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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!!!
felt so emotional listiening to maan
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome & lovely part.loved adi and maan bounding geet ok wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
finally maan's prayer got listen n geet is all ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update happy pari geet fine loved maans care lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
awesome...
Geet and baby are fine...
cont soon dear...

PS - edit ur title dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Do not store dream on your eyes
they may roll down with tears
Store them in UR heart
Each heart bit will
inspire you to full fill them
Good morning

have a nice day




this part specially for you
tanvi04 now you all enjoy geet new found ...




Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Part 12

there geet free from all machine and closed eyes laying on bed , maan heart start to bit loudly , like geet heard that she just open her eyes , and when she saw maan just open her hand and called maanjiii, maan just went to near geet and geet just hug maan and say where are you maanji wo waha tha maanji ,wo rat ko or muje mar dega maanji main uski awaz suni maanji...



maan just hug her back but carefully he don't want to hurt his pari , he just want to hide her and pari from this cruel world he just say with choke voice till I am hear nobody I mean nobody harm you geet so don't worry , I am with you always so don't worry , you want be a brave girl or cry girl geet , geet just nodded her head and say Brave girl , maan say than you have to win this fear of monster na , if you will scare he(monster) scare you more so don't get scare , me ,daidima , with you always geet ,

geet come out from maan hug and geet replied yes yes and nakul kaaka , kaki , rajji , and your Rat also with me no , she say with baby face , maan want scold her for word rat but control himself , and say yes all are with you , Maanji ,hear is so much smell of medicine I want to go house please ... but wo wo maan smile on her face , she making so many faces , he mummer hear she back MY emotions ki dukan ,

maan get her unsaid word and maan just put hand on geet tummy and say don't worry pari and pari ki mumma already i hit that monster , he never ever touch you and your mumma don't worry , geet got big smile on her face and her eyes winded like boll , she want jump in joy but next moment her face turn pale in pain and she moan ahhh, Rat ,baby just kick with maan touch , geet moan in pain rat, kudana band karo , rat stop your jumping it hurt me



maan feels so proud and happy that his pari response his touch but geet word rad he cant hold himself maan just roll his eyes and say Don't called her Rat geet , or i will i will ...

geet just hit on his shoulder and say or what shall you do ...

maan say I will ask doctor to give you BIG wala Sui /injection ...

geet make O shape mouth she want to hit maan but loss her balance maan just hold her with her waist , because he have hand on her tummy and in that processes his long finger just brush near her blossom ,geet got shock with this touch ,



she first time feel different touch from maan , she feeling like not one but so many butterfly flying in her tummy , poor soul get confused with this she crib to her babaji in mind kya babji ek rat kam thi abhi apane butterfly bhi tummy main la diye ...main dadi se puch kya , that one more rat come in my tummy



hear outside of that room one soul in shock and other in happiness standing there just than adi with shocking voice ask dadima please pinch me , he have so shock expression on his face like he saw magic and naughty dadi just obey him and she pinch adi really hard adi yell in pain dadima , pinch like dadi not like msk but really i looking dream or reality , dadi with big smile just wink him

hear maan get confused with her changing emotions and he just shook his head and say ,she never change , he make her lie on bed and put cover on her and just than geet eyes went to maan feet and she gasp in horror and say Maanji , blood , maan shut his eyes , he don't want to this notice by geet or dadi , but now


geet again sit on bed and took maan feet on her hand , when she saw so much injury in his leg , tear start to flow from her beautiful eyes , but not sin-gal word come from her chocked mouth ,she just somehow called dadima call doctor call doctor , just than dadi come inside with adi , dadi want to ask reason , but maan nodded in no , dadi get his unsaid word , watching adi geet hold maan hand tightly in fear ,


her past cant help her , maan get her and say in soft voice , geet don't get scare he is Friend , my friend Adi , he cant harm you , he cant even harm a small ant also ... adi make face on maan comment , looking adi funny face geet also give smile to him , adi just say hello to her , she just nodded her head , but she again crib to dadi and say dadi see , what happen to his leg ,just than doc come for geet checkup , but geet refused and say first look to maanji treat him than her checkup , maan want to protest but glare from geet , dadi and adi , he don't say anything ...

doc treat maan injury and give some medicine to him and geet lesion all this like good student , when doc clean maan injury before maan geet hissed in pain , all start laugh with her reaction but she make such baby angry face maan glare to all ,



adi mummer in dadi ear yaar lo He came In Msk mode , dadi giggle on adi comment , doc say adi and maan to wait outside she want to check up geet , adi hold maan shoulder , maan limping at time of walking , geet eyes again filed with tear , doc consoled her that in 2/3 days that injury heels so don't worry ,

doc say to daima I think she and baby is good you can took her home but please increased her diet she have to gain some weight .dadi nooded to doc and pick on geet forehead ...just than maan knock on door he want hear doc instruction , doc smile on him and say mr maan , i say all to dadi so dadi tell you all , and don't worry , geet and baby are good so don't worry

all went to dadi house where nakul wife took aarti of maan and geet , after watching maan injury both have tear in their eyes ,all come and sit in hall , geet now little bit comfortable with adi , just than adi took out a chocolate from his pocket and offer to geet , geet get confused took or not but chocolate watering her mouth ... she just grab from his hand and start to eat with such hurry , all are smile on her and cursing that monster who make this innocent and nave girl life hell , adi got some tear in his eyes , he just went from there ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



Geet is so innocent yaar...

how can those monsters do these crimes with her...

Geet is finding Maan's touch very soothing...loved how both giving solace to each other's heart and soul...

Geet returned home...she is alright now...Adi also become so emotional knowing Geet's condition and her story...

very emotional update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god geet and maan are safe😃

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