Wired Hearts (1) - Page 78

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 8 - so geet parents were died a year ago ...glad that now anaya is also with her for the support alongwith raya & rounaq...

what happened to them...?

thats why she left her place and came back to delhi...?

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 9 - so geet's parents were died in car accident and thats why she has fear of driving cars...

loved the cute family of ayush - anaya..

new tie binding bet ayush & geet which could not happen back in collage ...life teaches us the imp of relations which now ayush has learned...

we can meet maan after 3 parts...no problem...itna to suspense banta hai

cont soon

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Lovely updates 😊 Anaya has a very cute family. Ayush so senti and emotional 😛 soo sweet of him.
So sad to know abt geets parents 😭

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

firstly...i dint tell u how good those names sound... ❤️ Yana - A- 'naya'

and Shay- Ay-u-sh!!

i loved it 👍🏼

and the dinner... pleasant and ... a promise...and lifetime adoration and love!!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Happy that the story is back again, that too within a short time. I don't comment much nowadays. But I love your writing, and this story (almost the same thing).
Always looking forward...

Originally posted by: -Orchid-

part 8
very sad n emotinal part..
awww poor geet..she lost her parents
n now she s alon ..feeling so bad for her

part 9

awesome update...
Geet is longing for family..loved ayush n her bonding
waiting for next..continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki

wow nice update diii..but where is maan?...missing him a lot diii

Originally posted by: Onir

Life is a Cycle: 👏

A very short update ... much shorter than IOYSM... yet they have their own essence and depth.
I know. When I first started writing such short chapters, I was surprised by how long IOYSM's were. 😆

Tell you something Twinnie ... your writing has undergone a subtle and mature transformation. You've grown in your expressions as well as words. The ability to bring out emotions as well as situations in just few words is too good. The short chapters have been quite interesting and intriguing. 👏

Thank you, twinnie! But I'll tell you what. Short chapters have a short life. As soon as Maan enters, they're going to be long and I am unable to help that. I guess then I'll go back to where I was when I was writing IOYSM. 😆

This chapter 8 was a emotional one. The revelation of her parents being no longer alive was something that I had guessed and had a mild inkling about... yet while reading it felt sad for Geet.

I would have assumed most readers to guess it before it was revealed but only some did.

Glad she could pour out her emotions and pain she's been carrying within for a year being just a daughter mourning for the loss of her beloved parents. Sometimes an outlet is needed and friends can be shoulder you can lean on knowing that there won't be any judgement or wanting to hold back with a complete support throughout.

Exactly! Sometimes, we need a break from being the responsible ones and just let go of everything we're holding in us. That is where friends are the biggest shoulder to lean on.

Loved Anaya's words to her. Indeed Life is a cycle... and hoping Geet's cycle gets her complete circle 😉

Sure will! 😳

Love you ❤️ and 🤗

Love you too! 🤗

Originally posted by: 6977500

awesome update loved ayush n her bonding 😊 missing maan 😕

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 9: Binding tie 😉 hayee mast title...

Credit to Apa with all due respect! 😃

What a cutie chotu sweet family. 😳 Flirty, easy going, ever smiling Ayush now is a Dad... and what a proud and caring father he is. 👏 I loved the way he came to examine his Kid for injuries ... and that scene where both Anaya and Ayush hand's were on Shay comforting him ... both enclosed in a cocoon of their own love bubble... Loved that whole scene. Geet being a witness to it was bound to make her feel pride and longing within. I loved that longing in her... sort of you know a squeeze to self.

That scene was meant to show what you've said, the family that Ayush and Anaya were with their kids...

Something I noticed was you were trying to make the moderate surroundings to be there for AA... but even after mentioning it you showed happy and satisfied they are in their family life now. How they as a couple have the basic essence of love and friendship in them but still have matured 👏

After all, what most matters is love and friendship and they can make a shack a home, and the absence of them can turn a mansion to a cold, lonely place.

Ayush 😃 He's a sweetheart. The way he handled Geet while talking about the death of her parents and also comforting her. I remember in of the updates of IOYSM how he mentioned about a sibling relation with Geet... and this update he just confirmed it. Loved it.

So you remember where the brother sister thing started from. 😃

So none of them are mentioning about the person who actually bound all their ties... 😉 Interesting Nobody wants to deal with it as of now I guess...

I am sure they won't have any option when his highness is right there in front of them. 😆

Waiting for chapter 10

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