geet shoulder ,,geet cheek turn red in shy ...after so much day they are so closed and maan looking her like this maan just cares her long hair and just look to her shaking lips ,so many water drops on her rosy lips maan just want to drink that

but geet again remind his slap his word ,she just open her eyes and give painful look to maan and that broke maan like she asking with eyes why maan why ,just ask me once I will tale you all na , why you do this why she remind her first mitting with maan in dadi room how both lost in each other how he tease her on Appel

Kitni baatein yaad aati hain

Tasveerein si ban jaati hain

Main kaise inhein bhooloon

Dil ko kya samjhaaun

I am recalling many memories

They are like photographs

How do I forget them?

How do I convince my heart?

maan just want to go reversed and just erased that all bad memory who hurt his geet like this , all punishment looking small but geet se judai with passing second killing him he remind his oath in marriage that he will never ever hurt her , he will be with her in her happiness in her pain but he himself become reason of her pain , tear start to flow from both eyes ...one because of pain and other in remorse

Kitni baatein kehne ki hai

Honthon par jo sehmi si hai

Ik roz inhein sun lo

Kyun aise gumsum ho

There are many things which I want to say

They are sad and silent over my lips

Someday, hear them

Why are you sad like this?

Kyun poori ho na paayi daastaan

Kaise aayi hai aisi dooriyaan

Why was the tale incomplete?

How did this distance come between us?

maan eyes just saying her just once hear him jo baat mere hote pe sahmi hui hai bas ek baar sun lo , please lesion this I cant see you so sad ku hamare beetch ye duriya aa gayi hai geet I want to tale you just once hear your maan please his eyes went to her tummy and he again lok to geet like he is saying huamri aane wali happiness ke liye give me one chance

Dono ke dilon mein chhupa hai

Jo ik anjaana sa gham

Kya ho paayega woh kam

Koyi kya kahe

A strange grief that is hidden

In both our hearts,

Will it decrease?

What can anyone say?

Dono ne kabhi zindagi ke

Ik mod pe bhi jo paayi

Hai kaisi woh tanhaai

Koyi kya kahe

We both have found such loneliness

At one turn of life

What can anyone say?

geet look to maan eyes like she is saying why we both standing in such loneliness after sharing so much beautiful moment after marriage jo strange grief hm dono ke dil main hai kya wok am hoga maan...ye dard kabhi kam hoga more tear fall from geet eyes

Kitna viraan hai ye sama

This time is so deserted

Saanson mein jaise ghulta hai dhuaan

Kaisi aayi hai aisi dooriyaan

It's like smoke is mixing with breath

How did this distance come between us?

like her eyes asking some word and action we face this deserted time jo huamri saanson ko bhi hurt kar raha hai lagta ye breath bhi humko hurt kar rahi , intna distance aa gaya hai ke hum humari zingi ki sbse badi khushi share nahi kare rahe hai ...

Tumse aaj yun mil ke dil ko

Yaad aaye lamhein kal ke

Ye aansoon kyun hai chhalke

Ab kya kahen

Today, meeting you like this

I remembered the past moments

Why have these tears dropped today?

What can I say?

Tumne humko dekha jo aise

Toh ik umeed hai jaagi

Phir tumse pyaar paane ki

Ab kya kahen

You have seen me like this

Now there is a hope in me

To get love from you once again

What can I say?

he look in bathroom and look to her with love and maaneet lost in their past beautiful when they in bathroom after their first night how maan make love her with glass partion how she feel maan lips on her body thou there is partion of glass wall ...

imagin both without cloth and glass is in between them 😉

us din to ye water ne agg laga di thi and how she melted in his hug when he just touch her with glass partion he just pull her with desire ful eyes so geet nude body touch that glass than he just worship her on that glass partion with his finger , his lips that now itself she can fell that touch , she just closed her eyes and some drop fail from her eyes

maan just took moov now he know he have to he just kiss geet tear and say can I don't get once chance to get love from you geet please ...maan look to geet with so much hope

Aa gaye ham kahaan se kahaan

Dekhe mud ke ye dil ka kaarvaan

Kaise aayi hai aisi dooriyaan

Where have we come!

The heart looks back and ponders

How did such distance come between us?

precap geet reaction or ans

🤣
abi takk sirf red-blue wala part hi padha 🤣

bt u didnt write abt others...
they will get HURT 😆🤣

i also thougght u didnt read my comment due to no like 🤢

itna saara res ho gaya hai...
babaji 😒

awesome update geet J maaneet locked in bathroom lovely