MG Adoore Sapane part 25,26,27 on 133,143 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update..👏 cute pics😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
nice part...
good Maan beat that swine...
the baby is calling him Papa in Maan's conscience...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 11


tum bin kya hai jeena
kya hai jeena
tum bin kya hai jeena

Now that girl have smile on face and she say yes maa i am with you , papa with you don't scare maa wake up , we will teach good lesion to that monster , you just wake up for me , for my papa please ma , if you don't wake up than we both went farrr away from you maa , that baby have tear in her eyes , baby girl just took maan hand in her hand and start to walk far away from geet , and geet just wake up with loud scram nooo stop maanji , stop rat stoppp...

maan just walking on fire but it don't give any pain to him his mind stop on geet and baby , he just want there well being , nothing els , his leges start burn with his walking but he is not ready to stop , he start to remind his and geet moment that are blissful moment of his whole life , he cant think of life without geet and his pari

tum bin kya hai jeena
kya hai jeena
tum bin kya hai jeena

tum bin jiya jaye kaise
kaise jiya jaye tum bin
sadiyon se lambi hai ratein
sadiyon se lambe huye din
aa jao lautkar tum
ye dil keh raha hai
aa jao lautkar tum
ye dil keh raha ha

he cant imagine his life without geet and pari ,he cant everybody watching him ,filed pity for him , this few hours look like ages for him , he remind how he sale his painting and shop for baby , tear start to run from maan eyes , his heart pain came out with tear , he feel aitch on his heart , he just pray to god don't snatch my new life from me please , I cant live without them please god , I couldn't bear this pain please god , give me back my life please

geet you have to come back please geet , pari , he again start remind his life with his so called parent that loneliness , he just scare with mare thought of that life He cant handle tanhai again in his life , he want happiness in his life but ...



phir shamein tanhai jagi
phir yaad tum aa rahe ho
phir jaa niklne lagi hai
phir mujhko tadpa rahe ho
phir mujhko tadpa rahe ho
is dil mein yadon ke mele hai
tum bin bahot hum akele hai

aa jao lautkar tum
ye dil keh raha hai
aa jao lautkar tum
ye dil keh raha hai

he just start to think how he dream about his pari , and how his dream brake in pieces , within some second how geet lost her conscious that fear on geet eyes , geet face , which give so much pain to maan ... he just hissed geet don't scare please it kill me I cant look you like this please , your pain , your fear killing me geet , I feel , like my own breath , life is tortured for me , please pari come back pari

,after some time someone push him ,maan first get frustrated with push , who push him , but next moment he have smile on face and he just hug that person , that is none other than adi , yes maan one and only friend , who know maan inside and outside , maan just hug adi and cried out maan just hug Adi


thanks for coming ,please help me i want to save her , please help me adi , els I will die , you know how dark is my life , adi please I don't want to go back in that dark life please , adi do something mummer maan


adi every time , you say me to live my life with happiness , and when I got some happiness in my life , look adi i lost that happiness , you know it confirmed today that , i am most unlucky man in world , every happiness just pass from me , it went away from me , please , Adi I also want happiness in my life please , help me please , maan just pleading adi


Adi they become light , hope of my dark and empty life , I don't want to lose them please adi , maan just hug adi and cried out please adi you are my only friend na please , I want my pari back , I want geet please , do something please , this pain killing me , adi please save me adi , I will die , I will die maan sob in adi hug b

tear start to come from adi eyes with maan broken state , maan have several injury in his leg , blood coming from it , and fear and pain of maan face , adi just want eras that pain , he truly want to see maan happy in his life , bu don't why destiny always playing with his friend maan , so called Khurana Hair , with parent an orphan , ... ma pita hoke bhi anath ...

just than adi phone start to ring , adi took maan near beach and attend called it is from dadi , with hearing dadi adi got smile on face he just say we are coming we are coming , adi just put his hand on maan shoulder and say , maan god hear your pray come on , geet get her conscience , she calling you maan

maan world stop for second he cant trust on adi word , adi just shake him and say again get up maan she is calling you get up , maan just stand up but hiss in pain , but he ignore it he is happy that geet calling him , he just walk to car , adi just give him support for walking , with less time both came in geet room

there geet free from all machine and closed eyes laying on bed , maan heart start to bit loudly , like geet heard that she just open her eyes , and when she saw maan just open her hand and called maanjiii, maan just went to near geet and geet just hug maan and say where are you maanji wo waha tha maanji ,wo rat ko or muje mar dega maanji main uski awaz suni maanji...



Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nothing will happen geet when maan is dere...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
adi...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
geet got her consciousness both r fine...
adi a true friend...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
geet calling maanji
maan sob hugging adi
this rat is superb word
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is going thru so much
he is in pain thinking of geet n pari
god listened to his prayers
both are fine now..
oh geet hugged him n complaining to him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow maan you need them
and they need you my man
that was heart breaking seeing him like that
but they are back
both your geet and pari
so calm down please
lekin his feet
oh dear thank god adi came there
the way he broke down in front of adi that was just heart wrenching
cheers for pm

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