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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurtimuskaan

lovely update. I hv a doubt tht priya is geet only.


thanks dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

confuse karke rakha hai tumne mujhe

ye priya kahin Geet hi to nahin hai
Ekta style me tumen usko ML karwa ke plastic surgery to nahin karwa di
ya phir nye Maan se Geet se pahle se pyarr karne wali koi aur ladki hai jiski Memeory chali gayi hai


di dont confuse

di wait for some time 😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

lovely intersting part😊

maan reject ol the girls
n here priya ridz arman sid
new ppl join
n is geet is priya????
waiting 4 nxt😊


thanks dear

dear u know soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Lovely update dear!!

It was such a sweet part!!..So it was also great to add Sid, Armaan and Riddhima..loved their scene with Priya..and I'm 100% sure that she is Geet..loving this character already..I really hope that Priya and Maan meets together soon..eager to read their scenes as well..please update soon dear and PM me whenever you can!😳😳


thanks dear

i try to pm soon as possible

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Nice update..

Dadi is trying everything, but Maan is rejecting every girl...
why Armaan is asking Priya not to stress her brain/mind..
chalo, Maan aur Priya ke meeting se Priya ke baare mein kuch aur pata chalega..

thanks for the update, and

Belated Happy Birthday !!!



thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Priya & his dad reached delhi... priya feel some satisfaction in

heart, she not getting why ...? She feels she know about delhi...

but how... she never come india...

Priya : dad

Dad : hmm

Priya : Dad

Pata nhi kyun

Asa mahsoos ho raha hai

Mein is jagah ko jaanti hu

Dad : beta

Hum Hindustani khi bhi rahe

Apne desh aake asa hi lagta hai

.

Tum jyada socho mt

Priya : hmm

**********

Both reached hotel ...

Dad : geet tum rest kro

Meri one hour mein conference hai

priya : dad mein yaha akeli kya karungi

Dad : beta tum waha bhi kya karongi

Priya : hm

.

Ok

Dad mein bahar ghum aayu

Dad : tum akeli kaise

Priya : dad please

Dad : ok

Mein reception pe tumhari liye car bol deta hu

Priya : thank you dad

***********

Maan : maahi bs 5 minute aur

Fir dadda pakka aapko shopping pe le jaayenge

Maahi descends from shofa & slowly - slowly come near to him...

She tries to sit on his lap...

Maan : ha bs abhi chl rhe hai

She again try, maan pick her in his arms & make sit on his lap...

Maan : tum dadda ko kaam nhi karne dongi na

She denied...

Maan : acha chalo

Maahi kissed on his cheek...

***********

Priya : driver tum noida city centre chalo

Driver : ok madam

*********

Maan made sit on her driver side seat...this is mahi favorite car... maan specially supposed, designed for maahi

*************

Priya & maan both reached to the mall ... Maan take mahi in kids

section & priya goes towards ladies section...

Maan take all things which she like ... after lot of shopping mahi

tired...

Maahi : dadda ice-ceam

Maan : chalo

**********

Maan get call in mid ...

Maan : maahi bs do minute

Dadda ek baar call complete krle

She nodded.

.

Maan get busy discuusing something important about project on

phone & Maahi sees from far ice cream ...she sees towards

dadda, he is busy... she take steps towards ice- cream counter...

She reached to the counter, but counter height is high then her...

Her happy face turned to sad...

One lady stand near counter, mahi pulls her dupatta... lady bend

to her height...

Lady : aapki mom dad kaha hai

Maahi not said any word, she touched her face...

Lady held her hand & kissed her both palms one by one...

Lady : aap yaha kiske sath aaye ho

Maahi : mum...ma

Lady : kaha hai aapki mumma

Aap mujhe batana

Mein chod deti hu unke pass

Maahi show finger towards her...

Lady not understanding what she pointing...

Lady : aap ice- cream khayengi

She nodded...

Lady : kaunsi

Choco, vanilla, strawberry

Maahi : choco

Lady : ye toh mera bhi favorite hai

Bhaiya

Choco wali ice- cream dena

Lady gives to maahi...

Maahi so happy...

Lady : aapka naam kya hai

Maahi : Maahi

Lady : aap yaha kiske sath aayi ho

Maahi : dadda

Lady : aapke dadda kaha hai

Maahi point towards maan ...

Lady stands & held her one hand & taking towards maan...

In between someone spoiled her dress...

Waiter : madam sorry

Lady : its ok

Maahi aap apne dadda ke pass jaayo

Maahi : na

Lady: maahi

Jaayo

Maahi reached to near maan, lady says bye to her... maahi

denied...

Maan conversation over, he sees towards maahi & see ice-

cream in her hand...

Maan : ye kisne diya aapko

Maan bend to her level & take ice-cream from her hand & throw

in dustbin...

Maahi : mu..ma

Maan sees tears in her eyes...

Maan : maahi ase kissi se kuch nhi leta

Maahi : muma

Maan wipes her tears & kissed her both cheeks...

Maan : maahi mumma yaha hoti toh wo bhi yhi khti

Ase kissi se kuch nhi lete

.

Chlo dada aapko ice-cream dilate hai

Maahi : na

Mumma

Maan picked her in arms & left from here...

*************

Maan tried so much to know why maahi so upset... but first time,

he not getting what maahi want to say.

Maan (think) : geet tum yaha hoti

Toh mujhse better smjh paati

Maahi ko kya takleef hai

Both reached home...

**************

Priya : dad mein hotel puch gyi hu

Aap tension mt lo

Dad : good

Priya : dad aapko ek interesting baat batayu

Dad : hmm

Priya : dad

Aaj mein mall mein maahi se milli

Dad : kaun maahi

Priya : dad ek choti si ladki hai

Bhut hi cute hai

Usse milke mujhe bhut acha laga

.

Pata nhi dad

Uske sath kuch attachment sa laga

Dad : priya bte

Bache hote hi cute aur bhut pyaare hai

Unse attachment ho hi jaati hai

.

Tum ab jaldi se ready ho jaayo

Priya : dad hum khi jaa rhe hai

Dad : ha

Aaj mujhe conference mein ek purana dost mil gya

Aur aaj uski sliver jublie hai

Bs ussi ne invite kiya hai

Priya : ok dad

Aap kb tak aa rhe ho

Dad : beta

Mein yaha se directly waha puch jaayunga

Tum hotel se aa jaana

Priya : dad mein akele

Dad : beta

Mein tumhe address message kr dunga

Tum ready ho jaayo

Priya : ok

***********

Precap : maan & priya meet

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Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
🥳me first is mein bhi
super update
priyanka love this
priya in india meri feeling kha rahi hai k its not priya singhaniya its misty of maan
well going for shoping n mahi meet with priya
n both click echother
priya attached to mahi so was mahi
mahi is upset so toh hogi miss her mumma
waiting for their meet
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update! Priya in India! Is this Geet? Maan takes Mahi shopping! Mahi meets Priya! she buys her ice cream! Maan throws it in the bin! Mahi says mumma bought it! Mahi crying! Maan upset! Priya calls her dad! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
Priya and maahi Meeting superb.waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update
maan , mahi n priya in same mall
mahi n priya come face to face
priya feels attached with mahi

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