Dil Chahta Hai # 2 updated part 14 on pg: 40 ON HOLD note pg 46

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Dona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: arunima.
yahi dat u r hvng sm suprises fr ur rdrs unfolded in ur sleeves

ab surprise kaise raha tune bata diya na 😆

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azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

ab surprise kaise raha tune bata diya na 😆

suprise suprise😛

Edited by arunima. - 10 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: arunima.
yaar usne itne ache se pucha n I cnt cntrl n I really felt ki she is feeling dat she is nagging u by writing so disturb u n etc etc ... dona 4 ger I m gonna start writing frm double speed 😉 but haan n suprise raha na maine yeh thodi btaya tu kya aur kab deni wali hai 😛

😆 ok meri amma

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azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

😛suprise suprise
😆 ok meri amma
[/QUOTE tu free hai to wa par aaja

Edited by arunima. - 10 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

hmmm thodi der me aati hu
yaha sabko good night bol du waise bhi its 1am now

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azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
hmmm thodi der me aati hu
yaha sabko good night bol du waise bhi its 1am now

chalo fir gn bye tc sd

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azaina

@azaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Dona wo wala edit kar jo maine kia

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Kalpana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: arunima.
since nw we r frnds u cn ask any ques dear n I wk def ans ...

Friends? How sweet! Hi! I am Kalpana! My dearest friends call me Kappa (mostly Chavvi16 and spvd) or Ana ( from the time when my username was different) I am also known as BB in Geet forum - BB as in Busy Bee! Not because I am always Busy but because you will never find me just doing one thing. I will always be doing two three works at one time like right now I am watching The Italian Job on TV, commenting on your work, chatting with Dona Di and Chavvi, and reading a FF on another site on House MD!😳 I cannot rest still and I have to be doing more than work at one time! My brain is never happy with one work!😆

I have other nicknames too but these three are the only ones I love! Pick one or call me Kalpana, I dont mind!

Thought I should introduce myself to my new friend!😉

I told dona dat I feel I m nt dng justice with this ff ... as my writing is very immaturish ...I m nt descriptive

I wont call it immature as you understand the nuances of story writing. It is your inexperience which is the problem! You will improve, I am sure of that!

...all in all a vry hpls cs in this writing jonour ...

One question: hpls - is it helpless or hopeless? Sorry! I am not good at understanding short forms!

n its dona effrt n encoragement I started agn ... actually the truth dona is the soul of this ff bcz she has dn a lt 4 dis ff and I really wanted to do this fr dona to cmplt it but nt wid d same mistakes n same loops ...

Good decision! Dont give up! You can do it!

so I asked dona 4 a honest review so dat if nt gud I can keep on improving so dat one day I can feel dat I vapable of dng hustice wid d writing n gv the readers wat I wanna read frm writers in irder wrds fulfill the expectations of reader n fr this I want a prsn who shud tell me the honest review n mostly my mistakes hw bt to repeat them n she suggested u ... dat u r a hard taskmaster

Hard taskmaster?😲😳 Dont know whether to be shocked at the words or actually feel proud!😆

I wont say taskmaster but I am a bit of perfectionist when it comes to writing (like editing each chapter more than 3 times😳) plus I always tell the truth and dont back out from being honest! I will keep mum to not offend a person but never be dishonest! Hey! Just realised! No wonder she chose me! I am perfect for this job!😆 Just kidding!😉

... and must say dona's choice is perfect as we really wrkng on our loop holes ... once agn thanks frm bttm if my heart bcz criticism is alwz ones tchr ... n we were lkng fwd 4 dat ... n ur rvws really hlpd us ... I knw I hv brd ur frm my big boring lect but cant help ab tum hamare gang mei shamil ho gai ho to sunna padega :p

And i am really glad to help you out! Helping out people is something I love to do and especially when someone does not reject my help! So thankful for giving me this chance. I also am learning new things from you!😃

And it was not boring lecture! Kabhi mera bak bak padhna! You will find your bak bak a short story in front of my mega novel!😉😆

Take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Will read the next chappy tomorrow! I have to go to bed soon!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago