maneet with difference #3 new poem add pg21 on 5/2 14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: tellyme

yeah I really liked it... specially the simplicity of words... I always adore simplicity...it brings out things from heart and I can easily correlate with it

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

thanx alot dear

aap ek poem fread laregi

meri hi hai

kafi poorani

maine abhi read ki

nd

i was like😲

kya likha tha maine😆😆

read karoge aap😕

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

new poem

its for

bandhan by tellyme

tu jaan hai meri

pahchaan hai meri

phir kyu ,

duniya ke liye,

yeh dard khudko diya

dur khudko mujhse kiya !

pyaar hai kya ,

tu toh khuda hai mera,

kuch bhi to nahi hai mere paas,

jiska nahi hai tujhe ahsaas !

pyaar hai kiya

chaha tha saath tera

par phir bhi ,

sirf tere liye ,

khud ko zuda tha tujhse kiya

par kyu nahi tha,

tujhe yeh ahsaas ,

ik tere siya, kuch bhi toh nahi tha

mere is dil ke paas !

jab tu thi mujhe chod gayi

lakhoon tukado main thi tod gayi!

par phir,

ik tere liye tha sambhal gaya

bikharne se bahtar

pathar main tha badal gaya

tune aakar hai ZINDA kiya

dil phir se ahsaaso se bhar diya

nahi hai tumhe maaloom

kitna tadpa hai yeh dil

chu lo tum mujhe

iss ek chah main

marta tha yeh dil

ab aaja mere paas

nahi sahaa jaata ,

yeh duri ka ahsaas

banaalo yu mujhe apna

ke dur hona hamaara,

ban jaaye

bura sapna

hope you like it

Originally posted by: priya111111

nishu tu ne maarhi daala iss poem se

it just mind blowing


loved it👏

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

here u go

sukhe patte(leaves)

daal se tut kar

kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !

aur mar kar bhi ,

kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !

kami toh ,un patto main hai

jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,

sukh(dry) jaate hai !

pata nahi ,

unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !

par unhone maut bhi toh ,

gale nahi lagaayi !

woh jaane kyu ,

is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,

na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,

na haail kar sake unhe koi ,

woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!

maana ke ,

zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !

par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,

usse ke ,

aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !

kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,

zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !

koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !

toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !

yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka

ki milke ek baar ,

ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,

par woh naadan ,

yeh na jaante the ,

ke badla woh ek rog hai

jo hai be ilaaj ,

is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,

par ,

nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai

aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye

yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai

aur

badla woh rog hai ,

jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai

na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,

hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!

me waiting for your reply

gud aur bad😕

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

kya baat hai priya

itna pyaar😳😳

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

new poem

its for puner vivah by rashmi

hazaaron khawahishe thi

laankhoon farmaishe thi

is dil ki tumse

iss se pahle ke

hum tumhe haal-e-dil sunaa paate

koun hai iss dil main

yeh duniya ko bataa paate

kyu yeh aandhi hai aayi

jo mere armaano par dhul ban kar hai chaayi !

tum ne jo maanga

usse to bahtar tha,jaan ka nikal jaana

par phir ,haskar

teri har chah par dum nikle !

chahe jaaye jaan meri ,har pal

par phir bhi ,muh se aah na nikle !

tum nahi jaanti

ke tum ho

jo karke pyaari baate

is dil li gahraayi main uttar gayi ho!

na jaante the jinhe hum

un mere zameer ki haddon se guzar gayi ho

par tera yu aana

aur phir

zindgi main na shamil ho paana

nahi jaanta ,jeena kaisa hoga mera

par hai yakin

ab marna bhi mushkil hoga

hope u like it

reply soon😡

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

here u go

sukhe patte(leaves)

daal se tut kar

kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !

aur mar kar bhi ,

kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !

kami toh ,un patto main hai

jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,

sukh(dry) jaate hai !

pata nahi ,

unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !

par unhone maut bhi toh ,

gale nahi lagaayi !

woh jaane kyu ,

is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,

na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,

na haail kar sake unhe koi ,

woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!

maana ke ,

zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !

par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,

usse ke ,

aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !

kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,

zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !

koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !

toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !

yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka

ki milke ek baar ,

ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,

par woh naadan ,

yeh na jaante the ,

ke badla woh ek rog hai

jo hai be ilaaj ,

is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,

par ,

nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai

aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye

yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai

aur

badla woh rog hai ,

jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai

na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,

hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!

me waiting for your reply

gud aur bad😕