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Posted: 11 years ago
di I just have no words for this story coz di am guaranteeing 1000% ke this story is gonna another EPIC just like my all time EPIC L&H & DL di u just made me cry wid this first update😭 it was so heart wrenching di sachi😭 geet kisi ke liye na chahte howe bhi she has to work as a bar dancer aur di geet is wid tht girl in kolkata aur jahan woh ab kaam ke liye aayi tht person is the nastiest one😔 jo use nandita ke naam se bula raha tha😲 aur di I so want maan to beat this dirty man black & blue ha😔 aur di just coz of her geet had to agree aur phir she wore the most skimpy dress aur came out to the bar aur di hated when some people were trying to touch her aur she was just doing all this for her 😭 aur doosri taraf maan is madly searching for his geet not knowing ke she's has changed her name jiski wajah se use dhoodne main mushkil ho rahi hai lekin he's vowed to himself ke he will get her back to where she belongs tht is wid him phir woh chahe ya na chahešŸ‘šŸ˜Š aur di then he drifted to the past where he for the first time met her aur tht too in college when she came wid her frnd pari aur coz of pari aur her parents geet got admission in one of the best aur richest colleges in india aur pari was her BFF tht time geet was crying coz her dupatta got torn in pari's car aur seeing geet's tears pari was broken too but promised her ke she will get the same dupatta aur phir yahan tak kaha ke agar tu phir royi to I'll die aur hearing tht geet got angry but tht was the time maan fell in love wid her 😳 lekin di jab he came to present he was wild thinking abt pari😲 aur di why do I feel ke geet ke dur jaane main pari ka haath hai😲 par di ur pagal baby dying for the next update di jaldi se dena coz after this first update my mind is just filled wid my this story di😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional heart winching update.. te way geet searching for job and te way she got one as bar dancer and te way she wants to take tat job coz for her was lovely emotional.. te way geet felt disgust seeing te place and te way mr.roy taking advantage of her condition making her to dance in his tunes was lovely heart winching.. te way my maan searching his geet and his pain and guilty thinking he te one push her to such state was lovely emotional... very emotional starting. i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
geet struggling for job but atlast got it
maan thinking about past
in past geet looks so naive and innocent
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... who is the other person????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sounds different from other stories of yours. Looking forward to it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
So she is doing all these for her baby!!
it was so heart wrenching.. and seems like her Best friend Pari too had hands on this state of hers..
Y is maan hiding behind the scene? I hope he finds her soon!!
Gr8 start yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago

am all ears and eyes
waiting for this one to unfold
quite an interesting start
waiting for more
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
GEET IS IN TROUBLE AND MR ROY KNOWS IT
THAT IS WHY HE IS TAKING ADVANTAGE OF HER
POOR GEET
BUT WHO IS SHE WORRIED FOR

MAAN IS SEARCHING DESPERATELY FOR GEET BUT IS UNABLE TO FIND HER


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Posted: 11 years ago

its true that there are a lot of basta**s like roy in the world who wants to take advantage of girls like geet.feeling very sad that geet is doing all this against her will for money.hope maan finds her soon.
thx for the update,loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooww...

tht was awesome start...there is a secret past...and m will be waiting for tht past to be revealed...i think geet has a baby for whom she is ready to do anything...

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