VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 20

awsome but confused very much if karan has not done anything then why he is dead so confused right now pls update next part soon clear up all the situation. n why shasha?

Oh My God the real culprit was Karan's dad and karan was doing all this to save his father but karan is also wrong too save his father he killed girls by making them go in front of his father and god had even them punishment giving death to both
And at last breath karan says maan to beware from sasha Kya hua hai???
As mujhe laga now everything is gonna be fine but Ketan taking Sasha's name now I m scared of her Kya Karne wali hai ??
Continue soon dear

whao!
too many revelations!
karan the culprit
amazing part
waiting for more
please continue soon

Me Totally shocked siri...
Oh god sab kuch karan k father ne kiya tha ...karan sirf hypnotize kr k girls ko apne father k pass lata tha...
uff siri bohot dhamake daar update tha ye ...maine tho socha b nai tha aisa b kuch hoga...
but ye karan ne maan ko shasha k baare me warn kyu kiya?????? kahi maaneet ki life me shasha koi problem tho nai create krne wali h na?????

superb part
it was karan's dad...finally karan died
why did he tell maan to stay away from sasha
eagerly waiting for the next part

awsum update

RECAP

Maan comes to the present world still stroking Geet's back.He had a million questions inside his mind but also felt pity hearing Karan's state.His eyes welled up and tears silently poured down from his eyes which was fell over on Geet's face for which she got up to get her love crying.Geet moaned,"Maan!"Maan looked up and her eyes said what is it when he smashed his lips on hers and soon he loved her gently trying to lessen his pain and she surrendered herself understanding his turmoil.

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Before i start the new track,i want to confess something.I was reading crossfire series by Sylvia Day who is writing the 4th book in this series but i have read first three books.There she mentions Eva's past,in that she was abused by her step brother Nathan Barker.I got the idea from there and tried to frame Nathan's character on Karan.From Sylvia i got this idea but some ppl thought i hv copied someone's concept and that was an issue those days but it got settled in its way.So here is the piece of information i want to share with u guys,becoz i dont want to be accused once again.

PART 64

A week has passed since Maan met Karan and he attended his funeral too which was quiet.Maan had still not mentioned abt Karan's warning to Geet.But Geet was once again suspicious seeing his changed behaviour.He chuckled to himself turning the page of his file when he was cornered in his room and he was bombarded with the questions by Geet.He was working from the home only due to Geet's health.He smiled once again seeing her cute pouting face which were pouting becoz he wasnt speaking anything!He was sitting in his outhouse office where his inferiors were doing their work intently.He saw the empty chair of Sasha.His mind is racing thinking abt Karan's warning.For what reason he was saying to stay away from her.She had gone to her native taking one week holiday and hasnt returned yet.

Lunch break was announced and Maan walked towards the mansion to get the most serene and most adorable sight.There sat Geet on the swing and was bending front and pouting cutely.He thought,"What's she doing here?" and then thought,"May be she was enjoying the garden view!"He went near her to listen her cursing programme.For whom she was cursing under her breath.He heard the soft plea to god,"Hey babaji,why u made me so short!Look at me,when i sit back comfortably on the swing then my feet wont touch the ground and when i sit forward then i cant able to sit properly on the swing.U r testing ur child once again!Baby's wish was to sit on the swing,but i cant able to shake it myself!U have become cruel babaji!"

Hearing this Maan burst into laughter and Geet looked up and saw Maan laughing pleasantly for she pouted once again and cursed him under breath.Maan heard that too and he more laughed hearing her pick of words.Geet snapped angrily,"If u dont want to help me then dont laugh at me!"Maan once again burst into laughter and this time she too saw him laughing holding his stomach and she too smiled seeing his cute laugh.When he turned towards her then she made a face and lowered her lashes.He held her chin and said huskily,"Jaan,dont lower ur eyes,these eyes always see me with proud not becoz of complaint!"She stared at his eyes and he asked huskily,"U wish to swing on the swing!"She said excitedly,"Not me but baby!"She rubbed her flat tummy cutely.

Maan lifted her in his arms while she snaked smiling broadly.He sat on the swing and made her sit on his lap and moved his feet which touched the ground easily and pulled and pushed slowly.She saw his feet with widened eyes.He slowly swung the swing when she said,"Faster Maan!"Maan said,"Na na jaan,u feel dizzy!"She said with an enormous trust in her eyes towards him,"Nothing will happen to me when u r present around me!"Maan bent and gave swift chaste kiss to her petal lips.She blushed profusely while he fastened the pace.She hid her face inside his neck and relaxed completely clinging to his rough body.

She closed her eyes feeling solace inside his arms when he kissed her head softly.He too closed his eyes feeling his jaan near his heart.After sometime his stomach grumbled loudly for she snapped open her eyes and immediately looked up to bang her head to his rough chin.She winced in pain cutely rubbed her head for he glared and said,"Careful jaan!Are u hurt?Is it paining?"Immediately she smashed her lips on his to shut him.He groaned and took charge of the kiss.He kissed her passionately till she whimper for breath and at once he released her swollen lips which was already swollen due to his kiss.She blushed profusely but said,"Maan,u r hungry!"He dint answer him but pecked her forehead and spoke,"Dont worry,i will hv lunch!But let me fulfill my both babies wish!"Geet snapped angrily,"Am not a baby Maan!"Maan sweetly said,"Yes u r jaan!"And pecked her lips.She pouted ever so cutely but said,"Maan,go and have some lunch!Am hungry too!"He sighed and immediately lifted her standing in easy pace.She was shocked seeing his comfortableness and snaked her arms around his neck.

He slowly walked towards the dining hall holding her securely.She nodded dismissively seeing her possessive hubby.He gently made her sit and then spoke to Nakul to serve the lunch.Nakul served the lunch and went away leaving them alone.Then Maan lifted her and made to sit on his lap and took the bite and fed her lovingly.Geet said,"Maan,u eat first,then i will eat afterwards!"He said holding her waist tightly,"U r forgetting out daily routine!"He smashed his lips on her taking another bite of food and fed her from his lips.After their lunch she bit his neck harshly.He winced in pain and glared at her.She pouted once again,"What to do?U arouse me like hell and i need to ease my breath so i bit u!"

He chuckled and she pouted once again and she walked towards the room to have an afternoon nap.Maan saw her sleeping peacefully in her room and walked away towards his office.At evening he entered his room to get another adorable view.There sat Geet knitting small sweater for baby.Maan looked her face which has pleasant smile and she was cutely knitting sweater giving her best smile.His lips elevated to the smile and he saw the two needles.He came behind her and immediately hugged her.She was shocked but relaxed seeing him.

Geet said smiling broadly,"Aap aagaye,i will bring black coffee to u!"Maan nodded while she walked past him towards the kitchen and he went to freshen up.He came back rubbing his face and hands when his eyes fell on kroshaw.He took it when she entered holding a tray.She saw him intently seeing the kroshaw and answered,"That's kroshaw,it is used to knit sweater!"He nodded but still he was a bit thoughtful.She handed the coffeeful cup to him and she sat herself beside him in the couch to sip her tea.After sometime he abruptly said,"Jaan,i want to knit sweater for my angel!"Geet was so shocked that she spit the tea which she has sipped from the cup and started coughing.He was shocked with this reaction but rubbed her back in soothing way.After wiping the tea off her lips she kept her another palm on his forehead and asked,"Maan r u ok?"

Maan asked curiously,"Why what happened to me?"Geet said,"U were thinking of knitting sweaters so i asked!"Immediately Maan understood and glared at her.He pouted,"Why?I cant knit sweaters for my angel?"Geet said,"Maan u dont know the patterns and u cant learn it in one day!"Maan said,"I will learn jaan...just u teach me basics!"Geet was abt to protest but he pleaded,"Please jaan,i want to be the part of the work which is done for my angel!"Geet smiled at him more broadly and pecked his lips to relax his mood and nodded yes to him.Geet took the kroshaw and said to tie a knot to one kroshaw to get the thread of rings.Maan did that like her.Then she started teaching knit pattern and then pearl pattern and then at abt 9 he was knitting the pattern sitting beside her cutely.It was fun for him as he was learning new things for his angel.

While knitting the sweater Geet saw his face which was so adorable and soft.He dint had any tension and she smiled broadly.After sometime,Geet asked abruptly,"Maan,why this mansion isnt having any or ur parents pictures?"Maan's hands stiffened and his jaw tightened and he glared at her and spoke,"Dont talk abt it jaan!I dont want to spoil my mood!"Geet insisted,!But Maan,humaara baby ko toh pata chale ki yahi uske dada aur dadi hai!"Maan spoke,"Please Geet...!"But Geet cut across him and spoke,"Please Maan,for our angel's sake tell me where ur parents pictures.He said,"They are dead!Do u understand?Dont ask my any question further!"He took the kroshaw and the wool and walked towards his study.Geet sighed seeing his anger but decided to get to know more abt his parents.

Precap-Same

PART 63

PART 65

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2)If u guys are reading my almost all my FF's then i want to give u another information and that is am transferring those FF's which am getting very less response.I dont want silent readers to be piled up there also and even am not gonna PM these ud's in IF.U can follow me in my blog or else reply me here in my gp after reading my ud's.
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b)I have three SS which Intezaar Zindagi Ka,Dance With Me,Demon's Desire.In these Dance With Me is getting gud response so am gonna type it in IF.
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B)Venomous Desires.
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D)Dance With Me-SS.
E)Enchanted Devil.

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SS's-1)Intezaar Zindagi Ka.2)Demon's Desire.3)Dance With Me.
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