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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
pammi and dev are realy monster

they kill daadi and also try to kill maaan
maaneet convo is nice
maan gave job to geet and their teasing
cont sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
O Ji! Satsriakal! Twadde vaaste main teaser laayi hoon! Padh lo aur muskura do!😃

Geet stared out of the jeep looking at the passing scenery when piano notes flew through the air. She looked at Maan in confusion only to see him adjusting the radio. Her eyes widened as she realized that Maan was putting on radio for her. She looked at him surprised by his thoughtfulness while Maan continued fiddling with the knob of radio trying to fine tune the wavelength.

Kaun Mera

Mera Kya Tu Laage


Kaisa laga? Achcha laga?

Take care and enjoy the weekend,

Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice teaser

update kab milne waalil hai BB
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6

so maan is the step brother of dev
he has also gone though the torture of dev and pammi

both are developing feelings for each other but dont know it yet
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya teaser hai
oh ho maan kya baat hai ji
geet ke liye radio on kiya
tussi toh cha gaye ji
haiyye abhi yeh haal hai toh aage aage kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
kalpana fab teaser yaar.. ab jaldi next part post kardo yaar.. looks likr maan babu os interested in geet
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

kameeni hai woh aurat
man she deserves to be killed soon
and so does her son kameene


So true!

they tried to kill maan
hawww kameeno tumhari toh aisi ki taisi
saalon sharam nhain aati
well if they can do this to family well they can do it to handas
poor maan man
he was just a child when they tried to kill him


I know!

not only that but they killed his dadi too
mann toh karta hai inki maut ki planning shuru karr doon
so maan tells his story finally
and its worse aint it
at least she had family till now
and poor thing didnt even get to see his dadi again
those kameeney killed her and he couldnt even see her
wow that was some story


Thank you!

hmm what was that with maneet flirting with one another
that was one light moment
and am glad for that
seems they have gotten to know one another
she sure is pulling him towards her
and thats not worng
but yes first they gotta escape that kameena


Arre! Bhaagte bhaagte pyaar ho raha hai! Hone do!

then all this can happen
so he sure did well for himself
when she was telling that story he must be remembering all his past
gosh that cant be easy
something brought them more closer
those kameeney dev and pammi
hmm they spent the night talking how cute
in between such situation they managed to do this
you were good to include it


Thank you!😳😃

when she said are you married and she was like what am i saying so funny right
both were disappointed that the other wasnt serious about the flirting
koi nahin if not know later


So true!😆

maybe when she works for him


Uske pehle this story will end! It has only 3 chapters left, dear! Two romantic chapters and one big climax!😃

that would be fun and rocking
stalked it wooohooo


Grinning like an idiot coz you stalked me!😃

waise when i said i fainted it was compliment
sorry if you thought otherwise


Arre nahi! I knew it was a compliment! I was just joking around!😆

his story was more sad man
but geet is in his life now so thats okay
well now we know who dadima was
and also that he has no family in delhi and he is all aone
good thing he encountered the handa sisters then
dude abb inse chutkara naa paa sakenge
as if he would wanna


😆

he wants them safe and sound
waise khud ki story ko kya stalk karna ji
chaddo aap ki marzi
they sure got along there didnt they
awww that was so cute to see
cheers for pm

And thanks a lot fro your review! Loved reading it!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
though there is no resemblances between the two, ur story and the tamil film kaaka, kaaka... one of surya and jyotika ...

reading ur teaser reminded me of that... there is a scene there na... where she says... am not asking u to change but some changes which we think as good can be used...i am wierd.. i know😆

o i so much love the film BB... have u seen that??

waiting for the update noe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

zaalim dev aur pammi ki kahaani , geet ki zubaani...😆


😆 Lovely name! 🤣

loved how u narrated the tale... horrible mother and son duo... when i read first, about the son for whom his father married pammi... i was screaming here... yes it will be maaan😆


Really happy that you loved the narrating style! And i know that everyone will figure out that Maan is the first son that is why I wrote the last chapter smaller, coz I wanted this part and Maan's narration together!😊

the sin account was just rising steadily on pammi and devs name... the terrible thing was to try to kill maan, at such a tender age... and killing daadima was just shameful...


I know!

but i loved how u brought the touch of fun at the end, when our mood was engrossed in khurana enmity... loved how geet spontaneously asked whether he was married or not...


Happy that you liked that twist!😃

both are disappointed ...maan hearing that geet doesnt want to marry now and geet that he was not serious in proposal... ab aage gaddi kaise aage badegi inki??


Gaadi badh jaayegi! After all Dev haina! (You will come to know what I am talking about in eighth chapter)

will be eagerly waiting for the next BB


Next part will be up on Sunday!
Thanks for the review!

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