maneet with difference #3 new poem add pg21 on 5/2 14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: tellyme

you know actually I liked it...

only last two paras are less refined.. starting is genuinely good

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actually its for SLOW POISON BY mrs.msk

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

here u go

sukhe patte(leaves)

daal se tut kar

kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !

aur mar kar bhi ,

kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !

kami toh ,un patto main hai

jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,

sukh(dry) jaate hai !

pata nahi ,

unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !

par unhone maut bhi toh ,

gale nahi lagaayi !

woh jaane kyu ,

is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,

na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,

na haail kar sake unhe koi ,

woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!

maana ke ,

zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !

par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,

usse ke ,

aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !

kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,

zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !

koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !

toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !

yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka

ki milke ek baar ,

ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,

par woh naadan ,

yeh na jaante the ,

ke badla woh ek rog hai

jo hai be ilaaj ,

is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,

par ,

nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai

aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye

yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai

aur

badla woh rog hai ,

jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai

na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,

hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!

me waiting for your reply

gud aur bad😕

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

new poem

its for puner vivah by rashmi

hazaaron khawahishe thi

laankhoon farmaishe thi

is dil ki tumse

iss se pahle ke

hum tumhe haal-e-dil sunaa paate

koun hai iss dil main

yeh duniya ko bataa paate

kyu yeh aandhi hai aayi

jo mere armaano par dhul ban kar hai chaayi !

tum ne jo maanga

usse to bahtar tha,jaan ka nikal jaana

par phir ,haskar

teri har chah par dum nikle !

chahe jaaye jaan meri ,har pal

par phir bhi ,muh se aah na nikle !

tum nahi jaanti

ke tum ho

jo karke pyaari baate

is dil li gahraayi main uttar gayi ho!

na jaante the jinhe hum

un mere zameer ki haddon se guzar gayi ho

par tera yu aana

aur phir

zindgi main na shamil ho paana

nahi jaanta ,jeena kaisa hoga mera

par hai yakin

ab marna bhi mushkil hoga

hope u like it

reply soon😡

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

annoucment

hold on yaaro

abhi mera mood aur likhne ka hai

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

muhje kya patha aapne kyun nahi likha

Originally posted by: SunRahaHainaTu

sorry dear

main bimaar thi

so lost track to many things

can you again tell

about my lost memory

with link please

is baar

aapka no. first hoga😊😊

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

kal diya tha na nishu
incredible fusion ka

Originally posted by: SunRahaHainaTu

toh aap hai

arre madam thoda wait

sabre ka phal mittha hoga