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Infinity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

superb teaser

sorry like not working

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Note , please read and give suggestion waiting for your reply

Hi every body i want discuss with you all something regarding my work ,

Adoore sapane------ i get reply that make maaneet marry but i think it is too early , but i don't want to make sad you also so tell me can i took leep or you want enjoy this geet , nave geet till baby come , or make losse baby and make her mature... waiting for comment

i update one ff today , and i confused between Life and Journey , so give me suggestion for that also

Journey ... season two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101416689

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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

u give geet like this..n if geet lost her bbaby maan will be worrried

the way u potrayed maaan n his paris relation if geet losses pari he will be left in sorrow..so with geet n pari give the way u thought..

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: vrinda22
u give geet like this..n if geet lost her bbaby maan will be worrried
the way u potrayed maaan n his paris relation if geet losses pari he will be left in sorrow..so with geet n pari give the way u thought..

thanks for advice 😊

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

adhoore sapne...no miscarriage plz...i hate it...kya prblm kiye bachche ne...bachche ko ane do...magar abhi se thoda thoda karke geet k mann mein maan k liye feelings bhi ane do...usse maan ki pyar k ehsaas ho...phir leap de dena...maan bhi bahut bada admi baan jaye...its my thinking...atlast its upto u...u r d writer...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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jitupatole5

@jitupatole5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

plz itni jaldi leep mat lena.we realy want to enjoy this nave geet, after some time she lost her baby accidently and her naviness too.she became like stone,lifeless.then maan' efforts to make her happy and

mature.

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preet.harman

@preet.harman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

hello dear u r doing great job

amazing updates

and for suggestion i agree with love2_soma

will be waiting for next

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Teaser

Dhadkan Do dilo ki

maan just froze in his place , he just put his hand on his lips he feeling ...

till maan stop drunkan geet , geet just went in bathroom , she don't closed door and running water sound come from bathroom it is more than 10 Minuit geet don't came outside

with thudding heart he entered in bathroom there geet standing under shower in maan track and white shirt , which looking so transparent
maan just mummer , save me geet ke babji , beta maan aj tumahri izzat khatre main hain

just than geet start to sing and dance on

Kaate Nahi Katate Ye Din Ye Raat
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hoon I Love You

Koi Nahi Bas Tum Ho Saath
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehti Hoon I Love You

geet just come near maan and put hand on his heart

Kaisi Hava Hai
Dhuli Dhuli
Aaj Fiza Hain
Khili Khili
Saara Nazaara
Naya Naya
Dil Ne Pukaara
Piya Piya
Tumne Jo Li Angdaai Hai Phir Baat Vahi Yaad Aayi Hai
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hoon I Love You

Mahaka Mahaka
Tera Badan
Bahaka Bahaka
Mera Ye Man
Chhalaka Chhalaka
Roop Tera
Halka Halka
Nasha Mera
Jab A Hi Gai Main Paas Tere Kah Doon Jo Dil Mein Hai Mere
Lo Aaj Main Kehti Hoon I Love U

maan just controlling his feeling and desier and just geet hug him so hard there body touching in every perfect way , maan hand just aching to took her in hug and crush her love her but...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Life of geet

maaneet try to behave normal in front of vicky ...
vicky got to know somthing big happen between them ,maan pale face and geet crushed sarri and swallon lips telling another story he saw some pain in maan eyes

vicky first get angry with thought that maan force on geet ... but he shoo his thought , he say to himself he should not judge maan bro like this he trust his bro , and he don't saw re-grate in geet eyes so...

next morning Vicky went geet room , and ask without looking to her eyes , geet think me your friend and tell me can maan bro force you last night ...

geet just turn to otherside in shyness and say in slow voice , no vicky ,
he is first man who touch me and ... i start get past image when dev abuse me and because of that i got tear in my eyes and i think maan sir mistook as ...

geet in backside of KM dancing on song

Rang bavarya swapnanna.. saanga re saanga

kund kaliyanna velina.. saanga re saanga

he dhyaas othi kase.. he rang othi kunache

ka sang vedya mana.. mala bhaan nahi jagache

mala ved lagale premache

premache.. premache

to colorful drems tell that
to beautiful bud/kali tell that
|this desire on lips ,this color of whom on lips
why, tell me mad mind , why i don't have sense of true world

i got mad in love
i got mad in love

in love in love

maan other side ,with painful voice talking to himself ... what you done with geet , he just closed his eyes in pain

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago