Dil Chahta Hai # 2 updated part 14 on pg: 40 ON HOLD note pg 46 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

hehehe honestly yaar I actually luvd it n I m opening this thread aftr every hr wether she hs gvn her more review or nt ... its really really helpful .


she will come at night again aru nearly 10 10:30 may be
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi there, wen is ur exams finishing??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi there, wen is ur exams finishing??


hii...sorry for the long wait...my exams will finish next week but after that i'll be busy with durga puja as m from kolkata so its hugely celebrated here ...at that time i'll be off from IF so will post after puja...once again m extreamly sorry for this much late...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


hii...sorry for the long wait...my exams will finish next week but after that i'll be busy with durga puja as m from kolkata so its hugely celebrated here ...at that time i'll be off from IF so will post after puja...once again m extreamly sorry for this much late...

No prob dear! Understand - studies n other commitments! I am so sorry 4 troubling u 4 updates! Will wait! It will b worth the wait! This is a superb story! Really enjoyed reading it so far! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.


]thank u for telling our mistakss bcz it is really helping and we wl try to overcome our errors as soon as psbl ... n more over u didnt say too much n plzzz gv a detailed cmmnt lyk this on each part n its really helping n motivating to crct as the mistakes we r repeating ... so ur cmmnts means a lt to us ... so plz jitni humari burai kar sakti ho karo humme acha lagega 😛

Wow! Alright! I expected denial, anger and reluctance but not this acceptance. You seem to be a great person, you are taking the criticism the right away! Already 50% work is done if you are mentally ready to improve.

And i will give detailed comment for each part! Wanted to see your reactions to my comments before reading the next chapters so I stopped at first chappy!

Off to read next chappy!

Take care,
Kalpana
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

No prob dear! Understand - studies n other commitments! I am so sorry 4 troubling u 4 updates! Will wait! It will b worth the wait! This is a superb story! Really enjoyed reading it so far! 😊


no you are not bothering us...actually your post made us feel that there is still some reader who is waiting ...even after such a long break...your waiting post really encourage us...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

gappe maring n bhatking 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Wow! Alright! I expected denial, anger and reluctance but not this acceptance. You seem to be a great person, you are taking the criticism the right away! Already 50% work is done if you are mentally ready to improve.

And i will give detailed comment for each part! Wanted to see your reactions to my comments before reading the next chapters so I stopped at first chappy!

Off to read next chappy!

Take care,
Kalpana

thanks kalpana ... y shud I get angry when I m gttng d benefits frm ur review n must say frm ur ystrdy review I did crrct the shortform mistakes whch I ws dng 2dy I crctd it n wrt all in flfrms ... so plz gv ur rvw n srsly luv u fr the detailed reviews u r gonna gv 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


gappe maring n bhatking 😆

hehehe me read mist ud
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

thanks kalpana ... y shud I get angry when I m gttng d benefits frm ur review n must say frm ur ystrdy review I did crrct the shortform mistakes whch I ws dng 2dy I crctd it n wrt all in flfrms ... so plz gv ur rvw n srsly luv u fr the detailed reviews u r gonna gv 😊

Ok! You are way too sweet so I feel you wont be offended if I ask you this! Why did you choose me for reviewing your work? Dona Di, I understand! She knows me! But you dont know me! I am stranger, so why you agreed to listen to my criticism? You guys have got me really curious with your request! Answer only if you want to!

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