SS by Kalpana: Lutt Jaawaa! Complete!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi,

I am Kalpana and I am writing a Short Story on Maan Geet! It is of only of 6 - 9 parts and I will be updating it twice or thrice a week (depends on my free time).

Few months back I was watching Vidyut Jamwal Movie Commando where this scene came where the girl keeps on chattering while the man remained quiet. It reminded me of Geet's chatter and Maan's annoyance and suddenly, a story was ready in my head. This story is inspired by Commando but as usual I have added my own twist. Hope you enjoy this story!

Please leave a review and tell me whether you would like to read more! Thank you for reading!

Take care

Kalpana


P.S. If you are interested in my other works, please check out my index:

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INDEX

Part I Geet's Wedding Page 6

Part II Geet Escapes Page 11

Part III Maan and Geet's Convo Page 22

Part IV Escape Plan Hits A Snag Page 29

Page V Geet Narrates Her Story Page 35

Page VI Maan Speaks About His Life Page 44

Part VII To The Safety Page 52

Part VIII Back To Square One Page 63

Part IX Happy Ending Page 68

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story!!!!!!
eagerly waiting to read it ...
continue soon!!!!!!
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Congrats dear. Can you also do ArShi version
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congo on new subject dear.
new story dear.
tf pm.
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congrats fr d new thread dear
thanx fr d pm
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waiting for the story dear
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congrats for new story...

eager to read more...
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congrats BB for the new story👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fffan123

Congrats dear. Can you also do ArShi version

Thank you! This SS won't have Arshi version. Sorry dear! But I am unable to imagine Arshi with this storyline! But my next venture will have both versions!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saima4744

congo on new subject dear.

new story dear.
tf pm.

Thank you dear!

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