MG#2- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan/pt29/pg117/th#3added - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

sahi mein kya kam familt se bada hai...family k liyehi toh kam kar raha hai na...phir maan kyun aisa kar raha hai...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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😉

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

maan is real busy aint he
seems like it
damn maneet dont have that much time together these days
i love that line aap bhi meri choice ho
when he says her choice is bad
she sure got him
maan bhi naa so mean he was to her
okay not mean but trying to pull her leg
thats not nice thing to do
but it was funny
damn she is really mad on maan
not that i blame her
maan you better get here and soon


he come in this update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 18

He come and stands beside her, slowly slides his hand around her waist... she smiles sees near to own, but he come late in own brother engagement, she turn the face.

Tani & vicky engagement done peacefully with full of happiness... but in all party geet not talk with maan... she totally ignoring him... he try to talk but she not give chance to him...

Geet got busy with guests...

Vicky : bhai

Maan : hmm

Vicky : bhabhi nhi maani na

Maan : maan jaayengi

Wo jyada der tak mujhse naraaz nhi rh sakti

.

Aur dusri baat usse gussa krna aata hi nhi

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He turn & sees geet not seen anywhere... few seconds ago geet stands in front of him & talking with guest & now where she go... he sees besides , vicky also not here...

He turn other side & sees geet stand in front of him...

Maan : geet tum kb aayi

Geet : bs kuch der phle

Maan mein soch rhi hu

Mujhe gussa krna shik lena chaiye

Maan : geet

Geet : Maan aapko ye sb mjak lag raha hai

Maan : bilkul nhi geet

.

Geet kuch bolo

.

Geet : mere bolne ka koi fayda hai

Krte toh aap whi ho

Jo aapka dil chahta hai

Maan : jhooth

Mein toh whi krta hu

Jo tum chahti ho

Dekho tumhare liye toh jaldi aaya

Geet : bhut bda ehsaan kr diya

Maan : geet tum itna over react kyun kr rhi hu

Geet : shi kaha aapne

Mein react hi kyun kr rhi hu

Jb itne function aapke bina attend kiye hai

Toh ek aur shi

She left...

.

************

Shweta : sb kuch achi tarah se ho gya

Daadimaa : wo toh hai

Maan & geet eyes meet, she turn her gaze...

Maan (think) : thoda sa late kya ho gya

Itna gussa

.

Ab toh smjh nhi aata

Madam kb happy milengi aur kb angry

.

.

.

Kissi ne khi geet se kuch kaha toh nhi

Whi baat khi isse pareshaan kr rhi ho

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IN ROOM

Geet arranging the bed sheet, he try to help her ... but she stop him...

Geet : I manage

Aap change kr lijiye

Waise hi kafi raat ho gyi hai

Aur aapko kal office bhi jaana hai

Maan : geet mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet kissi ne tumse kuch kaha

.

Bolo geet

Geet : nhi asa kuch nhi hai

Maan : meri aankho mein dekh ke bolo

Before both talk go forward, mehak & aryan come inside...

Aryan : mom mujhe aapke pass sona hai

Maan : aap toh aaj daadi ke pass sone wale the

Aryan : ab mann nhi hai

Mujhe mom ke pass sona hai

Maan : aur mehak aapko

Mehak : mujhe bhi mom ke pass sona hai

Aryan : mom mere pass soyengi

Mehak : mere pass

Geet : mom tum dono ke pass soyengi

Maan : mujhe bhi mom ke pass sona hai

.

Aryan : dad aap koi chotte bache ho

Jo aapko mom ke pass sona hai

Waise Daadi so gyi hai

Toh aap kal sona daadi ke pass

Maan : mujhe tumhari mom ke pass sona hai

Aryan : kyun

Wo humari mom hai

Maan : usse phle meri

Geet cut his words in between...

Geet : bs

.

Maan Jaaiye phle change krke aaiye

Maan : hmm

Geet : aur tum dono

Chup chap jaake leto

.

.

Geet lay between mehak & aryan & maan lays mehak side...

Geet : ab so jaayo

Mehak : Mom story sunao na

She starts narrating the story & slept... Maan admiring own sweet family...he hugged mehak & geet ...

**********

Morning...

He wakes & sees no one is here ...then he check time its 8:30 ...

Geet bacho ke sath hongi

.

.

Ek waqt tha subh ki shurat geet ko dekhke hoti thi

.

.

Aaj bhi hoti hai

.

Fir bhi bhut kuch badal gya

#

He sleeping peacefully on stomach hugging pillow... she come & sit near to him ...

Geet : Maan utho

.

Maan

.

Raat ko mujhe nhi sone dete

Subh khud nhi uthte

.

She come near to his face & make fall own wet hair on his face...

.

He turns face other side...

.

Mooh fer liya

Abhi batati hu

.

She bent near his ear; want to scream but his smile stop her...she bent more and kissed on his cheek ...then turn to go...but he pulls her, she fall on top of him...

#

Maan aapki coffee

He held her wrist & said "geet thode der mere pass baitho"

Geet : Maan abhi biklul waqt nhi hai

Bacho ko breakfast krwana hai

Maan : geet wo kar lenge

Geet : maan aap aryan ko nhi jaante

Wo kitna slow khata hai

Usse mujhe hi khilana padenga

Maan : geet

Geet : maan

Aap fatafat nha lijiye

Mein tb tak aapka breakfast ready krti hu

Maan : hmm

#

Maan get ready for office ... she come & give his wallet, watch & handkerchief... he not said any word...

Geet : maan aaj vicky bacho ko school drop kar denga

Maan : hmm

Geet : aap subh kuch baat krna chahte the sayad

Maan : nhi


note :- hey friends

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see this updates too :-


MG FF- Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan - part 7 on page 74 ( 7july) & part 8 on page 84 (13 july)

MG FF- Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani - part 5 on page 71 (13 july)

MG- Kya pyaar karonge mujhse - part 35 on page 60 (15 july)

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
cont vry soon
will be waiting
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
burden of responsibilities bring a lot distance b/w them & it is so common that couples don't even notice this & even if they did, they left it there rather than bridging the gap b/w their partner.
someone b/w them needs to bridge this gap. i hope both maan & geet will soon realize what they are missing amongst their responsibilities
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update! Maaanet have no tym 4 each other bcos of responsibilities. they need to male tym 4 each other! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovly maan want some time with geet n bt alas cn't
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
geet is angry over maan late arrival
both want some thing to each other but diffrence in relation does not open their heart some times maturity is bad for relation thoda pagal pan bhi hona chiya na
hope they will share again their heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely and innocent


but the thing is there is nothing quite interesting in it
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...both are so busy with work that they don't have time for each othet

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