VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 44

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RECAP

Maan immediately nodded no to her and made her sit back in her place and he prepared his favourite pasta there.On that time her mother came and saw the scene with admiration.When he kept his pasta dish on the table and sat to eat then Geet climbed on his lap and said,"U r forgetting our daily routine!"She took the pasta in her mouth and sealed her lips on his rough lips.He groaned and licked her mouth and ate the breakfast as before.Sahana blushed seeing them like that and left them to themselves leaving the kitchen immediately.

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PART 69



Sorry guys wasnt feeling well these days so cant able to give updates of my FFs.Here is the update...enjoy reading and please comment. 😃



Maan's Monologue



Luck...Fortunate...Peace...Love...I never believed this and these words were never in my dictionary.I thought am born to feel the pain.But an angel came into my life as my wife...My wife Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana...i feel proud to say this name and proud to say that she's mine...Mine always!This makes me get hard with desire..makes my stomach grumble as if butterflies r inside...makes my heart skip a beat...makes me crave for her...makes me yearn for her...makes me love her crazily...and i love this sweet torture as it was from my beloved innocent pouty wifey.I love her all tantrums now.

But there was a time when i had despised her..hated her to such an extent that i forced her in my first night with her.Though she dont want me to guilt trip and accuses herself that she was involved too.But still i was dominant on that time.Though she responded for me but i was harsh with her.Yet she brings the carefree smile on my face.I was lucky to get wife like her...strong,witty,innocent,compassionate..forgives anyone if they try to murder her.May be i was destined to her.But i think if she wasnt destined to me then what would happen to my life.I take a trip to my past where am rude,arrogant,selfish man where as she...she's an angel who loved me with all my negativity.

She came into my life mistakenly and got her place in one night.She spoiled me to her sister and those countless women who wanted to pursue me just for my physique and richness.But this angel showed me that love exists and she changed me with love.I looked up to get her lovely face.We have gained and lost so much since she stepped inside my life.Our baby which was the victim of harassment and her ill-health which made me scared to death and her recovery and our love and once again becoming parents.I looked up to get her lovely smiling sleeping face tugged inside my embrace.Her lovely profile is enough to makes me hard and her one tantrum makes me dance head over heels.Yet i love to dance on my head over heels on her orders.She stirs once more and snuggles to my rough body and more nestles her body on my hard frame and my fingers move over her baby bump.Our baby which was snatched by our fate has been cocooned inside her womb.I caress it lovingly and she more nestles on me.She is indeed a goddess beauty.Almond eyes with bright brown eye balls...makes me drown in those deep oceans.She makes me feel cherished.She makes me happy.She loves me with her all might.Long white nose and baby pink lush lips.Her lush lips always makes my skin heated,as if am inside the Hot Air Oven.My skin crawls seeing her lush pink lips.I cant have enough of her.When she entered in my life she only gave happiness,love,strong support and today becoz of her i got my most precious thing...my mother.I love my mother beyond my life and today another person has been add on to that and she's my wife.I can give anything to her.If she asks for freedom then also am ready to give in becoz today what she has given me is priceless and for her wishes i can give my life.

On that time Geet stirred and more snuggled to my chest and i gently patted her head to make her sleep.As i feel her more snuggled i drift to my sleep with my beloved beside me.

Geet's Monologue



I open my eyes and get the most serene scene.There slept my jaan who's sleeping peacefully...today i saw his emotions...i saw an innocent Maan Singh Khurana who hides behind his mother doing mischief.I smile broadly looking at his sleeping profile.He's indeed the most handsome man and he's mine.I love him crazily.But in past he was the rude arrogant man.His anger was the first weapon he would apply to handle the situation but it got vanished into thin air when he listened to my plight...my troubles...how i was tortured by Chachiji and abt Sameera di..her contract with me...and then wiping out that smirk on Vikram's face when i was being tortured...he's my knight in shining armour and he's my shield.We lost everything in our life but i never was troubled by him.Since he got to know that Sameera di was behind all the conspiracy he loved me unconditionally.May be we dint recognise our chemistry but he created the love inside me when i got pregnant of his baby...but when we lost it then he dint blame me...he only blamed himself...from childhood i dint get any love from my loved ones but from him i lived my full life with him...his love...his passion...his craziness for me...his compassionate emotions...everything about him is awe-inspiring...i would always drown inside his ocean of love...i would like to swim always inside his ocean of love...but still i always felt his pain...an unknown pain..his eyes always made realise that though he gets the richness of this world still the pain he was feeling cant be compensated to that richness...but today it got wiped out from his face...from those deep ocean chocolate eyes which had the power to drown me...he got his mother back...and am proud that am the reason of his happiness...i always thought that bua's son will be soft just like bua and it got proven...he's so soft from inside just hard from outside like an coconut...like bua said...sorry!sorry! from today onwards i have to call her as mom as she's my mother-in-law.tomorrow we're going to KM and after 20 yrs for the first time bua am mean mom is setting her foot in that temple...am so happy and waiting for that time to come.

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Sahana entered her home and looked around her.It was the very same when she left the house.

Sahana searched something on every wall but she dint get that when a voice came from her behind,"What u r searching here isnt there as it has been destroyed so many years ago by ur son Sahana!"

Sahana turned to get dadimaa standing crying silently.

Sahana ran towards her and hugged her tight and spoke,"Mom!"

Dadimaa was so happy and she closed her eyes contently feeling her DIL in her arms.After sometime they broke apart to looked up to get both Maaneet were cutely arguing over something.

Sahana admired the couple and asked,"Mom...tell me something...do they behave like this always when they're in home or all the time?"

Dadimaa said,"Actually both r so understandable when it comes the case of each other...but Maan is testing Geet's mood swings...look at his eyes!"

Then Sahana looked towards Maan's eyes which were staring at Geet so lovingly and mischievously that she got to know he was troubling her and was enjoying.While Geet was pouting cutely and was throwing all her tantrums towards Maan who was admiring her lovingly.

Sahana went towards them and asked,"What happened?"

Before Maan would speak Geet started her chatter box,"Mom,i wanted to prepare ur favourite and his favourite but he's saying that he gonna prepare it!How can he...he needs to look after his office now...!"

But before Geet would complete the ground slipped from her feet and she looked around her widening her almond eyes.

Maan was carrying her and he kissed her cheek in front of his mother making her more shocked and blush furiously,"How much u talk mishty?When am saying that everything will be done why r u so tensed?But i loved ur tantrums...u were looking more sexy throwing those cute tantrums...!"

He pecked her cheeks once again making her hide her face inside his neck.He chuckled and Sahana's face widened with broad smile.He walked inside their bedroom while Sahana stared at her lovingly.

Dadimaa came towards her and spoke,"After ur exit,i took care of this house but i never succeeded bringing this playful Maan in my brought up...but Geet fulfilled my all wishes!I was scared seeing little Maan who was so angry,rude and arrogant that what will be his future.But when Geet came into his life everything changed...he became an patient,happy,fun loving man.Am thankful to god for sending Geet in his life!"

Sahana gave an impressive smile.Here Maan entered their room carrying Geet in his arms and gently made her sit on bed and he sat on his knees in front of her.

Geet asked,"What r u doing Maan?U will get hurt!"

She glanced towards his knees.but he kept his long finger on her petal lips.

He said softly,"I want to say something to u!"Geet looked into his eyes as if x-raying his soul while he took her both hands in his hands and kissed her both knuckles.

His eyes became moist and when he looked up then she got panicked and asked,"Maan,why r u crying?"

She tried to free her hand but he held it more tighter and tears rolled down.

Geet came forward to kiss away those tears but her baby bump dint give permission when he spoke,"Listen to me jaan!"

Her eyes already welled up seeing her beloved crying and she cant even wipe that..she whispered huskily,"Maan!"

He closed his eyes for a second and when he opened then his eyes blazed with emotions.

He spoke huskily with immense love,"I wanted to tell u something jaan!"

Geet nodded to proceed.

He spoke guiltily,"Jaan,i lost my mother when i was so little...on that time i craved for my mother's love.Then dadimaa came into my life.She took the charge of my life.She gave me motherly love but i always craved for my mother's love and when i dint get it then i became stone.I searched for her for many years and then came to the conclusion that she's no more.But now i believe in god that he never did bad to me.It was me who became bad...it was me who became rude...it was me who despised him...am lucky to get u and from u to get my mother...!"

He wanted to speak more but she muted him by keeping her finger on his sculpted lips and spoke,"Enough!enough!"

And immediately took his lips.She kissed him with immense love and he responded with the very same.

Precap-Sahana's Monologue


PART 67



Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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yes update soon but will read tommorrow
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Awesome maan is letting his emotions out after a long time waiting ffor next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
maan apne emotions express kr rha h
aur geet bhi
maan geet to bta rha h bt geet sunna hi nhi chahti
wating for nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope u r feeling better! Thanks 4 da emotional fab update! superbly written! Maan shared his past n feelings with Geet! Geet overwhelmed! update soon
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lovely update
maan opening up was awesome
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