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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan's plan went down the drain once teji came. Samrtie tried to trouble Geet through that Pyaari but as soon as teji came he was soon sent into pool of realizations. I m so happy to see Geet having Teji by her side n promising to clear her doubts regarding Maan's feelings for her. And another happy moment was Maan wasnt jealous but realize the bit differences of relationships and saw the genuine care n concern in Teji's gestures which he thinks he lacks in right now. Loved Geet-Teji's friendship and felt sad too knowing teji has lost his first love in car crash. Hopefully he will find someone, may be Pari? *wink wink* And two pairs of experienced eyes are always looking at Maaneet with great observation skills. I loved when Darji missed Maan in the hustle bustle Geet-Teji created. He has already grown so close to Maan in such a short time.





Again one of the beautiful update so far n sooo long too. Liked how Darji got the awkward situation at ease. And at first i was kinda confused with Geet's behavior once she started lashing out on Maan cos she cleary dint look as if she would actually take this oppurtunity of being alone to confront Maan. But then when both started arguing i could relate to her n she did had valid reason to be angry at him n show it too. He did hurt her by not trusting her n by pushing her rudely with his harsh behavior. But then once he started explaining things n opened his heart like a open book, i could no longer stay angry at him. And here one more revelation happen that Maan has seen Geet in bus station when Adi went to pick Pinky. I remember the phone call b/w Adi n Pinky where both were talking about Maan n his behavior n also how both had went to pick Pinky along with her friend but that time i dint knew that it was Geet who accompanied Pinky. Anyways, i could actually feel different emotions rushing through with Maan's monologue and the whole scene started running in front of eyes n i was totally lost in the beautifully written update. I m glad he accepted his mistake in front of Geet n cleared what doubts he had n Geet being the generous one forgive him accepting her fault too in this. Finally everything has fallen in its place n Maan has guess Dadima being in this too so now its gonna be fun seeing Maaneet teasing Dadima. It feels so awesome to see things sorted out even about the famous letter and at the end the update turned happy n romantic from gloomy and sad. Loved seeing Maan n Geet in each others arms n dreaming about future. And that one scene where they stand in front of mirror looking at their reflections, it reminded me of that scene after Maan's memory loss where he brings Geet to his room n accepts her wholeheartedly and look at the perfect couple they make in mirror. It was one of the beautiful episodes of GHSP after the memory loss track started. And now i cant wait to see how Geet says those 3 magical words or how Maan manages to make her say it. Finally journey of Maaneet officially as a couple has started.





Maan himself looks so happy when he is all in love without any stress or MUs. Him waking up so early just to see his Geet even knowing he would meet her after 3 more hours and then teasing Dadima was so childlike. A naughty Maan was treat to i watch.

And finally a Dev-Tara update, i missed them a lot. Loved Dev n his charms on Poonam n how he tried making her part of his life by making her cook for him n later showing her moments of Megha. And by his one act even Chandan got hope again seeing Poonam opening up to him. And Dev teasing his shrew was cute of him.

And about Pinky i knew it was a MU and glad Ritu herself came to them n their confusions n MUs were cleared. Slowly everything is getting back on place in everybody's life. Sujal too has accepted Adi after knowing about his past.

And Geet is getting bolder, pehle chori chupke taadna n then have wild thoughts running in mind seeing a shirtless Maan woh bhi doing Tai Chi. Bandi kaam se gayi but Maan is no less too, his mere shayaris are doing wonders to her. Hopefully Geet's problem will be sorted about why is she having such ahem ahem thoughts about Maan.






I felt no one was wrong in this. Geet toh definitely not cos even if her physical needs say something else her mind is saying having such thoughts is wrong for society plus she isnt ready for all this and anyways this is the first time Maan went so close to her n she is bound to have confusions n whatever she felt i could very well understand n agree too. Maan is not wrong too, he is dreaming about her since 5 long years n obviously the passion n desire to love her increased every moment and when both have confessed their feelings loving her was the feeling overpowered his senses but i do feel he should have been a little slow in expressing it. Just yesterady they confessed n sorted out the confusions n today if he suddenly starts expressing his needs n cravings so fast, she is bound to be scared simply cos she is not ready mentally and Maan should have may be first see to it that is she ready for his passion n desire n then move forward. Girls like Geet who are too shy n respect n value family and have strong belief n morals would react exactly like this as such things are too sensitive for them n Maan being the experienced one at least in his feelings of being in love should have considered her thoughts as well. M not saying he doesnt value his morals, family n all but i do felt he went in a hurry and should have known her consent in all this.

And this is the reason i love Tara, her maturity speaks in every actions but today it spoke volumes in her talks as well. Loved how she explained Geet calmly n said having such feelings are not wrong n if u are not ready for it mentally just tell him softly n he would understand. Geet just needed her confused mind to be sorted out n Tara was the only one who could have explained it so well like a mother or sister n also a friend. Loved the bond they share. He is obviously not someone who would force her so sharing n talking it out is the only way here.

Maan just needed to think all this in a calm state of mind and when he realized where he went wrong n that realization which he had all by himself just made me admire him. He is man who doesnt express his feelings n thoughts with anyone n so he needed some time alone with himself. Loved how both apologized and him saying 'hamara kamra' to her. This will definitely make her feel of belonging to him already.

But i guess Geet is just not ready to let Maan take it slowly, pehle se hi banda tadap raha hai uppar se donning in a Saree n accidently falling her pallu made him lose his senses yet again. And what followed next was dreamy and seeing Geet herself opening up made me happy. The song did the magic for me perfect timing n kiss initiated by Bambi was something i did a happy dance, Maan toh kaam se gaya. And Dadima what timing, few kisses to from my side. Nobody can fool her n boys in love tohh definitely not. Loved how she caught him n played his game n won too. She is the naughtiest Khuarana among all.

Loved rest of the happenings, Dadima is a darling n she loved everyone equally. Glad to see Megha having her parents blessings n Chandan-Poonam having the chance to bless their daughter as well. Dev-Tara's tom n jerry toh kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti and now even Maaneet had been added to the league. Ek baar pakade jaane ke baad how can Geet even dare to go in Maan's room? But he is MSK n no one takes away something which is totally his. And yippie at Teji taking some interest in Pari, they would make a lovely couple.









So Pari finally got the courage n face Tara n seek for forgiveness and Tara being sweet forgave too n Dev forgave her for Tara. Hope this lesson will teach Pari n she would not believe strangers blindly.

Reading Maithili's POV was giving me so much happiness, she had really suffered a lot in her life cos of the teaching, values n morals she was taughts by her parents. M not saying her parents were wrong but they should have also taught her not to take injustice n abuse of anyone n stand for herself. The more saddening thing was she was educated n talented n yet she let her husband ruled her life just cos he was feeding her n gave her a roof to live under. Had she shown some courage back then she wouldnt have been in KF n trying to commit suicide so many times. Thanks to people like Geet, Megha, Dadima n KF that she healed with time mentally, physically n emotionally. What Dadima told her was actually should have been taught by her own parents, they are to be blamed too for her weak condition. And when she finally started living a happy life, happy in her small world consisting few people why that kamina has to come back? He divorced her then what right he has on her? And *beep* of a man had the guts to raise his hands on her? I so wanna murder him. But i guess uske din bhar gaye hai, he wasnt punished for his deeds so m waiting to see what punishment he going to have.

Enjoyed Maaneet moments, their teasing, nok-jhok, ruthna-manana. For a couple who were so silent all this happenings b/w them is amzing to read. Loved mujhe buddha mil gaya, kitchen romance n then the bedroom moments. Maan ke some of the dreams n fantasies have already got fulfilled baaki ke liye he needs to wait n take it slowly. Awesome update as always.




-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow part! Maan u r being very shamelss nw a dyz ha... Bechari geet,, she s jst askng 4 a rose... Us ki jaan q le rahe ho wid ur killng smirks... Sng selection s best... I lv ds song v much... Killer dialogues ... Typical maaneet nok jhok... nd Nakul- kya galat time pe entry mari yar... Maan nd budha... Hahahaha... Tht was smthng undigestable geet... 'Chaho to chu lo' part was so blushy... Omg ye geet the bambi knws karate... Maan bachke raho bachu wo kuch b kr sakti h... Hahaha... Very nic updt bt sad 4 maithli ths man s back... Urghh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... chapter 63 just 2 cute... There conversation... misunderstanding cleared...
and naughty Maaan...😳

coudnt read for some days... but loved the whole chapter👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
so teji is playing role of match maker between geet and maan
i feel sad by listening about teji he is a true friend to geet
he lost his love ,he is hurt deep down but instead of that he is all jovial to keep others happy
daarji is very strong personality and he can read all the gestures of maan and geet
everything in their life is perfect now
atlast maan tells her everthing,he let his heart out for her
they both confess each other their love and accepts their mistakes too
they both are perfec couple
maan is becoming naughty day by day being a silent lover i dont expect this from him
now that everything is well maan-geets romance is budding and become bolder day by day
maithili is back and her pov is every women story be it new generation or older
whether they are educated or illiterate every women had a story of her own
but why her husband is back all of a sudden,what he wants now
hope she fights this time
i like how dadimaa describe her the funda of life ,she is true in telling all that to her
maan and geet in maans room ,our cid daadi is awesome she caught them red handed
why maan is angry on geet for a little thing
its difficult for every girl to open up suddenly to a man in this way
yes she loves him but then too ,its all about upbringing and values with which we are brought up
anyways thank god their mu is cleared now
and geet expressed herself clearly to maan
dev-tara and maan-geet are cute couples,always fighting and then manoaing
i like the way tara makes understand geet about the love
Edited by suyoha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 63- part 2
first of all bechari pyaari.. 😒
noone noticed her.. poor girl..

sweet bond between geet and teji..
godd geet.. how can she be still confused about Maan's marriage when he clearly said I love you..😆
really needs MSK style manaoing then she can come out of her confusion..😳😆
with teji's entrance Maan realising about ignoring geet and also his responsibility towards her is beautifully written..
and good question by Teji ' who is the gal'😆
maan babu tho gaye kaam se..
have to read next part hwo he is gonna answer this question infront of Darji..😆
lovely update on the whole
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Posted: 11 years ago

chapter 63- part 3
Finally Maan has confessed everything including his MU..
i really got angry when maan questioned geet about not trusting him..
what was he doing from the time he came back just ignoring her and not trusting her..
but then after reading remaining part when he questioned about his letter I understood his POV..
really loved the way Geet understood him and how their bond got stronger and promising eachother for their happiness..
lots of emotions beautifully written..
awesome update..

Edited by kkmouli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 63- part 4
naughty geet..
agar maan ko aise dekhegi toh waise hi khayal ayengi sweetie..😳
but dont worry its not just your mistake.. it all maan's mistake.. he has no right to be super hot..
eager to read romance bhari cute si passionate lovestory..

Im just loving this Dev..
The way he made poonam relax with his ever so charming nature is simply superb..
nd not only that he had given her Megha's pic and clearly showed how much he cares for her and be a son rather than son in law..

finally pinky's MU is also cleared..
so happy now that there are no MUs let between any of the pairs..😃

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the way Pari asked forgiviness is very nice..
she understood her mistake and accepted it..
Not only the one who forgives has huge heart but the one who accepts their mistakes and seek forgiveness have great courage..
Pari had done a great thing..

how easily Tara thought it to be Megha for a second when Pari has called her di..
this shows that how badly she is waiting for her sister..
I hope this DNA matter gets solved soon and Megha unites with her family..

Even I liked Maithili's part..
the way she turned out to be a strong woman rather than a weak vulnerable woman is too good..
the dadima explained her about life and current condition of society is very much true..
must tell you have a very good foresight..
i dont understand why now her good for nothing husband is back..
hope he wont create much trouble for Kabir- Megha..
Poor guys have suffered a lot intheir life..

Awww... Geet baby how can u call Maan Budha??!!!!😲
If he is budha then what will you call a 60 year old..😆
bechari geet phasgayi Maan ki clarification mein of him not being a budha..😆😳

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hehe ... Machchar part was so funny !!!

Maan-Geet

Finally Maan is back with the hope and wish, but all his hopes shattered when he saw Geet in Dev's arm.

He is fighting with himself and the same time confused, and decided to stay away from Geet and hurting her in the process by being so mean and pushing her away.

But still Geet is holding on and thinking that he is upset with her for not attending the farewell party and trying her best to talk to him, but his mistrust broke her heart and she left him giving back his locket.

And finally the bell rings and his misunderstanding is cleared and on his way to HP on mission Dilwale Dulhania le Jayenge <3

I so love their tu tu mein mein .. it is always a treat to read on.

I'm so glad that he confessed the reason behind his mean behavior.

All is fine with their passion and desire at its peak, though Geet was uncertain about her feelings, being naive and innocent it tends to happen, but Tara handled it maturely.
Though Maan misunderstood her but later realized his mistake.

The interrogation scene was so funny, especially the last lines by Dadimaa before exciting his room.


Dev-Tara-Poonam-Chandan

Very nice Dev-Tara moments with them on mission MG, tricking Maan to attend the part by making him Jealous.

Very nice scene between Dev and Poonam.

Love their teasing scene .. so lovely !!!


Brij in on run, and the original will is read along with the truth that their baby is alive. Poonam demanding Chandan to leave her and her daughter alone.

Kabir and Megha told about their relation to Maan and others, and Maan being possessive brother all he could to Kabir but Kabir being self-made man politely denied it.

Tara told about her family to Maan and also about her missing sister.

Maan figured it out the person is Megha.

Chandan-Poonam, slowly they are finding solace in each other. Poonam is actually surprised by the relationship between Poonam and Tara and she is realizing what she has missed it.

Very beautifully emoted the emotions and feelings !!!

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