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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -nee-

off to read this FF!!


Welcome to the story! I hope you enjoy reading it! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

😭Rulane ki kasam khayi hai kya😲

So sweet of Ayush. When you live so far away as I do from family, it is people like this who carry you in your worst of days. I too have someone like this in my life and you made me cry..
Good for Geet to feel the love and bonds of the family enclose her.
There is no peace than loving a child when you are hurting. I am sure the twins will be the balm she needs to soothe her. Unconditional love is like that.
Lovely writing as always.
I get swept up in your words..
Thanks for updating Mari


Aww! Sorry! I can't help it. *especially with the next chapter*

I am really happy that you can relate to the story in some way and that there is still a hint of that realistic touch somewhere. 😳

Thanks, Avi! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

lovely

bhi bhi no maan


Thank you! Just like I said, Maan will be there soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prema_ks

where are you hiding Maan? Eagerly waiting for their milan


Ahh! Wish I could hide him! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Le me start by saying, I very much like the name of the chapter It's the best yet😉

Credit goes to you for it. 😃
Oh! Mr. Vyan is chivalrous as a knight, along with being a barrel of laughs, isn't he?
While, "He- Who- Must- Not- Be Named" is still MIA.😔
Nobody noticed Vyan's chivalry. Yet. 😆
And the-one-who-must-not-be-named, namely Maan, is coming and will sweep (I seriously hope!) everyone off the feet! 😳
Aww!! Ayush the proud papa is so adorable. 😆

The whole family was darned cute. Especially YaSh(Yana-Shay😆).
I could see Geet being happy for them, but she can't be a part of that magic circle. But a little bit of envy is only valid on her part. Mind you it's not jealousy but a small pinch in the heart that says I'm so happy for them but if only...
That is exactly what I wanted to show: the moment when you're happy for them but you can't help but envy them a bit...
Now, waiting for the upcoming most exciting event😃
Soon to come!
Yet another awesome cap in your literary cap Mayyo. You are just getting better and better.
I loved it❤️
Thank you, Apa! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Erm.. Thanks, I think?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Such a beautiful update. Dinner with Anaya, Ayush and the kids was really nice with Geet seeing just how much her friends have adapted to their roles as parents yet their thier love for each other remains strong as ever. Absolutely loved when Ayush told Geet her considers her as a sister and asks for the opportunity to fulfil the role of her brother. Fantastic job and looking forward to what is in store next.


Thank you! It makes me really happy to know you're enjoying it so far! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Yupiee!! Maan is cuming in nxt 3 chptrs... :) i cant wait to knw abt him nw... & i fell in luv wid ayush once again wen he tried to be geet's support as a brother... & yana & shay r cutie pies & so r der proud parents... Bt i have a question y maan's discussion is being avoided...?? I mean i knw ki geet-maan lst encountr wasnt pleasant & al & anaya-ayush must had knwn abt it bt still y... It wasnt lyk he did sumthng wrong he jst xpresd his feelings 4 geet & she rejectd it so, y he is lyk taboo even wid g she dint wantd to talk abt maan...
Waise di where r u 4rm i mean india or abroad...??

Prati


Prati, you said it yourself in the bolded part why Maan wasn't being mentioned yet. Nobody really knows right now how Geet would take to talking about him and she doesn't talk about him since she still remembers how she parted with him. He had not done anything wrong by expressing his feelings but you have to understand Geet. She was a strong yet sensitive girl. Do you think she would have been able to forgive herself for breaking a heart like that? Couldn't it be her guilt which makes her try to avoid Maan and anything about him?

I am glad you liked Anaya and Ayush's family. 😊

I am not from India.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
awesome dear...
nice...
Ayush is still the same sweet guy...
cant believe Ayush and Ananya have come to this stage...
lovely...
cont soon dear...


Thank you!

Time changes everything doesn't it? It's just us who refuse to accept it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Wonderful update !!

geet met with ayush, shay & yana ..

so geet's parent died in car accident ..that's y she is nt comfortable with car & denied when G asked her to buy one ..

aww tht was so sweet of ayush ..nw geet got one brother's shoulder to cry in ayush ..


Thank you!

Geet's reluctance to drive is deeper than just that. It will be shown in the next chapter.

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