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docgurti

@docgurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

u hve beautifully penned down geet's emotions...the darkness which surrounds her...

throughout the update i had tears in my eyes ...

a brilliant update

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Part 9

lovvvly update...beautifully written...loved the family picture...wonder why she is thankful that none spoke about the 'other' important person in the group...hope the reason is not something that i missed coz of not reading the prequel...final part brought tears in my eyes too loveelyyy one,...

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Susegad

@Susegad

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

You had me at the first five lines. I knew what was coming and I was right..

What a chapter. There is not much I can say about it, except for the emotional power punch it packs.

Guilt is an emotion that feeds on itself. You keep replaying the scenario in your mind over and over again and the guilt just keeps growing as time passes. It literally cripples a person's life.

I could feel the unimaginable pain and guilt Geet is going through. It felt like she is literally suffocating on it.

Raya was awesome in this chapter.

But I am wondering who will help Geet come out of this state of mind and how?

What a chapter Mayyo. I was just taking a break and decided to log in. I started reading the chapter and my heart literally sank to my stomach.

Hats off Mayyo for pulling off this awesome chapter.👏

P.S Currently our stories are running on the parallel tracks of accidents and guilt. You will know what I mean when you read the next chapter of BT.

I only hope I can pack half the emotional punch that you have packed in this one.😃

Thanks Mayyo for writing such an awesome story. It gripped me since the first chapter and it has never let go.

Loved it.😃

PPS.Could you have chosen any better title, its sadly perfect.

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: mayyo

Naan must be available at most eateries in the city. 😆
Maan, however, is coming in soon.

🤣

I was cracking up at this one. It is that damned auto correct. Every time I typed Maan on the Ipad, it would autoc orrect it to Naan. The first time it did that it was hilarious, but it got irritating soon enough😔

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: mayyo

Haaye Allah! Mujhe maar diya toh Maan bilkul nahin aayega! 😆

Exactly Sheen. Agar Ghalib-e - Mayyo ko maar diya jaaye to ghazal- e- Maan kaun likhega.😉😆

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: mayyo

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: Susegad

🤣
I was cracking up at this one. It is that damned auto correct. Every time I typed Maan on the Ipad, it would autoc orrect it to Naan. The first time it did that it was hilarious, but it got irritating soon enough😔

Oh it still is hilarious to me. Plus, my iPod has now added "my" words to the dictionary and they are now suggestions given to me. 😆 Of course, when I want to type "feet" and it autocorrects to "Geet" then it annoys.

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: Susegad

Exactly Sheen. Agar Ghalib-e - Mayyo ko maar diya jaaye to ghazal- e- Maan kaun likhega.😉😆

Ghazal-e-Maan? 😆
Chalo ye toh achha hai mere liye. Isi ko shield bana ke use kar sakti hoon jaan bachane ke liye! 😆

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: Susegad
Literally? Oh wow!! Now just can't wait for Maan's entry. Mayyo you are a tease. You are just killing me with such statements.

Err.. Your reaction made me wonder what if it doesn't happen? 🤔

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Sad, heart wrenching, emotional Update... The Most horrible geel in life is what Geet is going through, that she hurt her lovedones Not only hurt but Killed them ... God
Loved each every Line you wrote in this Part...
Amazingly written...