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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 13

Dadi looks at Geet puzzled...

Why is she worried?

She should be happy that Dadi has come back...

But she seems to be a little tensed...

Geet: mera matlab hai ki aap toh yahan nahi aana chahathe the, haina? Aap Maan se naraz haina?

Dadi understands Geet's tensions...

Dadi: hum aapse hi milne aaye hai bete

Geet: toh aap Maan se milne nahi aaye ho?

Dadi: woh toh hai, lekhin hum toh pehle aapko milna chahathe the

Geet: kyun?

Dadi: apne haath dikhayiye

Dadi wears the ring on her finger...

Geet is surprised...

Geet: ye kya hai m'ami?

Dadi: aapne hummari jaan ko humme wapas diya hai bete, usske aage ye toh kuch bhi nahi hai

Geet: lekhin m'am hum patients se kuch nahi le sakthe

Dadi: hum patient thodi nahi

Geet: patient's ke relatives se bhi kuch nahi le sakthe m'am

Dadi: ye kya m'am m'am karke rehthe hai aap, ye Hindustan hai bete, aur ab aap hummare pothe bhi ban chuke ho, Dadi bhulayiye humme, aur Dadi toh apne pothi ke liye ye ring de hi sakthi, haina?

Geet smiles...

Geet: ji dadi

Dadi: ye hui na baat, hum toh aaj bahut kush hai , hum Maan ko bhi milkke aathe hai

Geet : par Dadi ye sahi waqt nahi hai unse milne ki

Dadi: what? Ye toh visiting hours hi haina?

Geet: woh...mein keh rahi thi ki unkko kuch din akhele rehne dhijiye, tabhi toh unkko apne galthi ka ehsaas hoga

Dadi: humme bhi patha hai bete ki aap sahi ekh rahe hai, lekhin humamre dil nahi maantha, sirf ek bar milkke aathe hai

Geet: ab aap jaathe toh unkko lagega ki woh jo bhi karein dadi maaf kar denge, phir se dhust danav ban jaathe toh?

Dadi smiles hearing that...

Dadi: apne unko pura ka pura Dhust danav banadhi?

Geet: woh ho hi aaise haina? Mein kay kar sakthi? Isse achcha naam nahi mila!

Dadi: woh utna bhi Dhust nahi hai, dhere dhere aap bhi unko samaj jayenge

Geet: kya?

Dadi: teek hai bete, hum ab ghar chale jaathe hai

Dadi looks very disappointed...dadi bahut udaas hai...

Dadi: bye bete, Maan ka khyaal rakhna

Geet feels very bad for dadi...

Geet: m'am, ek minute

Geet stops her...

Dadi: phir se m'am?

Geet: sorry dadi, aap aao mere saath

Geet takes dadi to the waiting hall...

Dadi: humme yahan kyun lekhe aaye hai bete?

Geet: aap yahi beitjao, aur ye newspaper pado

Dadi: hum apne chasma ko bhoolke aaye hai

Geet smiles...

Dadi: Dadi, aap bas acting karo

Dadi winks...: teek hai, hum toh bahut achche actor hai

Geet: issiliye toh MSK bhi itne nautanki karthe

Geet laughs along with dadi...

Dadi: par bete hum ye act kyun kar rahe hai?

Geet: aap yahi wait akro, mein kissi bahane banakke Maan ko lekhe aathi hoon

Dadi: thanks bete, waise humme bhi Maan se milne ka bahut maan kar raha tha

Geet: mein jaathi thi

Geet goes to see Maan...

Maan is happy to see her...

Akhele rehkke bore ho raha tha...

Ab isse thoda ladtha toh maza aayega...

Maan: tum? Phir se aagayi ?

Geet wheel cahir lekhe aayi hai...

Maan: meinne koi wheel chair nahi maanga

Geet: what?

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: ye aapko bahar le jaane ke liye hai

Maan: tum mujhe bahar goomne lekhe jaaogi?

Maan is surprised...

Maan: tum ne ab ye kaam bhi shuru kardhi? Mere pasie khaafi nahi hai kya?

Maan laughs...

Geet: what?

Maan: ye achcha side business hai

Geet: aap aur aapke soch? Chalo aapke kuch tests lena hai

Maan: what? Sister ne mujhe aaise kuch nahi kaha?

Geet: mein kehthi hoona?

Maan: issiliye toh mujhe shak ho raha hai

Geet: mein aapse behas nahi karna chahthi

Maan: toh ab kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: aap na, jaldhi utto

Geet pulls his hands...

Maan: hare, sambalkke, mera paav

Geet: over acting mat karo, Dadi aapse behther hai

Maan: kay? Dadi? Dadi kahan hai?

Geet: ghar pe

Maan: tum mujhse kuch chupa toh nahi rahi ho

Geet: aap hamesha mujhpe shak kyun karthe?

Maan: tummare aakhon hi mujhe ishara karthe hai ki kuch toh gadbad hai

Geet: kya? Aap mere aakhon ko kyun dekhthe ho?

Maan: teek hai, tum kehthi toh mein neeche dekhtha hoon

Maan looks at her lips and gazes down...

Geet adjusts her duppatta...

Geet: what?

Geet pushes him on the chair and moves to his back...

Maan: chalo issi bahane thoda bahar toh jaa saktha, yahan kaidhi ke tarah band rehke bore ho raha tha

Geet: aap yahan vacation pe nahi aaye ho

Maan: par ye toh mujhe vacation hi lagtha

Geet takes him out...

Maan: tumne bathaya hi nahi ki tumne mere 10 lakh ko kya kiya?

Geet: woh paise sahi jagah pohunch gaye

Maan: tumne paise wapas kardhi? Kab? Dadi ne bathaya bhi nahi?

Geet: wapas kyun karthi? Ab woh mere paise hai,ussko jo chahoon mein kar sakhti

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapko hamesha paison ki padi haina?

Maan : lekhin 10 lakh ko tum kya karoge?

Geet: aap itna sawaal kyun karthe ho?

Maan: kyunki woh mera paisa hai

Geet: nahi aapke baap ka hai

Maan: haan, mera baap ka hai, tera baap ka nahi

One of her friend comes and Geet starts talking with him...

He looks handsome and smart...

Koi Dr hoga? Haan, it's Dr SID

Geet usse hass haskke baat kar rahi hai

Maan feels jealous...

Geet had deliberately left him there for dadi's sake...

Maan: halo, aap log badh mein baat karlo, pehle apna apna kaam karo

Geet: aap do minute bhi nahi rukh sakthe?

Sid leaves...

Maan: do minute, pura 6 minute 36 secs...

Maan shows his watch...

Geet: kaam ho gaya?

Geet waves her hands...

Dadi shows a thumb's up...

Dadi is very happy to see Maan admiring Geet and feeling jealous...

Dadi ka kaam ho gaya...she leaves...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Nice update...



Dadi ne shagun(?) dedi...aur geet ne leli...



Yeh maan ab geet ka intezar bhi Karne laga...


Geet ka idea acha hain...dadi ne maan ko dekh kiya aur dadi ne J maan ko...ab dadi koi toh planning karegi...




Maza Ayega ab...



Do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
geet ko shagun bhi milgayi😳aur maan thoda thoda badal bhi raha hai aur upar se jealousy bhi horaha hai aur wo sab dadi ki nazron mein bhi padgaya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
awesome update
maan missing geet and feeling jealous too!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
omg this is hilarious.. ab dadi ke dimag mein kya maaneet milan scheme chal raha hai? cont sion hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Part - 14

Maan ko thoda shak hotha...

Ye aaise kyun behave kar rahi hai jaise koi galthi kar rahi ho?

Aur bar bar wahan kyun dekhthi hai?

Maan turns and looks...

Par wahan toh koi nahi hai, dadi has left na?

Geet: chalo, hum bhi chalthe hai

Maan: kay? Mera test?

Geet: hare, wahi chalthe hai, aao

Geet takes him inside a room...

Dr Armaan and Dr Ridima have been waiting there...

Armaan ortho hoga aur ridima pideatrician, achcha?

Armaan: Mr.Maan, I was just waiting for you

He checks Maan...

Armaan: Great you are recovering fast, I think you can get back to the fields soon, team India is missing you young man

Maan thinks...mein chale jaatha toh shayad yahan koi mujhe miss karega?

Armaan: ohh ho...you too miss the game! Don't worry, you will be alright

Maan: hope so

Maan is surprised...

He should be happy to hear that...

Par koi Maan ko miss karein ya nahi Maan toh zaroor kissi ko miss karega...

Abhi se pareshaan jo ho gaya yahan se jaane se?

Geet: Ridi, tum yahan?

Ridi: kyun? Tum mujhe yahan expect nahi kar rahi thi?

Geet looks at Armaan and Ridi...

Geet: mein samaj gayi

Geet smiles...

Ridi: what?

Geet: Dr Armaan jahan tum bhi wahan, haina?

Geet winks at Armaan...

Maan doesn't like it...Maan wonders how these Drs get time to hit the gym...ek se badkar ek hai...

Usske biceps ko dekho...shayad mein bhi har jaatha...

Ye surgery kartha hai ya kuch aur?

Waise ye hospital hai ya koi ad agency?

Yahan toh sab Drs kam aur models zyada lagthe hai...

Maan, be careful...yahan toh competition bahut tough hai...

Ridi: hare Geet, mein toh Mr.Maan se hi milne aayi hoon

Ridi teases Geet...Geet thoda pareshaan ho jaathi...:kya?

Ab toh Sanjeevani ke naye love birds toh Maneet haina?

Maan is surprised that everyone gives him so much respect...

Geet ne toh usska naam badnaam kardhiya hoga, haina?

Lekhin Geet ke wajhe se hi Maan ko ye sare respect mil rahe hai...

Geet: tum cricket dekhthi ho?

Ridi: nahi nahi, mein tum logon ke tarah pagal thodi nahi

She looks at Armaan and smiles...

Maan is shocked...ye humme pagal kehthi ya fans ko?

Armaan: aaise tum Vicky ke samne kehkke dekho...woh tumme kya kartha? Kam se kam inke samne toh cricket ke bhurayi mat karo

Ridi: I don't care about cricket, lekhin Mr.maan thank you very much, I just came here to personally thank you

Maan is confused, ye mujhe kyun thank kar rahi hai?

Armaan: yep...it's so nice of you, thanks a lot man, you have a very big heart

Maan looks at Geet...

Ye kya ho raha hai?

Kahin ye isski koi nayi chaal toh nahi?

Geet reacts as if she is also surprised...

Ridi: you know Mr.Maan? you have saved two children's life, paise toh kitne logon ke paas hai? lekhin ek jaan ki keemat toh aap jaise kuch hi log jaanthe

Armaan: toh Geet, hum chalthe hai, take care

They leave...

Maan: Geet, ye kya keh rahe hai? meinne aaise kya kiya?

Geet: mujhe kyun poochthe ho? mujhe kaise patha?

Maan: toh tum nahi jaanthi?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: joot, aaj toh tum kuch zyada hi joot bolthi ho

Geet: chalo, mein aapko wapas lekhe jaathi

Maan holds her hand and pulls her closer...

Geet: hare chodo mujhe

Maan: pehle bathao ki tumne mere 10 lakh ko kya kiya hai?

Geet: meinne uss paise ko children's ward ko donate kardhi

Now Maan pulls her even closer...

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Geet: mere haath chodo

Maan: nahi chod saktha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, mein toh inn hathon ko aaise hi daamkar zindagi bar tummare saath chalna chahatha hoon Geet, yahi hathon ne mujhe sahi rastha pe lekhe aaye haina?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Maan looks into her eys...they always reflect her heart...

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai?

Geet: nahi, aap galat soch rahe ho, mein bas uss bachon ki madat karna chahathi thi

Maan: toh tum mere madat karna nahi chahathi thi?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: toh tumne mujhe peene se kyun rokha?

Geet: woh...aap mere patient ho, issiliye

Maan: bas ek aur patient? Aur kuch nahi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: mujhe dekhke bathao Geet, mujhse aakhen kyum charathi?

Maan lifts her chin...

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Lekhin Geet itne asaani se maanne wali nahi hai...Maan ko ab puri tarah se uss gandi aadat se bahar aana padega, Maan toh ab iss naye nashe mein apna purane nashe ko bhoolne ke liye tayaar ho gaya hai...

Geet hosh mein aathi...

Geet: ab humme jaldhi jaana hai, Chief aathe hi honge

Geet Maan ko wapas lekhe jaathi...

Chief is on his rounds...

He is surprised to see Geet with Maan...

Chief: Mr.Maan aap bahar kya kar rahe ho? this is not your cricket ground, this is my hospital

Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi...

Chief has warned her to stay away from Maan...

Maan Geet ke chehre ko dekhthe hi jaan gaya ki kuch toh gadbad hai...

Chief: Ms.Geet

Geet is scared...

Chief calls her like that only when he is angry with her...

Geet: sir...woh...

Maan: woh sir, meinne hi Geet ko bhulaya tha, mujhe chidren's ward ko dekhna tha, issiliye ye mere madat karne aayi

Ab Maan ne 10 lakh donate kiya hai toh Chief aage kuch nahi keh pathe...

But he is puzzled to see the changes in Maan, maybe he turns mad only after his drinks?

Still he is angry with Geet...

Chief: Geet, you can go now

Geet had to leave...

she is scared that chief would be very angry with her...

Yes he is little worried about Geet after seeing her with Maan...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Main bas poochne wali thi update ke baare mein...


Yeh Maan babu toh bohut fast nikle...pehli ball mein hi ghakka laga diya...Geet ke hosh udgaye...


ab dekhna yeh hain...geet kya karti han...Maan ko out karegi yah phir khud haar jaayegi...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan so fast
nice update
geet maan ko thoda aur pareshan karo
😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 11
awesome dear...
good Maan has finally realized something...
Rano's call made him realize something...
chalo future saas ke call se kuch to faida hua...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
part 12
awesome...
haye haye fire works are started already between...
waah kya baat hai...
and Maan has decided to give up on drinking...
lets see his determination and for how lng...
Daadima is here...

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