THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1101

finally maan n geet talked it all out and solved the misunderstanding.

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1102

Okayyy Aankhon Ki Ghustakhiyaan again 😃 I loved it how u showed that Maan wasn't jealous but hurt 👏 Hurt because of the realisation that Teji noticed such things about Geet in his his glance at her n Maan... But Teji's gonna play cupid n The bachi-kuchi MUs will also b cleared 😃 loved to see Geet-Teji bonding ,his pic at the end was perfect n relatable 😃

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1103

Aankhon ki Ghustakhiyaan loved evry single bit of the chapter 😃 All the emotions, sentiments n love -beautifully portrayed , fell for Maan n Geet once more 😳 Can't point any specific scen but the whole outhouse apartment confession n all the revelation was too good 👏 Maan has caught Dadi 😆 Daarji bhi pakre jane wale hain 😆 Dono gaye 😆

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1104

Falak k chaand taaron k haseen jhurmat k manzar me,
Tere chehre ko takta hun to ye meri mohabbat hai
CID dadi ka nautanki pota 😆 Maan was being so mean to Dadima 😳 I wish Dadi badla len is teasing ka 😆
Maan ki Mishty has toh gone 😳 Fully Fida 😳 😆 Jhalli 😆
Dev's such a sweet guy That love n comfort he offered to Poonam , I loved him there 😳 n a tease also, Naina narax hogai to papad belne par jayenge-considering her shrew love 😉 😆
happie that all turnd outt to b good for Pinky 😃. anyways I couldn't imagine Adi cheating on her 😳
The ending scene must have been a torture to stop-for the readers,at that point -mere lye to available haina 😳

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Aankhon ki Ghustakhiyaan loved evry single bit of the chapter 😃 All the emotions, sentiments n love -beautifully portrayed , fell for Maan n Geet once more 😳 Can't point any specific scene but the whole outhouse apartment confession n all the revelation was too good 👏 Maan has caught Dadi 😆 Daarji bhi pakre jane wale hain 😆 Dono gaye 😆

Kitna lamba chapter tha that I had to divide it into 5 parts😆 so that each part made sense

The song is in the last part.😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1106

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Falak k chaand taaron k haseen jhurmat k manzar me,
Tere chehre ko takta hun to ye meri mohabbat hai
CID dadi ka nautanki pota 😆 Maan was being so mean to Dadima 😳 I wish Dadi badla len is teasing ka 😆
Maan ki Mishty has toh gone 😳 Fully Fida 😳 😆 Jhalli 😆
Dev's such a sweet guy That love n comfort he offered to Poonam , I loved him there 😳 n a tease also, Naina narax hogai to papad belne par jayenge-considering her shrew love 😉 😆
happie that all turnd outt to b good for Pinky 😃. anyways I couldn't imagine Adi cheating on her 😳
The ending scene must have been a torture to stop-for the readers,at that point -mere lye to available haina 😳

Socho aisse aap first time apni nazro se dekhte toh reaction toh yehi hota😆😆

One advantage of reading so late is that you don't have to wait 5 days for the update😃

Shayr Naureen ne sikhaye Maan ko😉

Aap ki entry honewali hai epilogue mein😆

Waha mana nahi kar pavogi kyunki phir story would be khatam😆

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1107

Dreamyyy Avi I need to mention this 😳
Tere chehre k naqoosh aise hain,
Aankh uthaata hun bhatak jata hun,
Teri aankhon se tere honton tak,
Safar itna hai k thak jata hun
Maan k mood swings r driving Geet crazy 😆 Poor Mishty 😳
Dev ko bhi Naina was giving hard time 😆 good k all got settld between the love birds 😳
Coming to others 😳 CID daadi stole the show 😆 Chupi hui Geet ko bhi nhi chhora 😆
Pari-Teji 😃 I expect good 😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1108

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Meri entry Epi me 😳

😃I wanted to do that for the longest time.. only You and Heytal left😃

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1109

part 62 (2)-lol pyaari and her talking 😆.teji and geet scene was heart touching.sach mei aise friends are a gift from god.felt very sad that the love of teji died in a car accident.poor guy hope he finds his happiness soon.

teji pointing out geet's condition is also like a slap to maan, he thought he should be the one looking out.(so true, but maaf kiya)

the best lines in the update-

But loving someone does not come with a manual about what steps to take and for how long. My mom's words echo around my head. Loving someone means taking care of their small wishes, giving them a reason to smile each day, not letting any misunderstandings develop, speaking from your heart and caring for each other always .(very well said)

part 63(3)-i am super happy that all the misunderstandings are cleared.loved maan's confession,it was so pure and heart felt.geet yet again proved her unconditional love by simply forgiving maan.it's true that u have to voice out u r feelings so that they are no misunderstandings and maneet learned this in a hard way.my fav line from the update-

"Yeh na bilkul Suri hai aur mujhe toh Raj pasand hai. Kaun aisse propose karta hai? Na koi gulab, na kuch acche se izhaar kiya hai, na koi ring. Hukum karte rehte hai bas. Geet aisse nahi manegi (go girl power 😉)

part 63(4)-lol the both devils planning to have some fun at dadi's expense was hilarious.

dev is a charmer and he waved his magic around poonam too.i loved the way he made poonam needed and made her day by showing pictures of megha.it's said that kids strengthen a husband and wife relation and megha's pictures did a little of that in chandan and poonam's life.

adi's past was very painful.felt really sorry for him.it's good that pinky is going to be with him from now on.

part 63(5)-as it's pw protected i don't want to reveal anything,but i have to say what a lovely update it was.loved maneet's scenes to the core.u potrayed their feelings very well.

dadi, haiii she is the best 🤗.she is strong,mature and witty at the same time.i just love her.she and her cid skills are just awesome.so our dadi is going to act as a match maker again.looking forward to see the results of that.

part 64(1)-devtara and pari scene was heart touching.jealousy makes a person do things that they never imagine doing if they are in their true sense.here pari is not to be blamed for,she did not intentionally hurt dev and tara. she fell for the words which suraj said.i am glad that finally she is releaved from the guilt.

dadi-what can i say about her.she is a complete package.i salute her.she had gone through her share of hard ships in her life,but she emerged from them with strong determination.she is an inspiration to all the women around her,be it geet or tara and now mithili.the way she explained to maithili was beautifully written.my fav lines are-

Today's woman has to have inner strength. She has to be her own savior. She has to fight her own demons. She needs to know that one is not defined by their marriage or lack of it.(well said)

You are defined by who you are. You don't have to prove anything to anyone out there.(so true)

i am happy that our nakul is back to bother maan when he is in his mishti land.kind a missed this 😆

thx for the updates,loved it

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sneha

@snehaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1110

loll naintara jealous of her own mother 🤣 n dev.. he is such a warm person.. gav strength to poonam
maaneet confrontation is very good clearing all their miss understandings.. atleast now they get to speak a few things frm mouth hahahaa
n pari saying sorry to dev n tara..
n here comes matchmaker dadi in action with pari~teji 🤣