New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
part 13
excellent...
Maan is changing...
and Daadima gifted Geet a ring...
and Maan needs Geet's dose to pass the day and time...
wow Maan...
and Geet too is concerned though she wont show it to him...
wow Sid and Geet's interaction kicked some jealousy in Maan...
whats happening to u Maan babu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
part 14
awesome dear...
excellent...
lovely...
Maan is feeling insecure...
very good...
let him feel that for sometime tabhi tho woh Geet ke pass pass hi hoga...
irritating and fighting with Geet is his fav time now...
and now hes J of Armaan too...
hahaha...
so he has come to know where his money has gone to...
Maan the handsome Docs are not ur enemies in fact Geet's Chief is...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Part - 15

Chief takes Maan to his room...

Later he calls Geet and warns her not to repeat this, he is not ready to take any risk, he can't help her if something goes wrong again...

He revises her chart to keep her away from Maan and he also makes sure that she is under his watchful eyes when she is at sanjeevani...

Chief is also like a father for Geet, and he is really concerned about her...

He is afraid that this Maan could easily lure her and she may be carried away by his charm...

She is so innocent know?

As long as she is her at samjeevani she is Chief's responsibility...

So he has to protect her from that badmaash?

Geet too prefers to stay away from Maan...

It's almost like he has read her mind...

And it's getting very difficult to control him now...

Here Maan starts missing her...

Geet ko bhi Maan ki bahut yaad aathi...

After a couple of days...

Geet apne duty katam karkke ghar aathi hai...

Vicky TV pe kissi match dekh raha hai...

Geet ne Salman ka koi picture dekhne ke liye hi itne jaldhi aaya hai...

Aur iss waqt India ki koi match bhi nahi...

Match ho toh bhi Maan nahi khelega...

Phir cricket dekhke kya faida?

Geet is not interested...

Par Vicky toh har waqt koi na koi match dekhthe rehtha...

Aajkal 24*7 koi na koi repeats chalteh rehthe haina?

Geet gets angry...

She snatches the remote from him...

Vicky: Geet, pls, mujhe remote wapas karo

Geet changes the channel...

Salman's film dekhna haina?

Vicky: kya? tum issiliye itna jaldhi aagayi?

Geet: haan

Vicky: Geet, tum bahut bigadgayi

Geet: tum toh har waqt cricket dekh sakthe, mein ek film nahi dekh sakthi?

Vicky: pls Geet, bas aaj mujhe dekhne do, woh kitna achcha kehltha hai? shayad woh phir se aaise nahin khel patha, mujhe dekhna hai

Geet: tum kisske baat kar rahe ho?

Vicky: hare, tummara patient, Maan singh Khurana, chahe woh kitna bhi bhura ho, he is a genius, kaise sixer martha? Ab toh mujhe nahi lagtha ki woh aaise kabhi khel saktha

Geet changes the channel...

Maan's play...

Ye match toh Geet ne pehle hi dekha hai, lekhin aaj toh Maan ki batting kuch zyada hi pasand aathi, usska style, usska power aur usska attitude...

Geet gets lost in the match...

Vicky is surprised...aaise toh Geet sirf salman ko dekhthi?

Vicky: kya baat hai Geet? Tumne apna Salman ki film miss kardhi?

Geet: sshh...mujhe disturb mat karo

Vicky ko kuch gadbad lagtha...

Vicky: aaise kya dekh rahi ho? issne toh teri police complaint karwaya tha? Bhool gayi?

Geet: woh toh uss waqt nashe mein tha

Vicky: kya? tum usske darafdari karthi ho?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Vicky: tum kab se usski itni fikar karne lagi?

Geet: jaise bhi woh mera patient hai, meri responsibility banthi hai usski fikar karne ki

Vicky: mujhe kuch teek nahi lagtha

Iss ladhki aankhom mein toh ek naya nasha nazar aatha hai...

Geet: tum ye faltu batein chodkke pehle mujhe ye bathao ki Maan apna kaunsa foot zyada isstemaal kartha?

Vicky: tumme technical batein mein interest kab aayi?

Geet: jawaab do pehle

Vicky: mujeh sochne do, Maan left handed batsman hai, aur front foot mein zyada kehltha, toh

Geet: tum apne cricket ki ghyaan chodo aur seedhe seedhe bathao ki woh left foot pe kheltha ya right?

Vicky: Maan likes to come down the pitch and hit the ball, he uses his right foot to anchor his weight, dekho aaise

Geet observes his actions keenly...

Maan ko toh right foot mein hi fracture hua hai...baabji, ab kya hoga?

Vicky: tum itna chintha kyun karthi ho?

Geet: shayad tum teek kehthe? Woh phir se khel anhi patha toh?

Vicky: cricket nahi hai toh kya? usske paas toh pehle hi bahut sara paisa hai, tum fikar mat karo

Geet: chup karo bhai, tum kuch nahi jaanthe

Vicky: mere baat mano, aur usske mamle mein tum nahi padthi toh hi achcha hoga, ab patha chal gaya ki woh kitne katarnak aadmi hai toh usse dhoor rehna hi achcha hai

Ranno: haan Geet, Vicky sahi kehtha hai, tumme usski madat karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, samji?

Geet: lekhin usske madat karna mera farz hai

Handaji: haan Geet, tumme usski madat karna hi hoga, patient chahe jaise bhi ho lekhin har patient ko ek jaisa treatment hi milna chahiye

Ranno: lo aagaye agle Mahatmaji

Geet: papaji hamesha sahi kehthe, humme usske personnel life se kya lena dena hai? mujhe toh sirf apna kaam teek se karna hai

Handaji: lekhin puthar, zara sambalkke

Geet: aapko meri fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai papaji, mein aapki beti hoon, mein apna khyaal rakh sakthi

Handaji: that's good, Vicky apne choti behen se kuch seekho, abhi bhi maa ke pallu mein chup ke rehtha

Ranno: mujhe toh kuch teek nahi lagtha

Handaji: ye meri sherni hai, tum chintha mat karo

Geet: yep, you don't worry ranno dear, I can handle this

Next day...

Geet kissi expert se milthi...

Jo sprotmen ko treat akrtha...

Waise ye mat pooch ke BCCI ne kissi expert ko kyun nahi bheja?

Ye Maneet ki kahaani hai toh ye kaam Geet ka hi haina?

Geet meets him and tells him about Maan...

She gives him all the details about Maan's condition...

He is happy to help Maan...

Geet takes him to the chief...

Chief agrees but he doesn't want Geet to get involved...

Geet had to accept Chief's conditions as she wants Maan to get the right treatment...

Geet also maintains that it's part of sanjeevani's treatment...

Get asks Dr.Armaan to take care of Maan...

She could only be a spectator...

That too she gets to see him from a distance...

She doesn't want him to know that she is with him...

He won't co-operate with the specialist else, Geet ke samne Maan duniya bhooljaatha, haina?

Then the expert would get angry and leave...

Geet knows everything about MSK now...

But Maan couldn't understand why she is hiding from him...

Why she is not coming to see him?

Armaan tells Maan about the chief's orders...

Maan calls the chief and tells him that he would comtinue the treatm,ent only when Geet takes charge else he would shift to another hospital...

Ye toh sanjeevani ka reputation ka sawaal hai...

Chief had to send Geet atlast...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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chief ki order se geet maan se dur rehrahi hai aur yaha majnu already missing laila😆par ziddi ladka apna zidd poorakiya geet ko uska treatment karwane keliya chief ko mana liya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95


Nice part...




Stubborn Maan...apni baat manwali Chief Se...😆



Ab dekhna hain ki Geet kaise apne feelings ko Chupati hain...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...now maan too is getting affected by geet & missing her ...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
at last chief maan gaya!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
part 15
awesome dear...
very nice...
so Geet is arranging the treatment for Maan...
lovely...
and Vicky doubted her and her mom is worried for her...
the Chief is protective of Geet...
but Maan is a stubborn person...
and the Chief had to bend to his demands...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 16

And finally Geet comes to see Maan...

Geet: how are you Mr.Maan?

Geet acts like a stranger?

Maan is also in good mood after seeing her...

Maan: I'm fine Ms.Geet, aap yahan kaise?

Geet: patha nahi aaj achanak chief ko kya ho gaya? aaj phir se mujhe yahan bhejdhiya iss Dhust Danav ko sambalne

Maan: kyunki unko bhi patha chal gaya ki iss dhuuu daaa, kya kaha tumne?

Geet: Dhust Danav

Maan: haan, iss Dhust Danav ko sirf tum sambal sakthe ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: aur iss DD toh yahan sirf tummare liye tehra hai, warna yahan kaun rahega?

Geet: toh ye sab aapka hi kaam hai?

Maan: haan, meinne tummare chief ko aaisa daradhiya ki wahi tumme mere paas bhejthe

Geet: ye teek nahi kya aapne

Maan: mujhe sirf tummare saath chahiye Geet, aur tummare treatment

Geet: kyun? Mein toh bas abhi abhi seekh rahi hoon, aur aapko expert ki zaroorat hai

Maan: meinne suna hai ki tumne hi mere liye special trainer ka intrezaam kiya hai, kyun Geet? Tum mere liye ye sab kyun kartrhi?

Geet: kyun ki aap toh special case haina?

Maan: toh mein tummare liye special bangaya hoon, haina?

Geet: aaise nahi hai

Maan looks at her for an answer...

Geet looks the other side and answers...

Maan: mujhe dekhkke kyun nahi bolthi?

Geet: woh...mein

Maan: mere aankhon mein aankhen dalkke bolo Geet, kya mein special nahi hoon?

Maan turns her towards his face...Geet sharmathi...

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Just then Armaan comes...

Armaan: Maan, you look happy today

Maan: haan Dr, I'm very happy today

Armaan: koi khaas baat hai kya?

Maan: samjo aaj mujhe meri zindagi wapas mil gayi

Armaan: you are right

Geet: kya?

Armaan: dekho, your leg is fine now, aaisa hi train karthe raho toh next series mein century mar sakthe ho

Maan: thank you Dr

Armaan: you should thank Geet

Maan suddenly catches hold of Geet's hands, pulls her closer...

Maan: thanks Geet

Armaan: toh mein chaltha hoon, take care Maan,see you Geet

Armaan winks and leaves...he wants to leave them alone...

Geet: ye kay kar rahe ho?

Maan: hare tumne mere liye itna kuch kiya hai toh mera farz bantha hai tumme thank karne ki

Geet: usski koi zaroorat nahi, meinne sirf apna kaam kiya hai, mein chlathi hoon

Maan holds her back...

Maan: aaise kaise jaa sakthi?

Geet: what?

Maan: hare apna kaam toh karkke jao

Geet: kaisa kaam?

Maan: aaj se tumme hi mera trainer banna haina?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: uss expert akhin bahar chal gaya

Geet: kya? apne ussko bhagadhiya?

Maan: meinne kuch nahi kiya, mein sirf ussko bathaya kit um usse behthar kaam karthi

Geet: kya? babaji, mujhe pehle hi patha tha, aap aaise hi akroge

Geet tries to leave...

Maan: hare, ab mera kya hoga?

Geet: aap na, kudh apna kaam karo

Maan grabs her hand...

Maan: aaisa nahi chalega Ms.Geet, phir mujhe chief se tummare khilaaf shikayat karne padegi

Geet: kay?

Maan: zyada acting mat karo, mujhe bhi patha hai ki tum bhi yahi chahthi ho

Geet: aap kabhi anhi sudhrenge

Maan: sudarna bhi nahi chahatha

Geet: ab kya?

Maan: give me a hand

Geet helps Maan...

This turns out to be masti time for Maan...

Chahe Geet jitna bhi koshish karein Maan se dhoor rehne ki, Maan ko apne dil dene se kudh ko rokh nahi pathi...

Maan bhi itne aasaani se Geet ko apne aap se dhoor nahi jaane dega, kyunki ab Geet Mn ki zaroora bangayi...jadh hi Maan ki zindagi ban jayegi...

Aaise hi Maan ki shrarat continue hotha...

Ghirne ke bahane Geet ke shoulders pe rest kartha...

Kabhi kabhi dard honne ke bahane karkke Geet ko paresha kartha...

Geet toh sach mein dar jaathi ki uss ne koi galthi kardhi...

Aur Geet ko aaise darane mein Maan ko bahut mazaa aatha...

Geet gets very angry...

Ye hi koi mazak hai?

Yahan Geet Maan ko wapas cricket ground mein dekhne ke liye kitna mehnat kar rahi hai aur ya Maan toh hamesha masti karthe rehtha...

Ab Geet ne decide karliya hai ki Maan ko aaise hi karne dethi toh Maan kabhi serious nahi hoga apne career ko leklhe...usska mann abhi Geet ke pyaar mein lag gaya haina? Iss romeo ko wapas apne track pe lekhe jaana padega...

Next day Geet akhele nahi aathi...saath mein company lekhe aathi...

Dekhhte hai ki n ab kya kartha?

Maan is very upset...and he is very angry with Geet...

Geet ko koi aur nahi mila hai kya?

Kitne sundar lady doctors hai yahan?

Issko toh ye Sid hi mila?

Kabab mein haddi?

Aur Maan ne suna hai ki Dr.Sid ladhkiyon ke mamle mein thoda weak hai...

Pehle tamanna, phir Dr.ridima, aura b koi nayi ladhki pari...

Maan apne timepass ke liye yahan ke sisters aur wardboys ke gossips hi suntha haina?

Itne se kush nahi hua aur mere Geet ko bhi patana chahatha?

Geet ko isse dhoor rakhna padega, warna agla no toh Geet ak hi hoga?

Geet ab bahut kush hai...

Geet ab Maan se badla lena chahathi hai...

Mujhe pareshaan karkke maza lethe ho? ab dekho mein kya karthi?

Geet keeps on talking with Dr.sid and neglects Maan...

Maan toh ye kabhi bardaast nahi kar saktha ki koi usski Geet se flirt karein, woh bhi Maan ke samne?

Dr.Sid is surprised to see Geet is masti mood...warna Geet Sid se sirf kaam ki baat karthi...

Ridi has already warned Geet about Sid haina?

Par ab Geet kissi se bhi nahi darthi, Maan usske paas haina?

Pura waqt Maan DD banke beittha, Sid aur Geet ko stare karthe rehtha...

Par koi asar nahi lagtha...

Ye donno toh Maan ko care karthe hi nahi, bas apna kaam mein busy hai...

Maan gets irritated seeing them laugh and chat...

Kaam katam honne ke badh Geet Sid ke peeche hi jaana chahathi hai...

Par Maan Geet ko Sid ke saath jaane kaise dega? Maan ussko rokhtha...

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 16
awesome...
Maan is too much...
OMG romance abhi se chalu hai?
i thought Geet will make him pine for her...
sigh...
dont think any one other than Daadima would support them as of now...
until Maan proves himself Geet's well wishers wont support him...
Sid is a flirt?
cont soon dear...

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